People Will Think You're Up to Something
Chapter 15 of 17
Advanced Smut MakingAuthor's Note: Whilst A Slytherin Seduction is named after the wonderful piece written by a fellow Muffliato member, it is not the same. Our version is tacky and nowhere near as awesome as the real thing. And many thanks to Lindsey for tagging and betaing!
Chapter Fifteen: People Will Think You're Up to Something...
Fitzwilliam Brinkley was a figure steeped in obscurity. Born and raised in the apartment above his bookshop, he had never felt particularly inclined to leave the sanctity of Hogsmeade. Why should he need to move his physical form when adventure could be found between the dusty pages of his books? Even as a student at Hogwarts, the magic of words had encapsulated him. He consumed his textbooks, excelled at his essays, but found very little inclination to practice physical spells.
He had not always manned the shop: that had been his father's responsibility. Instead, Brinkley had accepted a position as Assistant Librarian at Hogwarts. It was a job he adored. When he was not protecting his precious tomes from the rough grasp of students, he would find a secluded spot to read, to immerse himself in a world so very different to his own.
This segment of his life was idyllic, but it was doomed to fade. Two years after taking up his position at Hogwarts, Flourish and Blotts opened in Diagon Alley. Brinkley's father, Zachary, had assured his son that their vast clientele would not abandon them. Yet he had been wrong. Cheaper prices and ready access to their London based shop via Floo meant that within the space of a year Zuranders was all but abandoned.
Brinkley had attempted to aid his parents, sending home the majority of his pay packet. It was only a short time later he realised his money was being spent on cheap Firewhisky. His mother left, and his father took his own life two weeks later.
And so Brinkley had returned. Over the next few years he had reshaped his family's little bookshop. Removing all the texts available at Flourish and Blotts, he stocked his shelves with rare and beautiful volumes. At the same time, he made his keep selling filth to hormonal teenage girls. He did not ask questions; he did not want to interact with his customers. He just wanted to be left alone with his books.
Of course, Severus knew nothing of Brinkley's past, and he had little inclination to find out. Late though the hour was, Brinkley's attention did not waver from the dusty tome in which his upturned nose was buried. Swimming within a leather-bound ocean of knowledge, the aged bookseller barely noticed the tinkling bell, nor did it occur to him that he should have closed the shop hours before. What was the point?
To Severus, the sheer indifference of Brinkley only added to the appeal of the shop.
Sweeping the long ebony cloak from his shoulders, Severus placed it upon a tarnished hook jutting from the door frame. Had the Potions master been susceptible to sentimentality, he would have allowed a smile to grace his stern features. This tiny niche of a bookshop was so monumentally different to the lascivious den in which he had spent the last few hours. It was the equivalent of stepping into a hot shower after a day spent slicing particularly foul potions ingredients. In fact, comparing Hamilton and Flank to the nastiest contents of his storeroom brought Severus a momentary spark of joy.
Instinctually, he headed for the looming book case to the left of the door, eyes grazing the familiar spines. Moste Potente Potions. Potio Pallidus. The Art of Brewing. It always amused Severus that the students had such volumes within their reach, yet a fear of learning meant that they steered clear of the bookshop. Or, at least, most of them did.
It seemed like an age since he had first encountered Isolde Hamilton within these walls. In many ways he wished he had not. Life had never been particularly easy for Severus, but he had comfort, structure, routine. Like a hurricane, Isolde had swept into his sphere, uprooting everything in her path. The worst thing was: Severus could not even blame her for it! How could she help having a repulsive father? She could hardly be blamed that her family connections and fine looks had attracted the attention of that lecherous rat, Flank.
Annoyed that Isolde had infiltrated his thoughts once more, Severus found himself gravitating toward a previously unfamiliar nook of the shop. He had ventured there only once: the day he had found Isolde sprawled upon the bay window. It still amazed him that Brinkley had not been drawn from his reading by the girl's mewling, the moans roused by her apparently vivid dream. This particular memory proved unwelcome, and Severus was starting to wonder if he should have indulged in the morsel presented to him at the Mewling Quim. It had been a very long time since he had bedded a woman, maybe an unfeeling encounter of the flesh would distract him from Isolde?
The mere thought of such an action sickened him.
He would not become Ichabod Flank.
Snatching a glimpse at the bookshelf brimming with lascivious novels, Severus turned to the bay window. The cushions were haphazardly scattered over the worn crimson velvet, no doubt untouched since Isolde had lain upon it. Awkwardly, he perched upon the edge of the seat, reaching for a nearby cushion with long, calloused fingers. Though the material was worn, the softness of the furnishing was undeniable. No wonder Isolde had found herself so quickly ensconced by sleep.
