Seven
Chapter 7 of 7
DoomsparkEWE. Marriage is not all roses and sunshine, when Nagini's venom proves unexpectedly potent. Angst, angst, and more angst.
Reviewed"House-elf Apparition," Harry said. "That's the only thing I've found, and I've been around the perimeter of your property twice. So Delky must have taken Snape somewhere." He raised a hand cutting off any questions. "Hermione, your wards are intact, so no one could have Apparated onto your property without alerting you. There are no signs of anyone else, human or otherwise, in the house. There's no other reasonable explanation."
"Where did they go?"
"The only thing I can tell you definitely is that they went west. I think they went a long way, hundreds of kilometers, and I'm fairly sure that they left relatively early in the day."
Despite herself, Hermione found her curiosity piqued. "How do you tell all that?"
"It's first-year Auror stuff. When you Apparate, it leaves behind a magical signature. It's more or less cone-shaped, with the point of the cone indicating the direction. The size of the cone tends to indicate distance to cross the Atlantic leaves a pretty big splash and the clarity of it shows a very, very rough approximation of how long ago the Apparition was cast. This is a big signature, but it's faded. It'll be gone in entirely in another hour or so." He shrugged. "I'd guess they ended up somewhere in North America.
"Why would they go there?" Her eyes widened. "I told Severus I was thinking about emigrating! I was going to tell him about the job, but I asked him about America!"
"How'd he take it?"
"Rather well. He said he wouldn't object if it was what I wanted."
"Did you tell him you were going to put him in St. Mungo's?"
Hermione shook her head. "It didn't come up. I'd been expecting a huge fight with him, but he was civil, almost friendly. It was..." She thought a moment. "It was like he already knew that was what I wanted, and he'd resigned himself to it."
"I hate to say this, Hermione, but that doesn't really sound like Snape." Harry yawned hugely. "Sorry. It's much more likely that he think you're betraying him and this is his way of punishing you."
"Harry!"
"Think about it, Hermione. He never was what you could call a nice guy, and being paralyzed made him a thousand times worse. Earlier tonight you mentioned that you'd never told him you'd been working, but did you ever wonder what he thought you were doing when you'd leave him alone all day nearly every day?" He shrugged. "I can tell you what I'd think. I'd assume my wife was having an affair."
Whatever reply Hermione was going to make was lost in the appearance of two disgruntled owls on the windowsill that hooted madly and then grudgingly consented to give up the messages they carried before flying off in a huff. She picked up the envelopes hoping to see Severus' familiar scrawl. Instead, one bore the Gringotts seal and the other... "Harry, who in the world is Maxwell Sebastian, Esq?"
"Max Sebastian? He's trouble. He's a solicitor, and his practice is just on this side," he held up two fingers a hair's breadth apart, "of legal. He's the one who defended the Malfoys at their trial and got them exiled rather than imprisoned. What's he want?"
"He sent an owl to Severus..." Hermione opened the envelope carefully, and then breathed a sigh of relief. "It just says that he couldn't make a meeting today and invited Severus to reschedule."
"Max is bad news. Max working for Snape is even worse news. Hermione, Snape... Severus, then. If he's hired Max Sebastian, he's planning something very, very bad. What's the other owl? Gringotts?"
"Yes..." she opened it, too dismayed to be upset by Harry's reading over her shoulder. "An inventory of our vault? Why would he want that? He'd only find out that we don't have a lot of money left, even with my salary."
"If he's thinking of hiring Max, he would need to know how much money he had available. Max doesn't work cheap; the Malfoys deeded him the manor and lands in exchange for the work he did for them because we'd seized their Gringotts vault." He grinned a bit wryly. "Of course, we insisted on going through the house top-to-bottom before we allowed the transfer, and we found a lot of Dark books and such which we confiscated." The grin faded. "Hermione, Severus is up to something. Something not good. I think it might be dangerous for you to stay here by yourself."
"Severus wouldn't hurt me!" But even as she said it, she remembered the impotent rage in his eyes as he shouted at her.
~*~
Snape woke up to a tingling in his fingers and toes. With waking came memory. He'd nodded his agreement, and Erias had touched him between the eyes with one long finger. Then nothing until now. He raised his head and looked around the room. It was almost wedge-shaped, with the door at the narrowest end of the wedge. At the widest end, sunlight poured in through a single large window. There was nothing in the room within his line of sight except for himself and the pad he was lying on. He felt himself flush when he looked down at himself and realized he was completely nude.
The tingling in his extremities was growing more pronounced, and spreading. It wasn't precisely painful, but it was somewhat uncomfortable. On the other hand, Snape thought to himself, at least he was feeling something again.
The door opened, and a Sidhe came in with a pack casually slung over one shoulder. "It was easier to cleanse the venom from your body with you asleep," he said by way of greeting. "The tingling is your nerves reconnecting. Once your body is recovered, we will mend your magic." At Snape's obvious amazement, the Sidhe grinned. "And to answer your next few questions, you were asleep for a day. You should be physically recovered in another day and completely healed in a week. Your clothes are here in this bag, as is your wand. You are our guest, not our prisoner; if you wish to leave, you have but to say so." Another grin. "And I am called Delchir"
Snape looked up at the Sidhe. There was something about the voice that was very familiar. "Are... were you Delky?"
