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Masters and Servants

1: Waiting

2: Unravelling

3: Accusations

4: Ascendence

5: Unwinding

Masters and Servants

HogwartsHoney

49 Reviews   |   49 Ratings, 0 Likes, 16 Favorites )

Drama Angst Erotica Smut Slash Forbidden Forest 8,982 Words 5 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Severus Snape

Several months after Dumbledore's death Harry tracks down Snape to even the score, but what transpires is far from expected, for either of them.
**This story won the Multifaceted Awards Round 6 in 'Desire - Best Slash Fic rated R or NC-17'. Thanks to everyone who voted!**

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: Waiting

Chapter 2: Unravelling

Chapter 3: Accusations

Chapter 4: Ascendence

Chapter 5: Unwinding


About HogwartsHoney

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HogwartsHoney

Member Since 2006  |  23 Stories  |  Favorited by 37  |  147 Reviews Written  |  358 Review Responses

 

45 years old and hopelessly intrigued by the Potterverse and all that it contains. Really, I'm too old for this sh*t, but... here I am.

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http://hogwartshoney.livejournal.com
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9/10

snapeophile

Honey, you write so powerfully and capture that "thin line between love (lust) and hate" very well.  As always, I was mesmerized by your writing.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

OMG!!! I didn't know you were going to read this here!!!  Am so thrilled to see your review and I'm happy that you enjoyed it! :O)  I know they aren't your OTP!

10/10

Chartreuse

That chapter really had it all - well apart from the detailed stuff! I think I can see where you talked about changing and editing.  There are changes in pace within the story that are a bit of a give away.  It does work, there are parts where stuff happened quite quickly, but the pasion both Snape and Harry have could potentially come together like this, I agree.  good stuff.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Yeah, see??  I figured you'd be able to suss out the differences... and eventually I'll go back and tweak the first couple chapters so that it fits together better!

Thanks for yr reading through it all !  

10/10

Chartreuse

Harry, Harry, Harry!  I like your Snape, he's very Snapeish.  I like the legilimency scenes - well done!

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Thanks!  The legilimency was actually the hardest thing for me to do and get right.  I had the ideas, but the words were hard to find...!  Happy you're enjoying it!

10/10

Chartreuse

Oh I thought the beginning of this was familiar! This is the fic with Marilyn Manson in it!!! Duh!. I obviously R&R ch 1 but missed the rest.Anyway, from her def getting more interesting. Harry's a worry, isn't he?

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

LOL, yep, Marilyn Manson indeed!   I'd forgotten about that!  *snerk*

Yes, our Harry is a bit obsessed, but that's his nature, innit? 

8/10

snapes_faerie

that was a very fast transition from murderous hate to loving but i do like snarry. will you write another one day? maybe longer?

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Agreed. I tried to justify it to myself because love and hate are so closely intwined, and also because Harry has been carrying his feelings for Snape inside him for so long. Those feelings had conflicted him throughout his school life and he used  the horror of Dumbledore's death to turn the love/desire into what he thought was pure hate, using that to both avenge DD's death and to finally be able to express something to/for Snape.  Thanks for reading! HH

10/10

karelia

Wow! Apart from it being very well written, I think I'm a convert. Snarry is, after all, quite a possibility!

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Oh my!  Converted you, have I?  How fab!

*preens and takes your hand as we dance through the garden of Snape and Harry*

Thanks for reading this, my dearest C, you KNOW that I value your opinion highly!  ::hugs you::

0/10

dracontia

Wooog... I've been Snarried....And I think I like it.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

I think I'm thrilled that you enjoyed you bit of Snarryness!!!!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Alas, I hate to see it end, but I'm hopeful that with their war being done, things can finally progress. Now to kill old Voldiearse.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Yepper!!!  Can you just imagine Harry and Snape united in love against Voldyprick?  The bastard stands NO chance!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I wanted to say that this chapter was great. I could almost feel the emotions and crackling energies surrounding them.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

*s q u e e *   Am thrilled that you enjoyed it.  I found that I had to work harder than usual  to make it less about the sex and more about the emotional letting go/acceptance of each other bit.  Happy it worked out!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I always enjoy a good Legilimens scene where Snape is able to "see" more about Harry. I also like when Harry turns the tables on Snape, like in OotP.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Thanks!  I tried to get past the 'usual' because I had to make Snape understand what was at the heart of Harry.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I like the going back and forth  between the two POVs. That's where I got the idea for that story I'm doing with Charlie/Hermione/Ron.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

*squee*  I know, and I TOTALLY love that story, Sun!!! I think that the different POVs can lend so much to a story!!! Let me use this forum to request many MANY more chappies of your story!!!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Harry + plan = bad thing

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Yeah. Angry!Harry+plan= VERY bad thing!!!  Silly boy.

