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Temptation

1: Temptation

Temptation

Pyttan

3 Reviews   |   3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

General Azkaban Prison 1,477 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Harry Potter James Potter Lily (Evans) Potter Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

She heard the sound of a door bursting open behind her and the metallic zinging of thrown hexes.

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Chapter 1: Temptation


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Member Since 2008  |  18 Stories  |  Favorited by 39  |  59 Reviews Written  |  809 Review Responses

I like to read, and I have this compulsion to write. 
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10/10

June W

Very tempting, to live and have a family with Severus, but we all know how Voldy's promises don't quite turn out the way he first says.  Still, I'm glad she could see that Severus would have loved her and been a good father.  Thanks for sharing!

Response from Pyttan (Author of Temptation)

Yes, I think Lily mourned her lost friendship with Severus, and Tom would use that wouldn't he? Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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moiramountain

Tom would do that would'nt he ?  Take your deepest desires and twist them into something so terrible... I've never seen this perspective of Lily presented before - very astute and well done!   

Response from Pyttan (Author of Temptation)

Thank you. I have thought a lot about Lily and that night. This is where I ended up. I'm so glad you liked it.

10/10

BellatrixLives

I very much enjoyed this glimpse into Lily's last moments.  It was very well written and very believable! 

Response from Pyttan (Author of Temptation)

Thank you so much for your kind words.

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