It was only once he had moved the cushion that Severus noticed the harder object, thrown beneath the velvet puffs. A book. The book. Placing aside his cushion, he took the tome into his hands. It was light, both in weight and content, the worn cover a clear indicator that it had been cradled by many sets of hands, read by hundreds of eyes, women young and old seduced by its lewd contents. A Slytherin Seduction.
Cocking an eyebrow, Severus turned to the title page. No author had acknowledged the work. Perhaps the writer did not wish to be associated with it? Or maybe, they believed it added an air of mystery. Not allowing himself to ponder on this, Severus opened to a random page, his eyes falling on a thick block of prose:
"You look beautiful tonight." His soft whisper caressed her ear. "It is almost as though you have dressed...," she could feel his smile, "... for me."
"Black and green and are my favourite colours." She moulded her tone into syllables of defiance, ignoring his intoxicating proximity, his delicious smell. "Why the hell would I dress for you?"
He ignored her, his hand reaching down to cup her arse through the thin fabric. As she reached to slap away his unwanted palm, he removed it, something clasped in his fingers. A flash of green lace. Her knickers.
"You bastard, give those back!" She lunged at the blond, but he merely smirked.
"I think not. Surely, I deserve a small keepsake?"
Swivelling on her heel, she grabbed at his hand, only to have him once again draw her close, continuing the farce of a dance.
"Surely, you have better things to do than attempt to seduce me?"
"I have no intention of seducing you, Belle. Fucking you, absolutely, but trust me, seduction is entirely unnecessary."
Severus snorted, but nevertheless flicked through several more pages.
Kneeling before her now, he dragged her legs over the armrests of the chair, pulling the nightdress to her hips. More than anything, she wanted to push him away, but as long fingers began to caress her through the thin silk of her emerald green knickers, protestations turned to groans.
"These are very nice," he purred, "but I am afraid they must go." Pressing his thumb through the thin material, he ripped it open, tearing the flimsy garment in half. Leaning in, he blew upon the tender, exposed flesh of her sex before sampling her. His hands firmly placed on her thighs, she could not wriggle from the position had she even wished to do so. The only rational course of action was to curl her fingers in his platinum locks, revelling in the expert ministrations of his tongue.
"Mmmmmm, Tiberius." How easily his name poured from her lips, as though it were meant to. The two syllables caused him to smile against her clitoris, moving a hand away from her thighs to plunge double digits into her. Climax threatened, yet was cruelly snatched from her as he drew away. "You bastard," she snarled.
The longer he immersed himself within the text, the more Severus felt like he understood its most avid fan. Isolde was an intelligent young woman, surely aware that the fantasies portrayed within these pages would never be translated into reality. It was escapism then, pure and simple. An escape from her father, her housemates and probably, he conceded, him.
Severus leant back against the window, allowing the book to remain poised, open, in his fingers.
What was he going to do?
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If he'd found The Potion Masters Mistress instead, maybe he wouldn't have gotten such the wrong idea.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Have no fear - they will be crossing paths soon!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Have no fear - they will be crossing paths soon!
~kicks Albus~ So, Lucius thinks of his son as cannon fodder? Nice.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Yes, isn't it? Albus isn't much better in our eyes!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Yes, isn't it? Albus isn't much better in our eyes!
Lately I find myself checking back regularly to see if this particular fic has been updated...each chapter brings a smile, each chapter ends far too soon ^-^
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Thank you! We try to write/update as quickly as possible, but things have a horrible tendency to get in the way. Nevertheless, we do hope to have a few more chapters up soon - so keep a weather eye open. I'm glad you are enjoying Loyalties so much, and hope you continue to do so as the story develops and the plot thickens. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Thank you! We try to write/update as quickly as possible, but things have a horrible tendency to get in the way. Nevertheless, we do hope to have a few more chapters up soon - so keep a weather eye open. I'm glad you are enjoying Loyalties so much, and hope you continue to do so as the story develops and the plot thickens. Thanks for reviewing!
You so had me going at the beginning I had to flip back to the previous chapter end, lol!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
We do that a fair bit - because we are cruel :P Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and many thanks for reviewing!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
We do that a fair bit - because we are cruel :P Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and many thanks for reviewing!
I love how Draco is the comedic stooge all through this fic.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
There really is no other use for him! He can't exactly be villainous like he is to Harry Potter (seeing as Isolde is three years his senior!). He also lacks all the suave of dear Lucius. His loss!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
There really is no other use for him! He can't exactly be villainous like he is to Harry Potter (seeing as Isolde is three years his senior!). He also lacks all the suave of dear Lucius. His loss!
uh oh. That funny looking shape of things. That shape is pear.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Oh yeah, with more pear shaped goodness to come.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Oh yeah, with more pear shaped goodness to come.
Oh dear, poor Sev's arse is going to be hanging in the breeze. ~worries~
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Tehehehehehehe... the mental image your comment just roused in my head was both disturbing and hilarious. Indeed.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Tehehehehehehe... the mental image your comment just roused in my head was both disturbing and hilarious. Indeed.