10/10

karelia

That was very well done! I loved the way you depicted how Snape assaulted him by entering his mind so viciously, and in the end, Harry succumbed to his emotions.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Thank you, my sweet. In this rewrite, I tried to make it less about the physical and more emotionally-based.  Am happy that you enjoyed it! :hugs:, HH

0/10

CantSpell

oh, I LOVE this! I think you've done a really good job keeping them in character ad leading up to Snarry. I just love it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Thanks!  This chapter underwent major reworking to get it in this condition - I'm happy that you're pleased with it! HH

10/10

karelia

AAAAAAAhhhhhhh! Such a captivating chapter! Such an evil cliffhanger! I can feel myself be drawn towards Snarry...

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

*moment of disbelief* You mean you're considering a pairing OTHER THAN Hermione and Snape!  Thank you, my sweet, for your review and for your encouragement!  ::hugs you::

10/10

karelia

Interesting start! I'm glad at least Minerva still believes Severus. :-)

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Dumbledore saw to it that she would!  I always considered them to be confidants of the highest order (no pun intended).  Thanks for reading, my sweet!

10/10

karelia

Oh! Shaping up to be very interesting! More, please.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

*grins*  Thanks, K! I'll try to send another chappie in today!

10/10

JordanneLeigh

I almost cried, even after I realized that Harry's death was only a dream. This story is beautiful and powerful- you've created something wonderful.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Thanks for reading!  My initial reaction to that 'death scene' was one of horrified disbelief too, and i'd initially considered leaving it like that. However, I love Snarry and I felt that there should be some happiness out of the darkness.

10/10

charmed3

Eau muffin...!!!

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

LOL. Eye kneau, poppet.  Thenk yew for my review!

10/10

Chartreuse

oooh, interesting start, HH. This will sound a little odd but when I read "Malfoy Mansion" I had kept seeing "Marilyn Manson".  3 times that is!!!  What is Snape doing with Marilyn Manson I kept wondering?????  I've been outrageously sick all week, it's my only explanation. I was seeing purple cows a few nights ago. I'm not on illegal substances, it's just me.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

What do you mean, 'Malfoy Mansion'?  It's SUPPOSED to be 'Marilyn Manson" !!!  Damn typos !!!   j/kidding, and thanks for reading my lil' story.

So sorry to hear that you've been sick , but.. purple cows? Interesting mind you have there, Char.  ::hugs you::

10/10

Alauralen

Harry really does need to learn how to block his mind.  I wonder what the change is!  Can't wait to find out!  Great writing, sweetie!  *hugs*  BSB/SSB

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

OMG SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!  it's YOUUUUU!!!!!!!

Wow - thanks for reading it, and yes, our often-impulsive Harry *does* need to think, slow down and block!

Hugs and BSB/TB LOVE!!!

10/10

Alauralen

Oh, what a way to end the chapter!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  You know how to build up the tension!  *hugs*  BSB/SSB

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

*bats eyelashes innocently*

There's nothing wrong with a little tension, now is there, darl?

;o)  ::hugs you::

BSB/TB 

10/10

Alauralen

Very nice start!  I can't wait to see what happens from here!

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Thanks! Hope you enjoy it!

0/10

Fawkes_07

*shrugs*  Well, I liked the original version better, but that's just me, I guess.

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

*grins*  Well, that's a lot of people, actually.  Both versions "work" for different reasons, and I like them both for just that - their differences. Thanks for reading both and your review :)

~H 

Response from Fawkes_07 (Reviewer)

So is the earlier one still out there to read??

Response from HogwartsHoney (Author of Masters and Servants)

Yes, at SycophantHex, Eros & Sappho.  I've decided to leave it there for posterity!

http://erosnsappho.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=2049

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