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Epitaph

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earth_fae

People may die, but sorrow lives on.

Drama General Potions Under Duress 818 Words 1 Chapter Complete
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The snow fell gently upon the rows of tombstones, blanketing the graves with a fine white dust. There was no breeze in the air to brush the snow away, so the dust patiently sat on the stone for a disturbance to send it on its journey to the ground. If it were not for the falling snow, the cemetery could have looked like a still painting of grey and brown strokes across the canvas of pure white. It was, in a word, peaceful. This was the place where the bodies of those lost in the war against Tom Riddle came to rest for eternity when their souls left Earth. There was, however, one section of the cemetery made special for the brave souls who fought by the side of Harry Potter so they could rest beside him forever with loyalty. There was a great amount of losses from the war, and many were still gripped by the strong hands of grief and sorrow.

By the time the fine dust of snow on the ground and tombstones became a thin blanket, a woman had entered the cemetery gates. The metal hinges gave a quiet squeak from the cold as the woman closed it behind her. The woman held herself proudly as she walked down the snow covered pathway, but in her eyes showed the tremendous sadness that has been tearing at her heart since the end of the war. She stood at the entrance of the cemetery and took a deep breath, fighting the urge to start crying. Becoming aware of the flakes of snow collecting on her head, she pulled the hood of the cloak over her, and tucking a stray brown curl of hair behind her ear, she began to walk toward the war heroes.

As she neared the section of the lost war heroes, her eyes became glazed with unshed tears that were threatening to fall. She stopped at the entrance of the section and pulled out her wand. From thin air, the woman created a bouquet of black roses along with one solitary black rose that looked as if it was dipped in blood. Taking another deep breath, the woman walked into the rows of tombstones, stopping at the very first one.

Harry James Potter

Born 1980

Died 1999

Lost his life defeating Tom Riddle

Beloved hero, husband and friend

The woman closed her eyes and gently tugged out one of the black roses from the bouquet, kissing it and placing it on the top of Harry’s tombstone. The contrast of black on the clean, white snow hurt her eyes a bit, so she turned away from her friend’s monument. Sighing, she stepped back and walked to the next gravestone.

Ginevra Molly Weasley Potter

Born 1981

Died 1999

Lost her life fighting alongside her love, Harry Potter

Beloved hero, daughter, wife, and friend

Again, the woman pulled a black rose from the bouquet, kissed it, and placed it on the cold granite. She cleared her throat trying to get rid of the memories reading the names invoked. She continued on down the row of graves repeating the ritual on the rest of the stones in pained silence.

Ronald Bilius Weasley

Arthur Weasley

Neville Longbottom

Remus John Lupin

Nymphadora Tonks

Alastor Moody

Sirius Black

Rubeus Hagrid

Charles Weasley

The woman placed the last black rose on Charlie’s grave, leaving her with the one red-dipped rose left and one tombstone. She had done her best not to cry over her lost friends, but she gave up that attempt when she reached the last grave. She fell to her knees on the cold, snow-covered ground in front of the granite, tears falling down her pink-stained cheeks.

Severus Snape

Born 1959

Died 1999

Lost his life when shielding his wife from a killing curse

Beloved hero, teacher, and husband

Will continue to love Mrs. Hermione Jane Snape for eternity

And is sorry he could not spend more time with her

The woman wept even more after reading the epitaph as she had done for the past few months she visited the cemetery. The woman lifted the rose to her lips and kissed it just as she did with the other roses, but lingered on it a bit longer. As a tear dropped from her face, she placed the rose on the grave and took her wand out again, pointing it at the stone. A flash of light and a word was added to the epitaph. Hermione dropped her wand in the snow and cradled her face in one hand as she placed her other hand on the life that was growing within her.

Severus Snape

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Beloved hero, teacher, husband, and father


Black rose – symbolizes death; “farewell” (does not exist in nature)

Red rose – symbolizes sincere love, passion, respect; “I love you”


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Latest 25 Reviews for Epitaph

6 Reviews  |  5.0/10 Average

10/10

blackaces924

wow... that's so moving yet sad at the same time. a wonderful piece :)

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nighthawk

So sad. I really had to fight my tears.

0/10

Anijade

not many stories bring tears to my eyes but yours did. Thank you fo giving him a legacy

10/10

BrenaMarie

I read this story originally months ago.  I loved it even though I usually don't read stories where either Severus or Hermione have died.  I recently have lost my grandmother and my father in law, and reading this kinda helped in a way.  I know it's kinda strange but...I just thought I'd let you know and thank you for writing something that touched me.  Thanks Again.  ~Brena

Response from earth_fae (Author of Epitaph)

Wow. I was loss for words when I read this review. I am happy to know you found some kind of comfort in this story. It really touches me to find out that one of my stories have effected someone so. I'm so sorry about your grandmother and father-in-law. I also lost my grandmother a couple years ago, I guess the grief of her loss come up through my story. Its good to write something sad once in a while to get out those feelings. Thank you for letting me know my story has touched your heart.

10/10

sinbad

Very well written, and sad.  Hopefully Hermione will be able to pick up the pieces.

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snapeophile

Heart-wrenching.  Your imagery is beautiful and the piece is very poignant. 

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