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Resolving a Misunderstanding

1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

3: III: Albus Reflects

4: IV: More McGonagalls

5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

6: VI: Spero et Expecto

7: VII: Chez Albus

8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

10: X: A Smooth Apparater

11: XI: The Special Project

12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

15: XV: A Success

16: XVI: Preparations

17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

19: XIX: Waiting

20: XX: Hiding

21: XXI: Seeking

22: XXII: Finding

23: XXIII: Escaping

24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

25: XXV: Meeting

26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

32: XXXII: The Attacks

33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

35: XXXV: Hagrid

36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

38: XXXVIII: Requests

39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

40: XL: Horrid Relatives

41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

46: XLVI: More Relatives

47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

50: L: Curious Conversation

51: LI: The Lovely Couple

52: LII: Shall We Dance?

53: LIII: The End of the Party

54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

60: LX: The Magic of Memory

61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

66: LXVI: Many Meetings

67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

69: LXIX: None But the Two

70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

72: LXXII: Not a Date

73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

74: LXXIV: Ever Green

75: LXXV: Collision

76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

77: LXXVII: Impulse

78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

83: LXXXIII: Family Time

84: LXXXIV: Mates

85: LXXXV: Plans

86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

90: XC: A Confidant

91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

95: XCV: Home Again

96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

98: XCVIII: Warding

99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

100: C: Touring Hogwarts

101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

104: CIV: Gifts

105: CV: A Werewolf's End

106: CVI: Reverberations

107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

108: CVIII: In Memoriam

109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

110: CX: Seduction

111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

125: CXXV: Rematch

126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

131: CXXXI: Realising Love

132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

135: CXXXV: A Spree

136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

140: CXL: Sorted

141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!

Resolving a Misunderstanding

MMADfan

954 Reviews   |   954 Ratings, 0 Likes, 108 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 887,445 Words 157 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Armando Dippet Rubeus Hagrid Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Rufus Scrimgeour Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Moaning Myrtle Aragog Bellatrix Lestrange Druella (Rosier) Black Bartimus Crouch Filius Flitwick Horace Slughorn Professor Binns Mr. Ollivander Gellert Grindelwald Nicolas Flamel Cornelius Fudge Professor Kettleburn

Minerva has just finished her first term teaching. A series of misunderstandings leads to an embarrassing moment, injured feelings, regret, growing understanding, then resolution. A Minerva McGonagall fic set in 1957, with forays into the past. More than a Romance; stories within stories. Features Minerva, Albus, and Poppy, with appearances by Slughorn, Grubbly-Plank, Hagrid, Flitwick, Moody, Riddle, Grindelwald, and other canon characters. Not DH-compliant. Disregards DH.
Nineteen Parts.
Most content T-rated, but ratings rise to M and MA for several later chapters. Overall M rating reflects later content.
Pertinent warnings in individual chapter summaries.

Voted First Place, Minerva McGonagall: Legacy Fic, in the HP Fanfiction Fan Poll Awards Spring/Summer 2013.

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Chapters (141)

Chapter 1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

Chapter 2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

Chapter 3: III: Albus Reflects

Chapter 4: IV: More McGonagalls

Chapter 5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

Chapter 6: VI: Spero et Expecto

Chapter 7: VII: Chez Albus

Chapter 8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

Chapter 9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

Chapter 10: X: A Smooth Apparater

Chapter 11: XI: The Special Project

Chapter 12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

Chapter 13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

Chapter 14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

Chapter 15: XV: A Success

Chapter 16: XVI: Preparations

Chapter 17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

Chapter 18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

Chapter 19: XIX: Waiting

Chapter 20: XX: Hiding

Chapter 21: XXI: Seeking

Chapter 22: XXII: Finding

Chapter 23: XXIII: Escaping

Chapter 24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

Chapter 25: XXV: Meeting

Chapter 26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

Chapter 27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

Chapter 28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

Chapter 29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

Chapter 30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

Chapter 31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

Chapter 32: XXXII: The Attacks

Chapter 33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

Chapter 34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

Chapter 35: XXXV: Hagrid

Chapter 36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

Chapter 37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

Chapter 38: XXXVIII: Requests

Chapter 39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

Chapter 40: XL: Horrid Relatives

Chapter 41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

Chapter 42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

Chapter 43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

Chapter 44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

Chapter 45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

Chapter 46: XLVI: More Relatives

Chapter 47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

Chapter 48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

Chapter 49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

Chapter 50: L: Curious Conversation

Chapter 51: LI: The Lovely Couple

Chapter 52: LII: Shall We Dance?

