Chapter Five: He's My Date, Ron
Chapter 5 of 17
MMADfanDraco and Ginny go into Hogsmeade together and have an unexpected encounter.
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Chapter Five: He's My Date, Ron
Saturday dawned brightly, and considering the rainy weather of the previous few days, it seemed to bode well for the Hogsmeade outing. Draco had been correct, and it did seem that half the staff was accompanying the students that day, although Professor Snape had stood inside the gate, arms crossed, watching as everyone left, then he and Rath had closed and warded the gates behind them. There were several Aurors scattered about the village, at least eight, Draco thought, and between them and the teachers, Draco didn't hold out much hope for catching some time alone with Ginny.
As Ginny had suggested, they joined long and lanky seventh-year Slytherin prefect, Chip Thackery, who wore his Snape's Slytherin gold-and-silver double snake ring that day, Niamh Donovan, the Ravenclaw Head Girl, and Luna Lovegood.
"Where to first?" Ginny asked.
"I want to stop at the Quidditch supply shop, if that's okay with everyone," Niamh said.
"Whatever your heart desires, desire of my heart!" Chip said, planting a kiss on the top of her head.
Draco hid his grimace with a cough. "Yeah, that's fine with me, too," he said.
The others concurred, but Luna hung around just inside the door, looking out at the street.
"Expecting someone?" Niamh asked her.
Draco wandered over to the display of Snitches.
"Yeah," Luna said. She giggled. "The 'desire of my heart.'"
Draco rolled his eyes at Ginny, who grinned and picked up a pair of racing gloves.
"Did you see him in your flower petals during Divination this week?" Chip asked with a smirk.
"No, I see him right now," Luna said calmly. She opened the door and waved at someone out on the street.
Draco turned to look out the large window that faced the street. He could feel the blood drain from his face. He grabbed Ginny's arm, and she turned toward him, ready to complain about his grip, then she saw his expression, and she followed his gaze.
"Oh my . . ." she breathed.
Niamh looked almost as stunned as Draco and Ginny, but Chip was grinning his wrinkled bulldog grin.
"Luna!" Niamh said urgently. "Why didn't you tell us that Ron was meeting you?"
Luna shrugged, and Niamh looked at Draco and Ginny, then up at Chip. "Chip, take Draco somewhere, anywhere. Ginny, you can stick with me."
"And where are we supposed to go?" Chip asked. "And how are we supposed to get there?"
Indeed, it was too late for anyone to leave the broomstick shop, even by Apparition; Ron was right outside the door, and now he was stepping in, leaning toward Luna, and kissing her lightly.
Ginny took a breath and stepped forward. "Ron! Hey! I didn't know you were going to be in Hogsmeade this weekend. I thought the Cannons were playing Puddlemere today." She threw her arms around him.
"Wotcha, Gin! I don't have to be at the stadium until two, and the game begins at four. Wish I could bring you! I'll be starting Keeper today." Ron's gaze moved from Ginny's face to the back of the shop, where Draco stood looking at children's starter brooms. An expression of distaste crossed Ron's face. "Let's get out of here. I'll treat you and Luna to a pastry at Puddifoot's. Are Niamh and Thackery coming, too?"
Niamh and Chip were watching with interest, wondering what would transpire and how Ginny would handle this.
"They might, and so's Draco..."
"Oh no, leave him here to play with the toys," Ron said with an undisguised sneer. "Just his thing, innit?"
"We can't. We're in pairs, and he's my partner," Ginny said firmly. When Ron just stared at her, she added, "My date. I'm sticking with him. But you and Luna go have something at Puddifoot's. I'm still full from breakfast anyway."
Ron gaped, then he whispered, "Ginny, you can't mean..."
"I made a pig of myself this morning," Ginny said blithely. "The house-elves made waffles, and I must have eaten six, at least. I couldn't eat anything right now."
Luna, who had been watching impassively, took hold of Ron's elbow and began to pull him out the still-open door. "C'mon, Ron, I want a cream-filled cauldron cake."
When the door had closed behind Ron and Luna, Ron still looking back at the shop open-mouthed as he limped away, Niamh said, "Well, that wasn't half awkward."
"Yeah, but our Gryffindor witch handled it with aplomb, wouldn't you say, Newman?" Chip said.
Draco stepped over and put his arm around Ginny. "As could be expected," he replied, though he actually felt an acute sense of relief. He kissed the side of her head. There had been a part of him that had feared that Ginny might disavow him, or presumed that she would at least minimise her association with him. He grinned. Well, now that Ron knew, it seemed there was no need to pretend they weren't together on a date. He kissed her temple and gave her a squeeze.
