New Chapter for It's not you, It's me
It's not you, It's me
fyiagcg4 Reviews | 4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
My first attempt at a non fanfic story.
PLEASEPLEASEplease review
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fyiagcg
Member Since 2005 | 18 Stories | Favorited by 18 | 27 Reviews Written | 52 Review Responses
I was originally an SS/HG shipper that then fell in love with HG/DM as well. I now read and write both. I also have some original fiction and poetry up here on TPP, and love getting feedback on everything.
I have faced some writer's block on my only multi-chaptered story, but I PROMISE nothing is abandoned.
I do love to write, and I love REVIEWS!!
Ah, last thing. I am NOT HBP compliant. And now that I'm updating this profile in November 07, I need to tell you I am NOT DH Compliant
Reviews for It's not you, It's me
very interesting so far... please continue!! xxolivia
E-mailed a long review.This looks interesting. What are you trying to do by giving your character this background? Is it just background, or is it one of the issues she'll have to deal with? How will she / does she deal with it? Hope you update.
Hmm, intriguing. I take it that the main character, whatver her name is will reunite with Clayton and fall in love with him. Makes me wonder how much he has changed. I'd love to see more description of the main character's personality. What she likes to do, etc. Very good first orginal fiction. I'm looking forward to an update!
Hun... don't take this wrong. What was the point of this? Please help me see what I missed. I am not trying to be unkind. I am trying to undertstand. It sounds like a brief synapsis of someone's life, not a story. Help me see?
Response from fyiagcg (Author of It's not you, It's me)
it's just a prologue. i plan to go much much further with it