This is so lovely and cute! I love Severus being unsure and then doing the seduction boy.

very spot on characterizations.  brava, my deb!  mucho smoochies from one of your most devoted fangirls! 

I half expected him to decide against revealing himself.  That would have been too sad.  Thanks for the happy ending!

I liked that.  I like her initial surprise, and his belief that she wouldn't want him.

Nicely written.  Lifts a cliche out of the ordinary.

Sweet.... poor Severus, that must have been a nerve-wracking time. Glad things worked out for him... thank you.

"I'm rather thrilled, if you must know."This line, and the paragraph before, are the beautiful essence of SS/HG.

Absolutely loved it:-))

Sounds like he almost chickened out! ;)