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An Orphan For Christmas Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen
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An Orphan For Christmas

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Nine

10: Chapter Ten

11: Chapter Eleven

12: Chapter Twelve

13: Chapter Thirteen

14: Chapter Fourteen

15: Chapter Fifteen

16: Chapter Sixteen

17: Chapter Seventeen

18: Chapter Eighteen

19: Chapter Nineteen

20: Chapter Twenty

Chapter Seventeen

An Orphan For Christmas

Chapter 17 of 20

Bardsdaughter

There's nothing like a McGonagall family breakfast.

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The heat of the McGonagall matriarch's intense gaze touched Hermione the moment she and Severus entered the family dining room. Forthright, demanding respect, yet unquestionably gentle, those blue eyes followed her even as their owner commanded the movement of the food down the refractory table like Wellington at Waterloo. They widened in approval when she accepted a dish, then narrowed if she didn't heap a healthy portion onto her plate. They challenged her to disagree while holding her in a soft, accepting embrace...just as they had the first time Severus brought her to this cottage.

"So tell me, lass. Do you think you belong on there?"

Hermione started at the stern alto invasion of her silent investigation of the family tree hovering between them. "Honestly," she sighed, "no." She traced the name Severus Tobias Prince-McGonagall Snape where it hung beneath the name Minerva McGonagall. "But, I do love him. With all my heart."

A slightly arthritic hand punched through the image, urging the names to disappear in a swirl of golden smoke. Isobel McGonagall's fingers were warm and strong as they settled just about Hermione's wrist. A warm smile shifted her wrinkles toward benevolence and welcome. "That's all it takes, m'dear." With the subtlest of gestures, the lineage reappeared with Hermione's name indelibly linked to Robert McGonagall's oldest grandson.

"Gran's tattie scones are magic, aren't they?"

The bright, cherubic voice drew Hermione from the memory. She turned to the five-year-old seated at her left elbow. Young Elspeth McGonagall was all big blue eyes, honey-brown curls, and innocent earnestness. Just as Hermione had been before...

Dark memories tried to follow the fleeting thought through the small breech in her composed mind, pushing firmly to widen the gap. She quickly clamped down on the melancholy, refusing to allow it to steal the tranquility Severus and this family instilled. "Indeed," she murmured. The child's giggles managed to restore the more positive side of her nature. She slid a forkful of the breakfast delicacy between her lips, then winked at the imp. She chewed slowly, the savory flavor fortifying her flagging courage. Just as, she was sure, Isobel McGonagall intended.

Spearing the final bit of egg that would clean her plate, Hermione contemplated the elderly witch anchoring one end of the table. While Elspeth's observation was somewhat accurate, it didn't reflect the whole truth. It wasn't the food that was magic; it was the chef who imbued each morsel she prepared with that most mystical of powers. And Hermione was sure the deep, abiding vein of the stuff running through the McGonagall matriarch was what gave her the kind of insight Sybil Trelawney only dreamed of. The kind of insight that gave Severus a family to cling to when the rest of the world turned its back. That gave them the assurance that Rose Gwyneth Snape was completely accepted as the newest beloved great-grandchild.

"Let's get a good look at this little lass, shall we?" Isobel settled Rose in the cradle of her lap. With practiced fingers, the old witch gently peeled away the blanket. "There's Severus' eyes and hair, only with your curls." She touched one of the ebony ringlets lining the top of the tiny scalp. "Your nose and the lad's..."

Hermione fought to keep her smile from faltering as her stomach swooped beneath the weight of the secret. Her mind screamed she wasn't theirs. They'd talked about this, Severus and she. Held lengthy discussion on whom to place "in the know" and whom to keep out. Considered the consequences of keeping the group to the minimum few who saw them consistently enough to realize the physical changes that accompanied pregnancy never happened to her body. And although the elder McGonagalls were included in the list, the majority of the extended family gathered round the cottage's expanded lounge were not. So in a sense, the revered matriarch was playing a role... and playing it quite well. Still, to hear her make those comparisons of Rose's looks to their own, comparisons she wished with her very soul were real...

"She's a fine specimen," Isobel announced, efficiently re-swaddling the newborn. "In fact." She carefully settled Rose into the crook of her elbow. The twinkle in her blue eyes seemed eerily reminiscent of the one that still visited the painted eyes of Hogwarts' former formidable headmaster. "There's only one thing keeping the wee lass from absolute perfection." She shifted the baby into Severus' arms. Determination that left little room for argument invaded the unwavering gaze boring into the man. "She needs an official welcome into the family."