Chapter 53: LIII: The End of the Party

Chapter 54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

Chapter 55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

Chapter 57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

Chapter 58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

Chapter 59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

Chapter 60: LX: The Magic of Memory

Chapter 61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

Chapter 62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

Chapter 63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

Chapter 64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

Chapter 65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

Chapter 66: LXVI: Many Meetings

Chapter 67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

Chapter 68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

Chapter 69: LXIX: None But the Two

Chapter 70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

Chapter 71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

Chapter 72: LXXII: Not a Date

Chapter 73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

Chapter 74: LXXIV: Ever Green

Chapter 75: LXXV: Collision

Chapter 76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

Chapter 77: LXXVII: Impulse

Chapter 78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

Chapter 79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

Chapter 80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

Chapter 81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

Chapter 82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

Chapter 83: LXXXIII: Family Time

Chapter 84: LXXXIV: Mates

Chapter 85: LXXXV: Plans

Chapter 86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

Chapter 87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

Chapter 88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

Chapter 89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

Chapter 90: XC: A Confidant

Chapter 91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

Chapter 92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

Chapter 93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

Chapter 94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

Chapter 95: XCV: Home Again

Chapter 96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

Chapter 97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

Chapter 98: XCVIII: Warding

Chapter 99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

Chapter 100: C: Touring Hogwarts

Chapter 101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

Chapter 102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

Chapter 103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

Chapter 104: CIV: Gifts

Chapter 105: CV: A Werewolf's End

Chapter 106: CVI: Reverberations

Chapter 107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

Chapter 108: CVIII: In Memoriam

Chapter 109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

Chapter 110: CX: Seduction

Chapter 111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

Chapter 112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

Chapter 113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

Chapter 114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

Chapter 115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

Chapter 116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

Chapter 117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

Chapter 118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

Chapter 119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

Chapter 120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

Chapter 121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

Chapter 122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

Chapter 123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

Chapter 124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

Chapter 125: CXXV: Rematch

Chapter 126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

Chapter 127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

Chapter 128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

Chapter 129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

Chapter 130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

Chapter 131: CXXXI: Realising Love

Chapter 132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

Chapter 133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

Chapter 134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

Chapter 135: CXXXV: A Spree

Chapter 136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

Chapter 137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

Chapter 138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

Chapter 140: CXL: Sorted

Chapter 141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!


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10/10

Hypnobarb

Poppy is doing very nicely for herself.  What a contrast between her romance that is moving swiftly ahead and Minerva's that is progressing so frustratingly slow.  Malcolm is a fascinating mystery.  You are doing that deliberately, aren't you?Welcome back.  I hope you had a nice relaxing holiday and are feeling better.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

"Malcolm is a fascinating mystery. You are doing that deliberately, aren't you?"

Of course! But unlike some mysteries in RaM, you will have some answers to it very soon.

"Welcome back.  I hope you had a nice relaxing holiday and are feeling better"

Thank you! I did and I am. (We'll see how long that lasts . . . )

Thanks for reviewing! 

10/10

cocoasnape

Oh Dilys you are quite the matchmaker!!  J

 

I love the side along apparitions!!!  minerva needs to pretend she's forgotten how to do it herself and need albus to take her everywhere

 

Looks like gertie gave dustern a talking to.

 

Can’t wait for them to attend the wedding – I foresee some drunken dancing

 

Here I was stunned at the speed things were suddenly moving, and of course you pulled the rug out from under me!  i'll be patient!!!

 

Have a happy thanksgiving!

 

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I don't think that Egeria would be too happy if Merwyn go drunk at his granddaughter's wedding, do you? ;P Come to think of it, that would be pretty tacky behavior on the part of any of those on this particular guest list, since they'd be the lone sots in the crowd of folks otherwise drinking civilized mimosas . . . sorry, it's very late again and my sarcasm comes on when I'm up too late and writing, particularly when I've had a rather . . . dissatisfying day in RL, shall we say.