"Oh bravo! Erias was right, you are quick. Yes, here I can assume my true form."
"Where is here, if I might ask?"
Delchir put down the pack and sat down next to it. "This is the Sidhe city of Kes Rihan. There are several among my people who wish to speak with you, so it was easiest to bring you here."
"Sensible," Snape agreed. He suddenly realized that he had been less than kind to the Sidhe who was sitting not three feet from him. "Delchir, I must apologize to you. I have treated you shamefully for years."
The Sidhe looked over at him; the grin had vanished, leaving his face a closed mask. "Are you apologizing because you now find yourself in my power, or do you truly believe your actions to be wrong?"
Snape took a long breath and thought before replying. "Both," he said finally. "The things I've said to you and about you, those were wrong and I have neither excuse nor explanation. And it's not likely that I would ever have admitted that to myself if I weren't in this situation."
"And when we go back, what then? For I will have to become Delky again, and obey the Geas."
"I have to return to England to speak to my people, to make them understand the situation. But you don't. You're a free elf by wizard law; you could stay here."
"And if I do, how will you find the Sidhe again? No, Severus, you will need me there. But remember who and what I truly am." Warning delivered, the grin flashed across his face again. "For now, try moving your hands and feet."
Snape did so, and was pleased to see that his fingers responded however slowly to his mental commands. "It's as if I was buried up to my neck in mud," he said as he continued his experiments flexing fingers, toes, wrists, ankles, and so on.
"That will pass." Delchir reached out and grasped Snape's hand. "Do you feel this?"
"Yes... I can."
"Excellent. You progress more rapidly than expected. Grip my hand in return, and pull yourself up so you are sitting. Good! Now, dress." The Sidhe shoved the pack over against Snape's legs. "No, this is no jape. To dress, you will have to move. It is an exercise for both mind and body." He crossed his arms and leaned against the wall nonchalantly. "Now."
Slowly, Snape complied, fighting with limbs that felt encased in a mire and muscles weakened by long disuse. Delchir had brought him clothing in the Sidhe style: a soft linen shirt that pulled over the head and laced up the front, belted knee-length loose leather trousers, and knee-high leather boots. It was just as well; Severus couldn't imagine trying to deal with all the buttons on his frock-coat in his current condition. By the time he'd wrestled himself into the shirt, he found that he was moving easier. And by the time he was completely dressed, he felt almost normal again.
"Bravo, Severus," Delchir applauded. "Rest for a moment and then try standing." He took two steps closer and held out a hand. "You've not been on your feet in years, so it may make you dizzy. Slowly now." Then, as Snape unfolded himself to his proper six feet. "There! Don't try walking just yet. Take the measure of standing."
Snape reeled as his head spun, and he felt Delchir's quick hands ease him back down so that he was sitting again. "That feels just a little short of the worst hangover I've ever had." He rubbed his temples futilely. "At least it doesn't hurt as much."
The Sidhe laughed. "It will pass. Take a long slow breath, blow it out again, and we shall try again."
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I am just roaming through my bookmarks tonight, leaving a note on those stories that haven't been updated for awhile. Just a quick message to say that I- and surely many others- would still love to see this updated. Happy writing!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
Working on it!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
Working on it!
Bravo, Severus is on the road to recovery. I'm surprised that Delchir made no mention of letting Hermione know what was going on.
Very interesting on the history of the elves - I mean to mention that.
Lastly, I hope that this has not been abandoned, only that the muses took a vacation because I find this truly fascinating and I would love to know how Hermione reacts, and he reacts to finding out about what she's been up to (love Harry drawing the same conclusiong that Severus did), not to mention if Severus is able to avert war with the Sidhe.
Well, that could be a fortuitous conversation with his house-elf. Hopefully he makes the decision, of course his absence will further worry Hermione, but frankly, she does deserve it.
Oh the hardheadedness just makes me want to scream.
Severus, whatever you are planning, it's not a good idea. You really should have a conversation with your wife. But we know he won't because he's that sort of guy.
Hermione, that wasn't a real conversation. You're just making it worse.
Oh the horrible misunderstandings that occur when folks don't communicate properly. I hope they can find a way to have a real conversation.
Oh, how horrible, for them both. Such a sad thing to happen.
I must tender apologies. When I read the initial chapter I thought of an old song "Delta Dawn" (?) and never read any further. However, today being a lovely morning out on the deck, and not wanting to start the day, decided to see where your story was headed. Nice surprise - I look forward to reading the rest of your tale.Although personally I think that Snape would be planning on quietly killing himself, so as to allow Hermione to go free. Thank you for your marvelous story crafting.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
Discard was originally supposed to be a one-shot. Then it sort of took on a life of its own. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
Discard was originally supposed to be a one-shot. Then it sort of took on a life of its own. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I'm sorry I haven't read the last two chapters up until now, and this is exactly where the story really unfolds. And oh, how interesting it's turning out to be! Severus speaking for the Sidhe, or Sidhe disguised as house elfs? Amazing. I wonder what will happen with that mess with Hermione now!
