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So Cold

Rose of the West

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Drabble/100-Word Malfoy Manor 328 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Lucius Malfoy Luna Lovegood

Lucius stands at an ending and a beginning.

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0/10

WriterMerrin

Oh... what an interesting take on the various relationships.  I've always had a hard time with L/L, but I can see something beginning this way, at least in his mind.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

It wasn't an easy one for me to see, either, I have to admit. Thank you for the review!

10/10

MollysSister

Goodness you almost had me feeling sympathy for Mr. Malfoy!!! I like this little drabble because there is so much backstory that we know from canon and obviously a bunch more that is only in your head. Clever!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

The thing about fan fic is that it has me feeling sympathy for the oddest people!I rely a lot upon the canon. It makes the little stories so much easier to tell. The bit that's not canon is Bellatrix realizing Narcissa lied to the Dark Lord and casting a nasty spell at her.Thank you for the review!

0/10

nagandsev

Lovely, poignant work! Love it that Lucius is open, and ready, for true unconditional love, however and from whomever it may come... beautiful!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

Thank you, again!

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nagandsev

Lovely, poignant work! Love it that Lucius is open, and ready, for true unconditional love, however and from whomever it may come... beautiful!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

Thank you!  Karelia posted the video on the forum and suggested this pairing. I'm glad this worked. 

10/10

sunny33

Just a promise.  He'll need to work for it though. :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

Yes.  He'll have to make a lot of new choices, but he seems to think it's time for that.  Thank you for the review!

10/10

June W

I'm glad you ended on a hopeful note.  If anyone can heal Lucius through love and acceptance, it would be gentle Luna.  Thanks for writing!

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

Thank you so much for your kind review!  I think that's true of Luna, too.

10/10

karelia

Oh, you made me shiver. Brava!And I ADORE your em dashes! <3

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

Shivering is good when it's so hot out, yes?Thank you for reading and reviewing!  I'm glad you liked it.

0/10

MHaydn

More ambiguouis than I could figure out, but I think hopelessness would have been a better ending.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

I see your point. I usually write a happy ending or try to find a happy ending in everything. Thank you for the review!

10/10

lyn_f

Nicely done, Rose! :)

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

blue artemis

Brilliant, just brilliant.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

Thank you so much!

10/10

Sampdoria

Loved it

Response from Rose of the West (Author of So Cold)

Thank you!

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