Snape da Gamba
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kareliaForeplay can take many forms.
ReviewedDisclaimer: Nothing except the order of the words is mine.
Any other would be jealous, but not Lucius. This foreplay was acceptable.
Narcissa looked almost mystical. The viola da gamba nestled between her legs, her hands doing the magic, determining the tone, teasing the bow: once tapping the strings, then gently stroking, and idle again when her fingers elicited a more passionate note.
A sight to behold. A sound filling the air with longing, fulfillment – long after she’d finished.
Lucius gently took the instrument from her and carefully leaned it against the sofa. “Bed, darling?” The couple left together.
Snape returned to his human form, sated from Narcissa’s capable hands.
A/N: I blame TeaOli, who blames Owlbait, and linlawless pointed out our blatant unwillingness to be self responsible. Owlbait waxed rhapsodic about the viola da gamba one chat night, which inspired TeaOli to leave a prompt, as follows:
Severus Snape is an inanimagus, and his alternate form is a viola da gamba. Whose thighs are clasping him, and who's been stroking his strings? (And how does he feel about it?)
I thank Owlbait for the inspiration, TeaOli for the prompt, and linlawless for the beta.
100 words exactly.
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17 Reviews | 5.29/10 Average
Okay, that's just... I don't even know. Good job on fulfilling the prompt though. :)
It's enough to invoke the harmony of the spheres.
Just... Just... no. I can't take it. An Inanimagus?! This is so damn absurd! Waaaay too much of an inside joke. Or maybe I'm just reading when I should be napping...
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
It isn't an inside joke, or if it is, then I missed it completely. It was simply someone's idea, and I was intrigued by it. :)Thanks for reviewing!
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
It isn't an inside joke, or if it is, then I missed it completely. It was simply someone's idea, and I was intrigued by it. :)Thanks for reviewing!
You know, many of the finer da gambas have a lady's head for the scroll. I now picture one with a rather large nose...and a scowl. Definitely a scowl. lol.
That struck just the right note for me. Thank you.
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
I'm glad it did! Thank you for your review!
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I play the cello, so if I just give my imaginationa little turn to the left...
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
I'm glad it did! Thank you for your review!
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I play the cello, so if I just give my imaginationa little turn to the left...
Mmm... delicious.
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
Heh. Thank you!
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
Heh. Thank you!
~gigglesnerk~
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
*bursts out laughing*Yup. All your fault! :P
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
*bursts out laughing*Yup. All your fault! :P
Hahaha! Lovely naughtiness you all can get up to with just the right support & nudging--so glad the blame game created such sweet fun--love the 100 words exactly, but if you ever wish to share with us a longer version--we're eagerly waiting (perhaps, Narcissa's rehearsal sessions with Snape da gamba, or their improvisational or repitiious exercise ones? although Lucius would want to set the foreplay perimeters to his taste *such a control freak* - but that's why one can't resist him- lol!
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
*grins* If it weren't for the LBB and the exchange, I would probably be very, very tempted to explore the concept of an inanimagus. Oh, the possibilities!Thank you for the lovely review! <3
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
*grins* If it weren't for the LBB and the exchange, I would probably be very, very tempted to explore the concept of an inanimagus. Oh, the possibilities!Thank you for the lovely review! <3
Well, who would have thought... A few words goes a long way, don't they?
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
They do, yes! Though I find the concept of an inanimagus more intriguing than I would like, lol.Thanks for the review! *smooches*
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
They do, yes! Though I find the concept of an inanimagus more intriguing than I would like, lol.Thanks for the review! *smooches*
Oh, what extraordinary scenes we see, when we have friends like Owl and Tea! :)
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
LOL! Don't we just. :P Thank you!
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
LOL! Don't we just. :P Thank you!
Well played, Lady K!
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
*bows*Thank you!
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
*bows*Thank you!
And since the viola has a rather curvaceous feminine shape, that opens another range of perspective, eh?
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
Yes, absolutely! Unfortunately, I limited myself to a hundred words. :P
Response from moiramountain (Reviewer)
Well, ahem.... there's no rule against a longer sequel, now is there??
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
Yes, absolutely! Unfortunately, I limited myself to a hundred words. :P
Response from moiramountain (Reviewer)
Well, ahem.... there's no rule against a longer sequel, now is there??
That rather rubbed me the right way!!
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
I'm glad it was the right way! And thank you! <3
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
I'm glad it was the right way! And thank you! <3
Mmmmm, lovely!! And just the sort of surprise I was hoping for.
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
Aw, thank you so much! It is of course all your fault! *ducks and runs*
Response from TeaOli (Reviewer)
Owll's fault! Blame her and her love for music and Snape and... and... and talking about inanimgi one week, and Snapey voices weeks later. O! her insidious influence on me will be your my downfall.
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
Aw, thank you so much! It is of course all your fault! *ducks and runs*
Response from TeaOli (Reviewer)
Owll's fault! Blame her and her love for music and Snape and... and... and talking about inanimgi one week, and Snapey voices weeks later. O! her insidious influence on me will be your my downfall.
LMAO!! A delightful drabble! :D
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
*blushes* Thank you! I'll be careful next time before insisting on 100 words, LOL!
Response from karelia (Author of Snape da Gamba)
*blushes* Thank you! I'll be careful next time before insisting on 100 words, LOL!
And everyone wins here. Nice. ;)
Lucius is very generous indeed!