That's going to be a difficult trick since the dress has gone the way of the smut. ~kicks Ichabod~
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Yay! Ichabod hate! This man deserves all the hate you can muster. ;)
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Yay! Ichabod hate! This man deserves all the hate you can muster. ;)
The plot thickens. Or is this the curse Isolde visited on herself by burning books?
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Well... they were smut... so I'm not sure exactly how much of a curse she would instigate. Trust me, the plot will soon become so thick it will beging to coagulate. We are cruel writers ;)
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Well... they were smut... so I'm not sure exactly how much of a curse she would instigate. Trust me, the plot will soon become so thick it will beging to coagulate. We are cruel writers ;)
This doesn't sound like a good time for Isolde to b isolated from her friends.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Indeed. But don't we all find that the best time to be with friends are those times when we wish to be left alone? Human nature is weird. Isolde will unfortunately realise that soon.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Indeed. But don't we all find that the best time to be with friends are those times when we wish to be left alone? Human nature is weird. Isolde will unfortunately realise that soon.
Isolde Hamilton was going to be his downfallWell i certainly hope so ;-)
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
You shall soon see! ;) Thanks again for reviewing.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
You shall soon see! ;) Thanks again for reviewing.
Draco just brings out that reaction in women
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
That he does. It's quite a shame he lacks the finess of his father, despite the fact that we don't exactly paint Lucius in the kindest light throughout this fic! Thank you for reviewing.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
That he does. It's quite a shame he lacks the finess of his father, despite the fact that we don't exactly paint Lucius in the kindest light throughout this fic! Thank you for reviewing.
Heehee, I'd wonderrd if he needed that potion for himself. Sev's mood might be improved by a decent smut collection.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Well, you never know. Perhaps it would help him loosen up a little? Unfortunately for dear Severus, I think the potion did him more harm than good. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Well, you never know. Perhaps it would help him loosen up a little? Unfortunately for dear Severus, I think the potion did him more harm than good. Thanks for reviewing :)
You just can't trust those tentacles of temptation. They never grab you by the ankle and force you to behave responsibly.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Unless the tentacle of temptating was tempting you to do something responsible like - the dishes. But then, that would be a depressing tentacle of temptation!
Response from Owlbait (Reviewer)
You can recognize the true tentacle of temptation by the soft irridescence of it's mucous, the velvety cling of it's suckers, and by the complete lack of dishes at the other end.
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Unless the tentacle of temptating was tempting you to do something responsible like - the dishes. But then, that would be a depressing tentacle of temptation!
Response from Owlbait (Reviewer)
You can recognize the true tentacle of temptation by the soft irridescence of it's mucous, the velvety cling of it's suckers, and by the complete lack of dishes at the other end.
Whew! Nice save, sometimes being overtired can concentrate the faculties :)
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Yes, she's a tough cookie, our Isolde! She puts in extra effort to impress Snape!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Yes, she's a tough cookie, our Isolde! She puts in extra effort to impress Snape!
Poor Isolde, all teenaged hormones and no help for it but reading smut :o)
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
A bit like us, really! Except we don't have the teenage hormones in our defence!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
A bit like us, really! Except we don't have the teenage hormones in our defence!
'The Potions Master's Mistress by Gabrielle Mercer." gigglesnort!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Wouldn't it be great if such a book existed?!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Wouldn't it be great if such a book existed?!
I discovered your story recently and I'm definitely hooked! I love your original characters, and the interactions between Isolde and Snape leave me breathless. I'll be eagerly waiting for you next update!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Thank you so much! It's so great to hear you are enjoying it! We really appreciate your feedback! The next two chapters are queued up!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Thank you so much! It's so great to hear you are enjoying it! We really appreciate your feedback! The next two chapters are queued up!
Great story! I can't wait to read more!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Many thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Many thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!
LOL Sometimes things come to mind at the most inconvenient times! :)
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
They do indeed! Thanks for the feedback!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
They do indeed! Thanks for the feedback!
How does one explain oneself out of this mess? :)
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
I know! Isn't it mortifying??!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
I know! Isn't it mortifying??!
Preparation is everything it seems. :)
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
We'll try anything if it'll get us into Snape's good books!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
We'll try anything if it'll get us into Snape's good books!
I'm in love with the bed. :D
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Even better if Snape's inside it!
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Hell, no, he'd take up space, hog the blankets, and probably snore! Mine, all mine! :D
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Even better if Snape's inside it!
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Hell, no, he'd take up space, hog the blankets, and probably snore! Mine, all mine! :D
Just when she thought she'd got away with it. :)
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Nothing gets past Snape!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
Nothing gets past Snape!
So good!!!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
So glad you're enjoying it!
Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)
So glad you're enjoying it!