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Forbidden Forest Making Happy
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Making Happy

1: 1.Where Harry Can't Avoid The Past

2: 2. Where Normal Life Resumes

3: 3. Where They remember, and Something Serious Happens

4: Where Chaos Ensues, And A Door Opens

5: Where They Wait, And So Do We.

6: Where We Revisit A Memory

7: 7. Where Severus Makes A Decision

8: Where Lives Are Saved

9: Where Harry Learns A Little

10: Where Severus Accepts An Invitation.

11: Where The World Spins

12: Where Foundations Are Laid.

13: Where We Move Forward In Time.

Making Happy

neelix

80 Reviews   |   80 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Drama Romance Erotica Smut Slash Forbidden Forest 20,461 Words 13 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Harry is confronted by things he would rather ignore.

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Chapters (13)

Chapter 1: 1.Where Harry Can't Avoid The Past

Chapter 2: 2. Where Normal Life Resumes

Chapter 3: 3. Where They remember, and Something Serious Happens

Chapter 4: Where Chaos Ensues, And A Door Opens

Chapter 5: Where They Wait, And So Do We.

Chapter 6: Where We Revisit A Memory

Chapter 7: 7. Where Severus Makes A Decision

Chapter 8: Where Lives Are Saved

Chapter 9: Where Harry Learns A Little

Chapter 10: Where Severus Accepts An Invitation.

Chapter 11: Where The World Spins

Chapter 12: Where Foundations Are Laid.

Chapter 13: Where We Move Forward In Time.


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neelix

Member Since 2008  |  21 Stories  |  Favorited by 471  |  528 Reviews Written  |  2,066 Review Responses

Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.

Work with teenagers.

Obsessed with Alan Rickman and SS/HG fiction.

Feel free to add me on Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/neelix.sshg

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10/10

HBAR

A new story from Neelix *jumps up and down clapping like an idiot*Constructive feedback?  Well, I don't have any yet, but I will worry you with this:  I don't read much Snarry.  It is one of the few pairings that I have a hard time believing.  You not only have the differences in age, and personality and such (all of the things that HG/SS have stacked against them), but then there is just a lot of bad blood there.  It's not that I don't think enemies can come around and blur the lines between passion and hate.  There are just a huge amount of hurdles to overcome with this pairing.That having been said, it can be done well.  I've read it a few times.  I have complete faith in you to do them justice, so I am going to stick with this.  How can I not?  The beginning was so intriguing.  You've told us nothing and I want to know so much more.  Kudos to you for branching out.  Please tell me this is finished and updating regularly *looks at you with puppy dog eyes*

Response from neelix (Author of Making Happy)

Hello! *waves*I laughed at your 'age' reasoning - Harry and Hermione being the same age and all that!I know exactly what you mean about Snarry's. They take a while to get your head around and some are definately more believable than others. I'm writing this because I need to challenge myself in terms of writing, hence the first person narrative and the different pairing.I have to say it is not finished but I do have a few chapters complete and I know where it's going. I'm on extended leave from work (I'm off with stress / depression to be honest) so I'll be writing like a mad thing in the coming days.Thanks for reading, as always xx

Response from HBAR (Reviewer)

Oh the H/H age front, my intention was that Snarry has all of the same problems as SS/HG--age included-- but so much more.  And anyway, she is like ten months older.  That's huge, LOLIt just occurred to my why SS/HG don't get a smashed up name of their pairing: calling them Herpe really changes the tone of the pairing :)I'm sorry to hear that you are stressed/depressed.  Nothing like throwing yourself into writing to dig you out a bit, eh?  I think first person must be very difficult to write because few tackle it. For me it is workiing wonderfully so far, so keep up the good work.  I do hope you are feeling better soon.  I haven't officially suffered depression, but stress ... there is a thing where I am practically an expert at.  It can really eat you alive if you let it, and sometimes it is hard to know how to do anything but let it *hugs you and encourages you to write like mad if it helps ... or even if it doesn't  :) *

Response from neelix (Author of Making Happy)

Thank you, I apprecaite that x

10/10

MollysSister

Well now there seems to be vast oceans of information you have not told us readers! On with the show!

Response from neelix (Author of Making Happy)

There would be no fun if I told you everything immediately, would there? lol!Thank you for reading x

10/10

orlando switch

Complicated and therefore interesting... Is this one of those occasions again in which Snape is making things more difficult than neccesary by being stubborn?Hope you'll update soon..

Response from neelix (Author of Making Happy)

A snake rarely changes his scales... well, actually, they do don't they?Guess it's a case of wait and see. Thanks for reading :)

10/10

Marty21

Interesting start look forward to see how this develops.

Response from neelix (Author of Making Happy)

Thank you, I'm happy people are reading already x

0/10

mamabear55

Great!  Loved it!   But is it the end? It could be but then again it does say no in the summary.  But these sites don't always show if a story is finished or not.  Need your advice if this story continues....   Waiting to hear from you  hurry hurry!  

Response from neelix (Author of Making Happy)

Panic not. If I write a one shot I always put it in the author's notes. This is a chaptered story and nowhere near completed yet. Thanks for reading :)

Response from mamabear55 (Reviewer)

Thanks for the quick response.   And YAY!  nice long story on the way.   Just out of curiosity, how many wonderful chapters can we look forward to????  You always make them so we can't put the story down!It makes it hard to get anything else done, but who cares as long as the story is good, the rest can wait.  Keep on writing.

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