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Come Autumn, Sae Pensive
Squibstress12 Reviews | 8.0/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
The last thing Minerva McGonagall ever expected was to become a mother. But when she finds herself unexpectedly pregnant, her life with Albus changes in ways beyond anything they might have predicted.
This is the third story set in the "Epithalamium" universe.
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I'm a middle-aged, professional writer of non-fiction and would-be professional writer of fiction who also writes Harry Potter fanfiction just for fun.
I’m a proud member of the Harry Potter Old Lady Smut Brigade, which means I’m most interested in the older female characters in the Harry Potter saga, particularly Minerva McGonagall.
If I had received my Hogwarts letter back in nineteen-mumble-mumble, I would most likely have been sorted into Ravenclaw, or so everyone tells me, probably because I’m a geeky data-freak (my Real Life™ requires me to read piles of medical journal articles.) I, however, think I’d feel right at home in Hufflepuff too, so I consider myself a Ravenpuff.
The fics I write may contain adult themes, and I will always warn for non-con, graphic violence, bestiality, incest, or underage sex. I don't warn for homosexual relationships or sex, or for threesomes/moresomes, unless they contain one of the aforementioned elements.
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Reviews for Come Autumn, Sae Pensive
I'm glad she has such a wise father. But it must take some time to heal from the loss of her child and this near death experience. I hope this will make their marriage closer, since as Thorfinn said, it's either supporting each other or drifting apart.
O this really sounds serious, but at the same time I am glad about your realistic take on the matter. Magic can't solve anything.
Somehow I already had a bad feeling about the pregnancy chapters ago, so I hope she will at least recover soon. Having a hysterectomy has a lot of impact but when it's life saving it has to happen.
oh.....how moving
That was so sad, I'm crying as I write this.
oh - love love love!!!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
This really made me smile. Too much solicitude can be really irritating, especially combined with hormones, and carrying it into the bedroom -- definitely too much of a good thing. I loved the banter:
"Of course. As everyone knows, I am a very proper witch. I simply allow you to use me to satisfy your carnal appetites."
And
"I see. And you don't enjoy it at all,"
And
There, that wasn't so bad, was it?"
Then they go right into discussing telling the staff and students, almost without pause, and it is so consistent and in-character for them, all I can do is roll my eyes at them.
I also liked the bit of back-story of how she became deputy-head, and her thoughts on how motherhood changes things. It's a shame she thinks her professional life should at least appear to take precedence over her personal life, but its very, very in-character for Minerva.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Ah, the hazards of the profession. I imagine it's rather difficult to avoid "shop talk" when you're a couple who both work and live at the same school.I think the difficulty of balancing one's professional life with parenthood falls inordinately on women--even in the wizarding world.Thanks for reading!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Ah, the hazards of the profession. I imagine it's rather difficult to avoid "shop talk" when you're a couple who both work and live at the same school.I think the difficulty of balancing one's professional life with parenthood falls inordinately on women--even in the wizarding world.Thanks for reading!
I really like this chapter, from Poppy's reaction ('lucky girl' indeed!), to Albus reading poetry to Minerva and carrying her to bed. You really show just how much he adores her. I especially enjoyed the playful teasing at the beginning.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought at least one "fluffy" chapter might be in order here, LOL!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought at least one "fluffy" chapter might be in order here, LOL!
Minerva needs to take a deep breath. She is worrying too much about what other people think, but that's Minerva. I don't think I've read a story that featured a married, pregnant Minerva before and can't wait to see how it turns out.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
I think Minerva is used to keeping her private life private, so this is going to be a bit of an ordeal for her.I've read a few preganant!Minerva stories, so I decided to try my hand. I hope you enjoy it.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
I think Minerva is used to keeping her private life private, so this is going to be a bit of an ordeal for her.I've read a few preganant!Minerva stories, so I decided to try my hand. I hope you enjoy it.
well written for such a difficult topic
I think Molly's mind would be blown if she knew Minerva was pregnant :) I imagine Molly's going to have a few things to say to her brothers. Delightful chapter. Thanks.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
It might at that, LOL!This was a fun chapter to write. Glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
It might at that, LOL!This was a fun chapter to write. Glad you enjoyed it.