If there's ever any somewhat tipsy dancing (drunkenness is uncouth behavior in the young and rather disgusting in those old enough to know better! LOL!), it won't be at the wedding. Or at the wedding breakfast. Maybe at a party sometime after the happy couple return from their cheap-but-enjoyable honeymoon. 

I do love the idea of Minerva suddenly forgetting how to Apparate. Or having some kind of malady that prevents her from doing so! LOL! That could be quite amusing . . . not in RaM, unfortunately, but funny, nonetheless!

Glad you like Dilys -- she is trying, isn't she? I'm afraid that she and everyone else who is trying to help the hapless couple have quite the task cut out for them!

Thanks, as always, for the review.

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Great work!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks!

10/10

stardragon

Very nice chapter! I've been wondering when Gertrude would get around to giving them a little push. I'm glad Minerva has Quin to talk to. I'll be interested in what he has to say!Have a lovely holiday!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you!

10/10

Hypnobarb

I do hope you are feeling better and that you get a chance to rest and regroup during the holiday.Minerva has done everything but a complete and total blurt and Albus still isn't getting it.  Their friends have done everything but toss them in a closet and lock the door.  I know you have something brilliant planned.  I haven't a clue what it is, but I await it anxiously.A blessed Thanksgiving to you and  your family.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you! I wish the same to you!

I don't know about brilliant, but . . . maybe "cataclysmic"? No, that's not quite right . . . you'll have to tell me when we finally get there. :)

Thanks for the review! I'm looking forward to the break . . . 

0/10

bedworm

These two are too cute sometimes to be believed, but please let them figure it out soon. I don't think I can take much more of the anguish.
It puts a smile on my face whenever I see an update.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Once they figure it out, you won't be getting many more of those updates that put a smile on your face, so there's an up-side and a down-side to that wish! We are, however, at about the 90% mark, if that helps. I'm glad you are enjoying the story!

10/10

stardragon

As much as I hurt for both of them right now, I do get amused at how Minerva is like the energizer bunny--she bounces right back. She's not going to let anything keep her from him now, even herself.Albus is definitely going to fall off that cliff soon, he cant' keep this up. His misgivings about his own character go very deep, don't they? Hmm, I wonder who that one witch was? I had not forgotten that earlier reference, and I want to know who it is!Love Gertrude, as always. Very good visual of her sitting there, pliers in hand, patiently pulling teeth. Ha.I can only imagine how consumed you are by this--we've had, what, 5 or 6 chapters in the last 10 days? I hope some of this at least was written already!Exellent, every emotional chapter again.P.S., sort of: I do forget about the age difference. I'm so absorbed into the story I just don't see it anymore. There was a lot of insight in this chapter, including the nasty bit about Charles.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

"Albus is definitely going to fall off that cliff soon, he cant' keep this up. His misgivings about his own character go very deep, don't they? "

I wouldn't put it that way -- it's not about his character, although he does think he should be stronger and more in control of himself while he is with Minerva -- it is simply that he is putting too much emphasis on his age and on the differences between him and Minerva and between him and what he envisions as the perfect wizard for Minerva. He doesn't believe he's got a bad character or anything of that sort. He just wishes it were easier for him to behave "appropriately" and to get rid of what he sees as the inappropriate part of his feelings for Minerva.

Gertie, through the benefit of 40 years acquaintance with Albus, has come to know him and how to deal with him.

As for your question, I was several chapters ahead in my writing, mainly because I knew that I wanted to post the three "Albus chapters" all in one go, more or less. I hope that people have enjoyed this recent glut of chapters because there will be a long dry period (well, a week or so, maybe a bit more) while I am out of town. There's one more chapter to be posted, then, nothing for a while.

10/10

Hypnobarb

Robert Pretnick's story is so sad.  He had so much promise and it was all taken away from him.  Will the wizarding world even realize what a hero he was?  If he had died fighting the werewolf, he would have been lauded.  Becoming a werewolf and committing suicide, will he be viewed as the tragic hero?Literally, everyone else can see what is obvious.  Even the portraits have a clearer perception than Albus.  I don't know what you have in mind that will finally get through to him, but I can hardly wait.Your muse is not only on overdrive, it's doing expresso shots.  Take care of yourself, girlfriend!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I am too tired to write a coherent response right now, except to say "thank you!" I'm glad you appreciated the chapter & Pretnick's sacrifice.

