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Short Story Her and Him
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Her and Him

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Her and Him

Minstrel Elizabeth

1 Review   |   1 Rating, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

General Short Story 332 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Sometimes we have no idea how important compassion is.

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Minstrel Elizabeth

Member Since 2007  |  4 Stories  |  Favorited by 0  |  21 Reviews Written  |  1 Review Response

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7/10

RachelW

I feel like this sets the scene for what could be a short story, but it's not quite there yet.  I gather the girl staring at the man is a tennant, or daughter of the tennant of the man, but what happens from here?  I could see all sorts of possibilities, but without a little more background information, it's hard.  Why don't they have anywhere else to go?  This all just raises a bunch of questions but gives no answers or even enough information about the situation to draw any real conclusions.  It could be something really interresting with more work, I think. :-)

Response from Minstrel Elizabeth (Author of Her and Him)

Thanks for reviewing :) Actually it wasn't meant to give background or detail, not supposed to answer any question. It's just about how sometimes our subconscious works despite everything else. Just a weird thing I wrote one night. Actually typical for Russian early 20th century literature. :)

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