I have read this on ffnet, and am looking forward to reading it here, but I'll try to refrain from commenting on events until they unfold.
I did enjoy this chapter very much. The humor (how did that happen?) is great, and I also detect a bit of the nervous excitement that is bound to accompany such news. I liked Albus's reaction, and his willingness to support Minerva in her decision. The way he phrases it 'then so do I' makes it seem that he would support whatever decision she made, and that is a very good trait in a husband!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks for giving it another go here!I'm glad you liked Albus's reaction; I think he knows on which side his bread is buttered.Cheers!
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks for giving it another go here!I'm glad you liked Albus's reaction; I think he knows on which side his bread is buttered.Cheers!
You know I've read this on ffnet and you already know how much trouble I have reading this - and you know why - so I won't go into all that. What I will go into is what I love about this piece ... so - here goes.*snip*"But how?" Minerva asked in disbelief.Poppy smiled. If only she had a Sickle for every time a dismayed sixth- or seventh-year asked her that, she'd be rich as the Malfoys. She said, "Well, there's the staff-room floor, oh, and Albus' desk, of course, and your bed—that's traditional—and—""Poppy, this is not a joke!" Minerva broke in.*snip*Laughs and laughs and laughs and laughs *wipes eyes* Not sure what I love more, Poppy's cheek or Minerva's outrage - but both strike me as hilarious - or maybe its Poppy's knowledge of Minerva's rigidity that causes her to be sarcastic, expecting the outrage - I'm not exactly sure, but its funny! *snip*Albus stepped into her sitting room, chessboard in hand and a characteristic twinkle in his blue eyes. He set the chessboard down on a table and asked, "Are we alone?"It had been their standard greeting for the past two years, ever since Albus had come into her rooms for one of their Saturday trysts, grabbed her, stopping her protesting mouth with a kiss, and had her blouse halfway open before he noticed a very embarrassed Filius Flitwick attempting to make a rapid and discreet exit. The tiny Charms professor, who had been obscured by the tall back of a chair, had shown up at Minerva's quarters unexpectedly, hoping to discuss a Transfiguration article she had written. He hadn't been able to look at either of them for a week. Albus had thought it was funny.*snip*
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
shares something with Albus because
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
thinks this be funny also! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAYou little exhibitionist you! *chuckles**snip*She shifted to her side, propping her head on her hand so she could look at his face. "I'm pregnant.""How?"he asked."Given what we have just spent the past hour doing, I'm surprised you have to ask that," she said, forgetting that she had asked Poppy Pomfrey exactly the same question not three days ago.*snip**just grins* Ahhhh, I so love Epith/Verse Minerva/Albus banter.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks for leaving a comment here--I've decided to start posting it, as I'm almost done with Epithalmium (believe it or not!) and once this gets posted, it will be the complerte series (for now, anyway.)You needn't feel compelled to read it again if it's too painful--I can certainly understand that.I'm glad you enjoyed the banter.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
shares something with Albus because
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
thinks this be funny also! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAYou little exhibitionist you! *chuckles**snip*She shifted to her side, propping her head on her hand so she could look at his face. "I'm pregnant.""How?"he asked."Given what we have just spent the past hour doing, I'm surprised you have to ask that," she said, forgetting that she had asked Poppy Pomfrey exactly the same question not three days ago.*snip**just grins* Ahhhh, I so love Epith/Verse Minerva/Albus banter.
Response from Squibstress (Author of Come Autumn, Sae Pensive)
Thanks for leaving a comment here--I've decided to start posting it, as I'm almost done with Epithalmium (believe it or not!) and once this gets posted, it will be the complerte series (for now, anyway.)You needn't feel compelled to read it again if it's too painful--I can certainly understand that.I'm glad you enjoyed the banter.