Knickered - II

Amita

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A mild sequel.

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10/10

nagandsev

Sweet and flowing--love the build up between these two; there's a sweet innocence and discovery of each other, establishing the possibility for more to be developed, and enjoy having Pansy portrayed more complicated and caring about being cared for and caring for another--lovely that it's Harry--lovely character portrayal!

Response from Amita (Author of Knickered - II)

Thanks. Your review describes what the story tries to do. Even though it's a bit farcical, it attempts a realistic portrayal of Pansy being attracted to another. Meanwhile, Harry is slowly discovering she's a girl - an attractive one who cares for him - even though he is not ready for such a thing.

0/10

Raye

I was trying to think of something to say other than the words I uttered when I finished this little tale, but I couldn't so I will type them anyway - "that was sweet"...

Response from Amita (Author of Knickered - II)

Thanks. I did try to give it the light touch.

10/10

snitchette

Ohhhh !!! I hope there are so many more students affected by the potions. Please!!! This is so much fun!!

Response from Amita (Author of Knickered - II)

You want more students who are Drepraved Undie Influenced?

0/10

debjunk

She's worse than Tonks!!! LOL. Cute.

Response from Amita (Author of Knickered - II)

She's more dangerous than Tonks, too.

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