"I'm glad that Luna was quick-thinking enough to get Ron out of here before he could decide to make a scene," Ginny said. "I actually didn't know they were seeing each other again, although over Easter, Ron did say he had made a mistake breaking up with her when he did."
"That wasn't the classiest thing he's ever done," Chip said, "breaking up with a girl after she was nearly killed and was so badly injured with those . . . scars. Downright cheesy, I'd say. It's good of her to take him back."
Draco gave a slight shrug. "He probably wanted to escape everything. Seeing her probably reminded him of . . ." Draco looked over at Ginny, then decided that it was one thing to be sensitive to her feelings and another to completely avoid very large, if uncomfortable, topics. "Reminded him of the battle, of all the losses. I can understand that."
Ginny nodded. "I think you're right. He said something like that to me, actually, though not about Luna. I'm glad you're understanding, Draco."
Another group of students came into the shop, and Niamh turned to find the broomstick maintenance kit she wanted.
"We'll meet you outside of Honeyduke's," Ginny said. "It's getting a little crowded in here."
Niamh and Chip agreed, and Draco and Ginny left the broomstick shop and strolled together down the street toward the sweets shop. Draco half-expected an angry mob to descend and pelt him with spell-born rocks for walking down the street with his arm around a Weasley, but no one seemed to even give them a second glance. He relaxed.
"What are you going to tell Ron? Or actually, what are you going to tell your dad?" Draco asked. "Ron's not likely to keep this to himself."
Ginny shrugged. "I don't know. I think my dad wants me to be happy, and even if he were a little worried about you, I think he'd give you a fair chance. I don't think he'd judge you by your father, anyway."
"Good thing, too, 'cause I think they hate each other. Or did. I don't know if my father has enough strength to hate anyone that much anymore. He still doesn't like him, though, I'm sure."
"Well, let's not let them make us into some kind of Romeo and Juliet, okay? Life has enough drama in it without that."
"A couple years ago, I would have asked you who they were, but I read all of Shakespeare's plays whilst in Sweden," Draco said.
"You're ahead of me, then. I only know that they're some kind of star-crossed lovers from one of his plays, like the young witch and wizard in the 'Tale of Timothy and Esmeralda,'" Ginny said.
Draco groaned. "That story is even worse, and not as well told, either."
"I don't know . . . we had a storybook written by my Great-great Grandfather Prewett...or was it 'great-great-great'? Anyway, it had a lot of illustrations in it, and that was one of the stories he told, about how their fathers hated each other and their hatred fated the young lovers to an early and tragic death. It seemed very romantic when I was about eight," Ginny said with a grin.
"I think we had the same book in our library," Draco said. "It was one of the ones I learned to read out of. Very florid, with a lot of tragedy. Definitely to be avoided!"
Ginny laughed. "Right! No tragedy for us! We'll keep a sharp eye out to avoid it!"
The two continued their stroll to Honeyduke's, where they leaned against the wall and talked, waiting for Niamh and Chip, until one of the shop workers came out and told them not to lean against the shop wall. Ginny rolled her eyes, but Draco apologised respectfully and explained they were waiting for friends to arrive. The wizard huffed sharply through his teeth at that, but didn't say anything more, leaving them to wait outside the shop.
Finally, Niamh and Chip came into view, and Ginny waved. When Niamh waved back, then made a shooing gesture, Ginny took Draco's arm and the two went into the sweets shop.
"I loved those truffles you gave me," Ginny said. "It was a sad moment when I ate the last one!"
"We could get more," Draco said.
"I think I'd like to save having truffles for special occasions...like as unexpected presents," Ginny said with a grin. "I'd love a bar of dark chocolate, though. One of those big, double-thick ones. I can make them last a week, sometimes longer."
Draco grinned and bought them each one of those, then he bought an acid pop for himself, after Ginny declined.
"I'm going to get Sefton some buzzing humbugs . . . green apple and peppermint this time, I think," Draco said. He pointed out the humbugs to the witch behind the glass counter, and she filled a small white bag with them.
Ginny grinned as they stepped away from the counter to let Niamh and Chip order some sweets. She told them that they'd meet them in the Three Broomsticks at noon, then said to Draco, "It's really cute to see Suzie tag along after you, you know? She doesn't do it as much as she used to, but it was like you had a little puppy bouncing behind you."
