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Saturday Night Drabbles Alas, Mistletoe – A Depraved Quartet
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Alas, Mistletoe – A Depraved Quartet

Amita

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Warning: Infidelity, Squick, Femslash, Complex prose. No socially redeeming values.

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10/10

nagandsev

Another brilliant gift of drabble tales whirling around a New Year's Eve to be remembered! Loved each one--the flowing energy of the text having a flowing domino effect like the rise and fall, cycle, of sexual acts revealed at different rhythms, allowed to culminate in teasing building the tension forms--all were exquiste--each one had me reacting differently--the first one with the frizzy-haired know-it-all married to Krum the neanderthal but in the throes of passionate fucking with her ex-Weasley was smugly delightful, the second one is wickedly delicious and befitting of a certain soused canon reporter with a climaxing house-elf's orgasmic cries as he comes of ''Bloody Newspapers! Filthy Rags! Mother Humping Public! Fuck Editors! Fuck Editors!” has me laughing out loud and grinning wickedly The third was a lovely erotic witch-on-witch erotic dance and creative culminations of mutual sexual appreciation, and the fourth has a bittersweet and melancholic aura about it--if pushed to peg them (but it doesn't matter in the least for the enjoyment and pleasure received from reading this--they could be anybody as far as I'm concerned, imho): Andromeda, Teddy, and the male character either a Severus or an original shadow of a man/person who finds himself graciously engaging and mutually reciprocating revealed human needs of the witch and himself. Very poignant ending to cap off the dream-like tone and mood 'she walked her grandson and him to her home as all the shadows of his years and sorrows became real, and her shadow when she woke that night in his arms was no longer a hard vacuum of finality.' Teared up, I did.Beautiful work! Just beautiful (and hot, arousing, funny, deliciously naughty, brilliant wordsmith on display, as always, gush, gush gush, etc.)--thank you for sharing!

Response from Amita (Author of Alas, Mistletoe – A Depraved Quartet)

Very glad you enjoyed this collection.  Dark and raunchy tales for the new year.  Yes, the prose style does try to propel the reader forward.  Thanks.

10/10

KingPig

Wow! This was incredible! I am so very impressed with the narrative style, it provided a very unique and fascinatingly vivid scene in each drabble, so refreshing and original!

Response from Amita (Author of Alas, Mistletoe – A Depraved Quartet)

Thank you very much.  I let the demons out in this quartet, and I'm surprised by a positive response.  May this help you quell your own demons.

7/10

Doomspark

The first three pairs were easy, but I've got no clue who the last pair is. Interesting style, by the way. I had to read each section slowly to get through the "wall o' text" effect.

Response from Amita (Author of Alas, Mistletoe – A Depraved Quartet)

This doesn't seem to be the place for experimental fiction, does it?  But if you think this is bad, try 'Knocked for a Hoop Loop.'

0/10

chyara

Afraid i went cross-eyed trying to read this.  It gave me a headache trying to read it without paragraph breaks..lol.

Response from Amita (Author of Alas, Mistletoe – A Depraved Quartet)

Drat.  It was supposed to produce another kind of ache. Perhaps a reader should take two aspirins and one drabble at a time.

Response from Amita (Author of Alas, Mistletoe – A Depraved Quartet)

I have added a warning about the prose in addition to the warnings about squick.

0/10

HermioneWeasley1972

I have to say that although I skimmed this that it was difficult to read without any periods within the paragraphs except for at the end. I could be wrong. What I did read was good, however. 

Response from Amita (Author of Alas, Mistletoe – A Depraved Quartet)

Thanks.  This type of narrative challenges the author to make sense despite the gush of prose, and it invites the participation of an audience that enjoys (we hope) unraveling twisty tales. 

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