I think my Muse is going to force me to take a cruise, or something, and since RL won't allow that, I'm afraid it'll have me catching flu instead. So I'm off to bed!

10/10

cocoasnape

the last chapter was so sad!!!!!! but lovely also....

minerva near-orgasming from albus taking the wards back is a stroke of sheer brilliance!you HAVE to have her somehow be forced to confess that is feels 'more' than good!

gertie's perceptiveness is freaking me out.  does she know how they feel about each other? is she guessing?

and albus really needs to confess to gertrude...that would add an interesting element to your story...only if she's sworn to secrecy of course

can't wait for the breakfast scene!!tomorrow please!! ? ? ?

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks for the review!

Re: your Gertie questions . . . I'd go back and reread the scenes with Gertie right from the beginning, if I had the time and I were you. Otherwise, I might just recollect them and use the "little grey cells," as a certain fictional Belgian was wont to say, and make a few deductions . . . .

Alas, I do have a Real Life. Perhaps not one of massive importance to anyone but me, my family, my friends, and so forth, but it does take Real Time! However, I'm very glad you are enjoying the story so much!

The RaM world also does not take requests, as it has all already "occurred" and I just "transcribe" (LOL!) -- and that particular event would also be very OOC for RaM!Albus, and would have to end the story because the entire RaM universe would implode and, well, it wouldn't be a pretty sight. And I would be very sad after having worked on the story so long to have it all just self-destruct . . . I'm getting teary-eyed just thinking about it. (Haha!) But seriously, you will just have to resign yourself to enjoying the story as it unfolds.

Anyway, I'm exhausted at the end of a much too long day, hence the very loopy response, but I was very happy to receive your review! 

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

It's cute how more people are noticing their affection and yet both of them are still trying to reason against not fully disclosing their feelings for each other. Great chapter!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you! (And Dilys is pleased you consider her a person! People are so often unappreciative of portraits! *grin* But she had had her suspicions before that! She is more awake than some, after all . . . )

10/10

stardragon

Arrgh! That.man. It amazing he can function at all the way he keeps turning in on himself! Oh, gods, I when he asked her to stay, I thought he was FINALLY going to tell her he loves her. Poor Minerva! How utterly heartbreaking. Especially following the experience with the wards. He's going to make them both mental wrecks!On a saner emotional note, the wards are fascinating. I don't know how much longer I can stand his obtuseness (is that a word?). This is torture!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

"Obtuseness" works for me. But remember, we have the benefit of seeing everything from Minerva's perspective. On top of a few things that you will eventually learn about Albus, you have to remember that the man is 117 years old! She's 32! He would think he was deluding himself to think that woman that young could be interested in him romantically. The age difference is huge, even in wizarding society. They may live longer, but that doesn't mean that old isn't still old! He is the same age as her grandparents -- older, in fact, by a little -- he thinks he's being perfectly rational in believing she couldn't be interested in him and thinks that the irrationality lies in his caring for her that way at all. Poor guy! We know that it doesn't matter to Minerva, but he doesn't know that. Most people are sensitive to age that way, and the thought that she not only might love him romantically, but has done so for years just wouldn't occur to him. You'll get more of his own internal conflict about all this in the next chapter. He's still wrong, but maybe it will be clearer why he can't seem to see what it is that Minerva is trying to tell him.

Besides, Minerva should TALK to him. Unfortunately, she is not very good at that, despite her insistence that he talk to her about his feelings. 

I'm glad you like the wards! 

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Ooo, the thunder strikes when he touches her, what an omen. Love the chapter!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you! :)

10/10

Hypnobarb

"Good evening, you handsome devil," said Minerva, leaning flirtatiously against the door jamb of Albus' office.  The wizard in question raised his head from his paperwork and looked at Minerva with a warm and welcoming smile.  He'd seen Minerva in this kind of mood before and it always bode well."If you haven't got anything planned for tonight," she said with a wink, "How about we stay in and mess around with the wards?"Albus leaned back in the chair behind the desk, set down his quill, and gave her a knowing look.  Minerva sashayed inside and with a flick of his wand, Albus closed and locked the door behind her.Who knew that Salazar Slytherin had put a little something extra into the wards of the castle? Something that two people in the right jobs at the right time just happened to rediscover a thousand years later.On a more serious note, a lovely and heartbreaking scene between Albus and Minerva.  Of course, Albus is in need of a good talking to.  Denial isn't healthy. 