Draco gave a crooked smile. "Yeah, well, she was a bit lost at first and needed some help, and she's a smart kid, so I didn't mind. She's a lot more Slytherin than I'd have thought when I first learned she was Muggle-born. But she's really sharp, especially about people."
"Do you think she has a crush on you?" Ginny asked curiously.
Draco shook his head and stuck his acid pop in his mouth as they stepped outside the shop. "Nah," he slurred around the pop, "don't think sho." He took the acid pop from his mouth and said more clearly, "She does have a big crush on our Head of House, though." He laughed and wrapped up his pop for later.
"On Snape? You're kidding?!"
"No. Perfectly serious. I think it may have died down to a mere case of hero worship lately, though. But she thinks he's terrific. Has ever since she tossed her cookies on him back before the Sorting."
Ginny laughed. "Oh, Merlin! That's funny! I can't imagine that! A crush on Snape!" Ginny laughed again. "I mean, I can see it maybe for an older student, that whole untouchable wounded-and-brooding look, but for a first-year? I thought he scared them all so bad they wet themselves just thinking about him!"
Draco snorted a laugh. "Not her, not even after vomiting all over him. Maybe that's a sign of love to Muggles or something! Vomit!"
"Oh, Draco, you're terrible!" Ginny said with a laugh.
"Yeah, I can see the courtship rituals now, who vomits first, the colour of the puke..."
"Draco, stop it!" Ginny said, convulsed with laughter. "You're going to make me sick!"
"She threw up on me, too," Draco continued with a grin, undeterred even after Ginny punched him in the arm. "It was purple, so apparently purple puke is not indicative of true lurve." Ginny punched him again. "Ouch! Okay, okay! You win, Weasley! You sure pack a punch!" He put up his hands in mock surrender, but then grabbed her with one arm around her neck and pulled her back toward him, pretending to be about to choke her, but giving her a kiss on the cheek.
"Hey! No roughhousing," a deep voice behind them said.
"Oh, er, we were just . . . just fooling around," Draco said, turning to see who was speaking to them, and going pale.
Ginny, still flushed from laughing so hard, pushed some hair back from her face and smiled up at the tall young Auror. "Sorry, sir. My fault."
"You're Ginevra Weasley, aren't you?"
Ginny nodded.
"I knew your brother Charlie quite well in school. When you see him, tell him that Clovis Hutchins said 'hi.'"
"Okay, I will. And we'll behave more properly," Ginny said.
Clovis gave a quick grin. "I have to earn my pay. Don't worry about it, Ginevra."
"Thanks, Clovis!"
When the young Auror had moved away, Draco took Ginny's arm and began to walk quickly down the street.
"I'm sorry about that, Draco."
Draco shook his head. "It's all right." He shot her a smile. "I was getting a little disgusting."
"Yeah, you were. Downright revolting! Purple puke!" Ginny shuddered and laughed.
"It was purple. Suzie'd been eating Droobleberry-flavoured buzzing humbugs...turns out she's allergic to Droobleberries...and they turned her vomit purple. And it was all over my best student robe, too. It was the first day of classes."
Ginny shook her head. "I'm surprised you let her hang around you after that."
Draco shrugged and pushed open the door to Scrivenshaft's for them, ringing a set of bells. "I don't know, maybe it was a bonding experience or something, if not true lurve! Anyway, she was mortified and pretty sweet." She had also seemed to like Draco just for himself right from the start, which was an unusual experience for him.
"She's going to go down in Hogwarts history as the girl who came to Hogwarts and the first thing she did on getting to the school and stepping off the boat was throw up on the Head of Slytherin...and she not only survived it, she was Sorted into his House!"
The two looked at the various quills and some quill boxes and stands, then Ginny pointed at a fountain pen display. "Some of those are cool."
Draco nodded. "Not very traditional, though," he said dubiously.
"The Headmistress uses one sometimes. She has one that is black with gold on it. It's really posh looking."
"They are nice . . ."
"Interested in our fine writing instruments?" the shopkeeper asked as he stepped up to them, a genial smile on his face.
"Not today, but they are nice," Draco said politely.
"That red one is beautiful," Ginny said, pointing to one that was a deep, lustrous red.
"Ah, yes, and that one comes standard with a self-filling charm, as well, so as long as your Charmed inkwell is nearby and has ink in it, your fountain pen will not run dry," the shopkeeper explained. "But for just one Galleon and one Sickle extra, we can place the charm on any fountain pen you purchase."
