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Orange Mocha Chapter 1: Orange Mocha
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Orange Mocha

1: Orange Mocha

Orange Mocha

Orange Mocha

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peppermint

Remus just wants decent coffee after a transformation.

Humor Romance Drabble/100-Word Petulant_LDWS 441 Words 1 Chapter Complete
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Remus gave the pale brown liquid in his mug an appraising glance before bringing it to his lips. He regretted this decision immediately, spewing a mouthful of truly atrocious coffee across the kitchen table in the basement of number twelve, Grimmauld Place. Peering into the mug again, he knew the cheerful daisies cavorting around the rim mocked him.

“Who made this swill?” he muttered, going to the sink to rinse the offending liquid from the mug and his mouth. “Two hours after a full moon, I just want a decent cup of coffee and I end up with this stuff,” he grumbled, pouring out the rest of the pot as well.

He tromped up the stairs in a fine snit, Summoning his cloak from where it rested on a hook in the hallway as he made his way to the front door, continuing his ranty monologue. “Can't even trust anybody to make good coffee around here, weak as the day is long, have to go out when I'd just like to sleep...” He flicked his wand at his shoes, growling a charm to tie the laces, and flung the door open, only to be met by a flying red and gold muffler, grey cloak, windblown curls, and the most heavenly aroma in the world – citrus aurantium amara paired with coffea arabica.

“Remus? Oh, you poor man. You tried to drink that awful coffee Molly left, didn't you?”

“Is that... coffee? Real coffee?” Remus asked hopefully, peering at the tray Hermione held in her gloved hands.

Hermione laughed, handing him the tray. “Yes, real coffee. Latte. Extra foam. Yours is the one with the chocolate powder on top – mine has cinnamo—”

Remus put the coffee down on the first step of the staircase, grasped Hermione's shoulders, and planted a loud, smacking kiss on her still-open mouth. He was just drawing his hands away when she grabbed the edges of his robe and sucked his lower lip into her mouth, humming in delight.

His head spun, but he managed to extricate himself from her grip, bemused. “It's like that, is it?”

She nodded, a charming blush adorning her cheeks as she removed her outerwear. “I'm afraid so,” she admitted. “I won't apologize.”

He laughed, scooping up the coffee in one hand and reaching for her with the other. “I wouldn't dream of asking you to.”

A/N: A determined search for the perfect cup of coffee leads to an even more satisfying discovery. Citrus aurantium amara = orange blossom, coffea arabica = arabica coffee.

Prompt: A determined search for the perfect cup of coffee leads to an even more satisfying discovery.


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Latest 25 Reviews for Orange Mocha

14 Reviews  |  5.71/10 Average

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peppermint

Adorable! I just love this pairing. 

Response from peppermint (Reviewer)

It's under-represented, as far as I'm concerned!

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debjunk

See what all that caffeine can do?

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

It's very useful, caffiene. :)

10/10

HBAR

If she is already anticipating his needs this early on, they may just have a good thing going.  I like these two together.  Nice choice.

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

Hermione's observant - she'd notice habits and routines :) I think they have a great thing going. Thank you :)

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sunny33

At least someone was looking out for him. :)

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

Remus needs someone looking out for him! I'm sure he's well able to take care of himself, but he's the type to appreciate a kind gesture, too. 

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

This is sweet! Coffee is obviously the way to Remus's heart :)

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

I think it's more than just the coffee, but the coffee was absoutely a good opener ;) 

10/10

Owlbait

Go Herms!

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

I know, right? Know what you want and go get it!

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magicknickers

Oh, this is my closet OTP. I love that Molly is the culprit! Hermione's refreshingly bold in this. Lovely job.

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

Oh no, don't let it be your closet OTP! RLHG needs shippers far outside the closet! :) And thank you!

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Lovely. Great job.

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

Thank you!

10/10

Aurette

Oh, I liked this one a lot!  Very compact, lots of emotion in a small space.  Well done indeed!

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

High praise! Thank you so much :)

10/10

Sampdoria

Absolutely loved it!

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

Thank you!

10/10

nagandsev

Yum! Go, Hermione, go for it!Love the grumpy Remus, and an *assertive* Hermione knowing just what he needs, of course - that's our Hermione! Lovely, enjoyable work!

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

Hermione knows just how to soothe the savage beast, as it were ;) Thank you!

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lady_rhian

This brought a huge smile to my face. :-) 

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

I'm so glad :) That was my intention. 

0/10

Rose of the West

Ooo... That's pretty intense at the end.  Great way to pack a punch with few words!

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

Thank you, I'm glad you thought so! 

10/10

blue artemis

Nice. 

Response from peppermint (Author of Orange Mocha)

Thanks!

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