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

And an amusing scene you have painted there! LOL!

He will get something of a talking-to in the next chapter . . . kinda sorta.

I'm glad you liked the scene.

Thank you for reviewing! 

10/10

stardragon

I had wondered if we would hear more of Robert. :-(Wowzer on the phoenix interaction. Hmm, wonder what Albus thought about that. Minerva's going to jump him soon if he doesn't make a move!  She's getting quite bold.The "nap" exchange was hysterical!Nice chapter! (And you're still spoiling us!)

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Poor Robert . . . a character created only for the sake of a certain plotline, destined for death from the outset. I am a cruel author! But I didn't let anyone become too attached to him -- I had people weeping buckets over Carson, and that part made me sad, as well, so I'm trying to keep the Robert section down to one-hanky, if that!

Glad you liked the Albus-Minerva interaction before they got the bad news. And she is getting rather bold, at least when he's in his Animagus form. And otherwise, I suppose. But Albus hasn't made the progress Minerva has, and his difficulties with imagining the possibility of the relationship are different from those that Minerva has.

Glad you feel spoiled!

Response from stardragon (Reviewer)

Forgot to say earlier, you've got Slughorn pegged. I always get a chuckle out of how you write him.Albus, sadly, seems to be gettng more emotionally fragile in inverse proportion to Minerva's growing confidence. Carson's death was heartbreaking! I'm sad for Robert, but not as invested in him, alas!

10/10

Hypnobarb

Oh, yeah.  Neither of them meant to invite the other to share a nap.  Not at all.  Wouldn't occur to either of them at an unconscious level, either.It is terribly sad about Robert, but also understandable at a certain level.  If the wizarding world was more accepting of werewolves so that he could have kept his job and support network, he might have done all right.  He did the right thing by saving others from a werewolf and ended up paying a very high price for it.A delightful interlude between Minerva and Albus in his Phoenix form.  At least they both feel free to express their affection openly when in their Animagus forms.  It sounds like Gertie has figured out the obvious.  It will probably be a front page article in The Daily Prophet before the parties involved figure it out.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

"It will probably be a front page article in The Daily Prophet before the parties involved figure it out."

That gave me a nice little chuckle! And it may not be too much of an exaggeration. Well, I guess it is, but it's still funny!

Thanks for the review! 

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Aw, poor Pretnick...though he did seem like he would do it at some point from the conversations we saw with Albus and Minerva. I like how Albus and Minerva had their little slips-of-tongue innuendos and the description of the wards was interesting. Good work.!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you!

10/10

Hypnobarb

Old fashioned or not, if Albus doesn't do something for Minerva soon, she's probably going to explode.  Now, let's see what happens when they meet. 

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Old-fashioned, noble, hang-up -- however you describe Albus's attitude, I do think you may be right about Minerva! LOL!

Thanks for the review! 

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Aw, what a cute birthday party. Loved the beans-on-toast joke. Poor Minnie having Albus stiffen when she made her declaration; maybe she should leave her shrine set up when he's going into her bedroom in the future.

Great chapter.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, and it wasn't the right part of his anatomy, either -- sorry, couldn't resist! LOL!

Thanks for reviewing. 

10/10

alina612

Oh! Now she's going to think that he doesn't love her back. Sniff! I'm glad he liked the robes, who wouldn't? Obviously they were made for him, won't Madam Malkin be happy?! And I loved what Albus did with the tiles. How sweet.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks! We'll see something of their reactions in the next chapter.

10/10

Hypnobarb

Oh my!  Peeping toms in portrait form.  I suppose those who can, do.  Those who can't, watch those who can.It is good to have the, erm, parts working.  Especially if they haven't been, erm, used recently.  Afterall, one never knows, erm, exactly when they, ahem, might be needed. The two of them are acting like an old married couple, between flavored vitamin potions and tiles.  Looking after each other with all of the small things.Waiting anxiously for the blurtette!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yep, they are very comfortable with one another -- until they remember how they feel or start to get too close to "It," then awkwardness!

