Shepherds and Sinners
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narcissa had some comforter while lucius is away, arthur fit the bill perfectly!
Narcissa's loneliness is heartbreaking, from her school days to her marrage, she has no one to rely on.
Response from jennybenny2845 (Author of Shepherds and Sinners)
Yes, exactly, which is what makes the warm, gentle and caring Arthur even more appealing. Thank you for your review and rating my story. :)
This is such a sweet story of two people drawn to each other during a time of increasing uncertainty. It really seemed to scratch an itch that no one else in their lives could ease. Well done!Beth
Response from jennybenny2845 (Author of Shepherds and Sinners)
Hello Beth! Thank you very much for your lovely review. They complement each other pretty well. She needs to be cared about and he's more than willing to care for her.
Very good. Fits a canon theme of everlasting romance - similar to Severus and Lily except this couple is not doomed. Classic structure and well written.
Response from jennybenny2845 (Author of Shepherds and Sinners)
Thank you so much for your positive review! :) Yes, this couple does indeed have potential.
I just love experiencing what Narcissa is experiencing in this story! And then what Arthur is experiencing being around her and his *reciprocation*. From this lovely connection they have over Shepherd's pie at the beginning until the last sentence, all through the Quidditch World Cup, the Hog's Head, and on through to the Manor, I love how the insights and needs of each is peeled away and reveal.Yes, Arthur has always struck me as a giver, enjoying satisfying his partner (Molly is one lucky witch, and now Narcissa
), and Narcissa as lonely and delicate... Her full needs definitely not satisfied. Love the realistic level you bring to these characters and the understanding and need they share. Lovely, lovely work! Looking forward to more!
Response from jennybenny2845 (Author of Shepherds and Sinners)
Thank you so much for your positive feedback and for proofreading my piece! Glad you felt the journey that they took throughout the years. Yes, Arthur definitely is a giver. Though, when I wrote this, I was a bit hesitant to make him commit adultery since he definitely seems devoted to his wife. But, I think his desires to make Narcissa feel loved & wanted took over. Plus, Narcissa is so much more attractive than Molly so he can't really deny her advances/wishes even if he tried! ;-p
narcissa had some comforter while lucius is away, arthur fit the bill perfectly!
Response from jennybenny2845 (Author of Shepherds and Sinners)
Oh yes, she did! :) She took full advantage of all the comfort he was willing to give her.