Hermione ran the pad of her thumb across the tiny scar bisecting the juncture of her left ring finger and palm. The thin mark left from Rose's welcoming tingled slightly as the memory swam forward.

Once the younger members of the clan retired to their own homes for the evening, they gathered in the garden. Bundled against the October chill, Hermione waited as Isobel unwrapped the ceremonial blade. "Why are we doing this?" she whispered to her husband, garnering heat where she leaned against his shoulder. "It wasn't necessary when we married. Why is it necessary now?"

"Because the circumstances are different, m'dear." The firmness in the matriarch's voice brooked no further discussion. "The marriage bonds linked you to this family through Severus."

"Flesh of my flesh, bone of my bone." Robert McGonagall winked, his brogue thick with amusement. "Ring any bells for ye, lass?"

Heat flooded Hermione's cheeks. Had she been standing closer to the pile of leaves young Crispin had been forced to rake as punishment from an infringement against the McGonagall family evening meal protocol, she was certain to have sparked an inferno. "Perhaps," she hedged.

"And that's quite enough from you, Robert McGonagall," Isobel admonished over the rumble of his laughter. "No need to traumatize your grandchildren." Clearing her throat, she turned her attention back to the young family. "Hermione, Severus, if you would remove the gloves from your left hands and uncover the wee lass' left foot..."

"Hermione."

Malcolm's voice torpedoed the memory, submerging Hermione back into the present. Something unsettling lurked beneath the calm tenor and urged the turn of her head toward the dining room's door. Like the first split second after an ice bath, the shiver stalled her heart, gooseflesh marring her skin. Her sharp gasp pierced the sudden silence in the room, and then the words scrambled from her throat. "What are you doing here?"

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193 Reviews  |  7.74/10 Average

10/10

breastlady

Damn! That's...I don't know what.  Sounds like Dumbledore was ready to sacrifice Hermione to Ron. It's better that Dumbledore perished in his war with Riddle. He can on longer manipulate the lives of others the way he see's fit. 

10/10

breastlady

Where would Molly Weasley get enough money to buy a person? She must have been cheap. I suppose now that we know that Molly isn't normal, maybe she has financial resourses we don't know about but you would think she would have shared it with her family. But who knows what she'd do at this point. 

10/10

breastlady

I take it the Malfoys are party to the information that Rose in not the Granger-Snape's biological child? It seems like a lot of people know. When will they tell her?

10/10

breastlady

It's so sad that Severus has to live through this even in his new life. He has a good heart and he is a warrior. He will continue to fight evil even though Tom Riddle is dead because he is that kind of man and the world needs men like him. I'm glad he has Hermione to keep him centered. 

10/10

braye27

Thank you for this new chapter!  It's wonderful to know where everything now stands, and I can torture myself with wondering about the identity of "the redhead lurking in the shadows near the caterer's entrance."  Molly?  Arthur?  Or another Weasley?
Does Rita have read hair?  (I can't remember.)

Great chapter!

Beth



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Minerva

I really love your story, as heartbreaking as it is. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.

10/10

Sampdoria

I adore this story, thank you so much for the update.

10/10

mick42

Thank you for the update, I hope the ''redhead'' doesn't mess things up for Severus and Hermione. The conversation with Hermione's parents seems to have come to an  abrupt end, will we be hearing more of them?

10/10

Jinxie

Really enjoying this story so far. Looking forward to seeing what happens next! 

10/10

braye27

I hope all goes well for the rest of the service.  I like the idea that Lucius is there had has their back.

Beth

10/10

braye27

I hope nothing else happens to threaten Hermione's peace of mind. 

Beth

10/10

Sampdoria

So happy to see another update to this wonderful story, thank you so much.

10/10

mick42

Thank you for the up-date, I hope the day goes well for all concerned. 

10/10

marisamarinee

really enjoy this! Can't wait to read more!

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marisamarinee

sweet

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marisamarinee

curious. very curious. I'm intruiged in you divulging on more of the history and the Weasleys for that matter

10/10

mick42

So it was Hermione's parents arrival, that upset her so badly. I hope nothing worse happens, to spoil the day.

10/10

sunny33

Aha, so that is why Minerva is so maternal with Severus. :)

10/10

sunny33

What are they going to do about Ron?

10/10

sunny33

Poor Lucius. They're all picking on him! :)

10/10

sunny33

Yep, a name would be helpful.:)

10/10

sunny33

Love the relationship Minerva and Severus have. :)

10/10

sunny33

Quickest way to get information, I suppose.

10/10

sunny33

I guess plausible deniability comes in here. :)

10/10

Sampdoria

Always happy to see a new update to this wonderful story, thank you so much.

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