For once, I think Harry is right on the money about Snape. He's gone and assumed the worst about Hermione and, with Max apparently involved, he's most likely bent on destroying Hermione in every way possible. Whatever happens, somehow I think all this is going to come around and bite a certain Potions master right on the bum. I have a feeling all this is going to turn out very badly for everyone concerned.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
*whistles innocently*
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
*whistles innocently*
For once, I think Harry is right on the money about Snape. He's gone and assumed the worst about Hermione and, with Max apparently involved, he's most likely bent on destroying Hermione in every way possible. Whatever happens, somehow I think all this is going to come around and bite a certain Potions master right on the bum. I have a feeling all this is going to turn out very badly for everyone concerned.
Response from MuseAmusant (Reviewer)
Ooops, accidentally hit 'back' and posted this in the wrong spot. Sorry 'bout that.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
No worries - I've done that myself. And I'll just sit here and whistle innocently at your speculations.
Response from MuseAmusant (Reviewer)
Ooops, accidentally hit 'back' and posted this in the wrong spot. Sorry 'bout that.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
No worries - I've done that myself. And I'll just sit here and whistle innocently at your speculations.
Good to read an update. Part One of the second stage of the story...?At first it seemed doom-laden decay and sadness. Now the action begins.I wonder how Severus will speak for them, and how Hermione will fit in. I wonder how he will adjust to his changed circumstances. Thank you!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
Lots of fun and games in store, for sure!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
Lots of fun and games in store, for sure!
Oh, an angst-free chapter. Must be the calm before the storm. I am glad that Harry gave Hermione some things to think about. I would be worried that it is too late, but I suspect Severus needs her if he is to keep his bargain with the Sidhe.
So glad to see you back!
Delchir is surprisingly patient. :)
Delky! Ooh, very clever and sneaky, and I hope Severus does show "Delky" more respect from now on. I wonder whad Delky knows of Hermione's activities and the state of Severus' thoughts on his marriage. This Max Sebastian sounds like big trouble, and I hope Severus didn't sign a binding contract with him.
Delchir... amazing! Well done, Doomspark.
Bravo - you're back !!!!! I was thinking of this story the other day and wondering if you planned to return to it !!
You know I don't normally read angsty stuff, but this has got me intrigued. Did the first chapter used to be a stand-alone story? Because it seems very final to me. I'm scared because of the Character Death warning, but I'll try to bravely soldier on as you write.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
*grin* Discard was supposed to be a one-shot - but I got begged by my intrepid readers to expand it... and after that, it took on a life of its own.
Fascinating story. You have twisted it in a direction that I never saw coming -- that is the mark of really fine writer. The pain that Hermione and Severus both have seems almost insurmountable - so many misunderstandings, on both sides. Can't wait for the update.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
Discard was *supposed* to be a one-shot... but my readers asked me to expand on it, and after that it sort of took off on its own. I'm working on a new chapter.
Ooh, I like this! Well, I'm excited to see Snapey healed, and I just wonder if there is a catch to the Sidhe's bargain -- or if being their spokesman is really all they want from him. But how did Delky get involved? That Merlin was a cad, to enslave their people for 3000 years and to breed them like animals, so I hope Severus can represent them well and stave off a war. Now, what will Hermione think, and will Severus be allowed to tell her....Thank you for the new chapter! What a twist.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
*grin*There's always a catch when dealing with the Sidhe. Maybe they'll make Snape marry Umbridge.
Response from June W (Reviewer)
NOOOOOOOO!!!! Marrying Umbridge is a fate reserved for the wicked Merlin, but you'd need to resurrect Merlin first.
I like your history, it works nicely. Now, will Sev be bright enough to enlist Hermione's help?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
Will Hermione be willing to listen to him, or will she assume he's gone mad?*grin*
Interesting. Possibilities. If Snape goes as a messenger as he is it's unlikely they will listen. The WW is too complacent, used to lording it over other magical creatures. But if he were healed by magic beyond the WW ability and comprehension they might listen and negotiate....or prepare to fight.Hermione could end up caught between the two. She aught to be honest with Snape.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
Possibilities, definitely. Even I don't know what's going to happen next!
Hw'd be silly not to accept.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
True. And Snape is not silly.
Well, this is going nowhere near where I expected, and yet, I like it a lot. It is certainly a nice distraction from Severus' lousy life and marriage. And because I think that he and Hermione had something good, once upon a time, maybe they can work together on this and rediscover what they thought they'd lost. Maybe. *is hopeful*
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
I think Snape's going to discover his secret passion for Dolores Umbridge, while Hermione marries Goyle. *grin*
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Wipe that grin off your face! Ugh! *Dies a little* :)
Response from Doomspark (Author of Discard)
*grin* Even I wouldn't do that to my favorite HP couple.