The mega-chapter for Albus's birthday will be up soon. It's really two chapters, or could be, but I am posting it all at once so that people aren't on the edge of their seats for too long!

Thanks much for reviewing! 

10/10

stardragon

They have a gift for behaving and talking like a couple who have been initmate for years and denying they're behaving and talking that way...I am delighted with this chapter! The portraits were hysterical; one of them, at least, finally broke down; and it's obvious this is going to go on--oh, maybe one more day?--before they discover their feelings are mutual.Love the tie-in between this is the lemon--very nice!Again, the pacing is excellent, I can sense their mutual angst, and the fact it simply has to blow, and soon! You are a gifted writer.*sigh*  You've made me very happy this evening!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I hope you continue to find the pacing excellent . . . because it'll be more than a day. And they have not yet hit their major roadblock -- when they hit that and it looks as though things couldn't be worse, then they get a little worse, it'll be like a rubber band/elastic, that has been stretched to its limit, and it'll bounce back, and they will come back together again. So when things suddenly look very bleak, that's the time to have hope! (I'm telling you this in advance in hopes that it will keep you from tearing your hair out and gnashing your teeth when it comes!)

I'm glad you liked the tie-in with the lemon. That should also give you hope for them -- you did notice the date is still 1957, didn't you?

Thanks, as always, for reviewing! 

Response from stardragon (Reviewer)

Oh, well, a little torture is good for the soul, right? Yes, I did notice the date on the lemon!Just reread the chapter, and have to say again how great the portraits are, and poor Albus and his subconsious...too funny (and so right on how a "real" person would react)

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I hope it's just the right kind of torture to be good for the soul! *grin*

Thanks again -- and I'm glad you like the portraits! I like throwing them into the mix occasionally.

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Hrm. I can't help but wonder about what Phineas said. Was he being a prude or did he mean that their surpression of feelings was not to be tolerated?

Great chapter!

Response from Fallen_Angel_Mione (Reviewer)

Oh, and about the roman numeral of this chapter: should it be XCVI instead of CXV?

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Forgot to change the numbering when I cut and pasted from the other archive which has a different numbering system. I generally catch it eventually myself. But thatnks.

Phineas is a grouchy old prude. 

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

A nice transition chapter. I like how they seem close to revealing their affection for each other. Good work!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks!

10/10

Hypnobarb

We are teetering at the moment of blurt.  Feelings are about to be declared.  The only question is, who will blurt first?  And how will the other react?  Faint?  Hyperventilate?  Confess to having similar delicate feelings?I refer to "Looking for Magic" as having the longest foreplay in HG/SS history, because they wait 60 chapters before feelings are declared.  You make me look like a piker by comparison.Can't wait!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Amateur! LOL! Just kidding! You know I love "Looking for Magic" -- I think it is now the only fanfic I'm reading (even if I am somewhat behind).

Ah, the moment of blurt . . .

There will be a pre-blurt . . . "blurtette." Sort of. It will be small, and slightly calculated, therefore, not a full "blurt."

The next chapter is "Not to Be Tolerated," then we get Albus's birthday, and that's a mega-chapter. Then . . .don't want to spoil it for you!

Thanks for your reviews! I love them!

10/10

stardragon

Minerva! You go girl! Wow--hugging him, inviting him to her rooms in the middle of the night to play chess or "something"--indulging in fantasy (which could have played out a little longer *ahem*)--when she lets go she lets go!ROFL until I cried over her closing her eyes and waiting for him to read her mind. OMG, that was priceless! Also quite funny how she totally dismisses the idea of returning to Hogwarts early since Albus wasn't there. Poor Albus! I can just about picture him closing the door behind her and sliding down to the floor, thankful he got her out of there until he did something totally reckless--like act on his feelings and take her to bed! The pacing is great--you can feel her breathlessness and anticipation.Truly wonderful chapter!P.S. If I can't have Albus, I'll take Malcolm!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Hmm, Malcolm . . . wonder what Minerva would think of that . . . hmm. *grin*

We get to see Albus after he closes the door, and you can see what his reaction is. *chuckle*

I'm glad you like the pacing. There's more "story" to come, but we will have Albus's birthday party first! (If that didn't make any sense, it's because I am extremely tired today and yawning my head off.)

Thanks, as always, for reviewing! 

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