"Maybe I'll ask for one for my birthday," Ginny said with a smile. "Thanks for your help."
"There are also some very nice fountain pens with Hogwarts themes, including ones for each House. That brighter red fountain pen there...here, I'll show you." The wizard opened the case and took out a scarlet-coloured pen. "You see it has a Gryffindor shield on it here on the clip, and there are ones like it in Ravenclaw blue, Hufflepuff yellow, and Slytherin green, and each comes with two bottles of ink, one black and the other in the same colour as the pen."
"Yellow ink?" Ginny said sceptically.
"I know...I'm Hufflepuff, myself, and I never found a use for yellow ink," the shopkeeper said with an amused smile. "It looks quite well in the other colours, though. You, sir, you're a Slytherin, correct?" the shopkeeper asked Draco.
Draco nodded.
"This is our best Slytherin pen set. Emerald green with an emerald chip on the clip. It has silver accents, as you can see...genuine silver, not alloy...and includes the self-filling charm, a special ebony and silver case, and a matching Charmed inkwell, also with silver accents."
"Very . . . well executed," Draco said, trying to be diplomatic. He wondered what Snape thought of fountain pens . . . They would be easier to carry about than a quill. They looked very slick, even the ones without the extras.
"I think we're just looking today," Ginny said.
"We also have a fine supply of notepaper charmed with the respective House shields at the top, and it can be personalised for a modest fee," the shopkeeper said.
"I'll remember that. Thanks!" Ginny replied with a smile.
The two left the shop, bells jingling after them.
"I got the feeling he didn't like people looking and not buying," Draco said.
"I didn't. I think he just likes all of the stuff he sells. Besides, on a Hogsmeade weekend, for every person who just looks, there's another one who buys. I don't think they actually mind."
"I do have to stop at the apothecary," Draco said. "I need more Shrivelfig and a few other things, then we can meet Niamh and Thackery at the Three Broomsticks for lunch."
Ginny looked up at the clock tower. "Yeah . . . and if we're really lucky and time it well, we might meet Luna and her date, too."
"Don't remind me," Draco groaned.
Ginny laughed. "I need a new glass stirring rod, and another birch one, so a stop at the apothecary's good for me, too."
Author's Note: The story of Suzie Sefton and her arrival at Hogwarts is in the four-chapter story, "The Sorting of Suzie Sefton."
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love he scenes between severus, draco & former headmaster, in last couple of chapies!!! wish there more story on draco & how he returned to hogwart to finisheing his school.. love the relationship develop between draco & ginny! update real soon..
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Thanks! I'm very glad you are enjoying it! I have a few more chapters up my sleeves, so to speak, and although the last couple will have to wait until A Long Vernal Season catches up to the point (to avoid spoilers for LVS for those reading both fics), I hope to post the next chapter within the week.I'm glad you enjoyed seeing Draco's interactions with Snape & with Dumbledore, as well as the relationship with Ginny. :-)Thanks very much!
Oh, you! You made me cry! Your talent for description is seen here, dear. And I loved that Draco lost his composure a bit when he was trying to ask Madam Pomfrey for the potion. lol! It did look like Poppy expected a totally different conversation with our young wizard here. Also, the fact that Draco said he loved Ginny was a surprise, even to him. I mean, we know and he knows, but I also didn't think he would say it. I suppose it was the moment as he thought.Lovely chapter. Thank you!Stef
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Aw, thanks! (Not that I wanted to make you cry, but . . .)Yes, he wasn't the cool guy when he had to ask Poppy for that sort of potion, was he? ;-)Thanks very much for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Okay, so I couldn't find Chapter 14 in my reserves so I came here to find it. And I must say, I quite enjoyed it.Ginny's response to Draco's story was very funny. I sort of felt bad for him. I do like how his character is evolving though.I apologize for being a very bad friend lately.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Oh, you haven't been a bad friend! Just a busy one! Life gets that way sometimes! (I didn't want to overload you!)I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Yeah, Ginny's response was embarrassing for Draco!Thanks muchly! <<<<---a dragon for you!
My lucky day for updates! lolI have to say that I'm surprised Harry didn't destroy the letter but I'm glad he didn't. I think it's important for him to read what Draco had to say and to maybe come to understand what Ginny sees in him.I hope, in time, Draco will come to open up to Ginny about what happened but at least he was open and honest with her about his reluctance. I'm so glad to see that your Muse is happier and being cooperative again. I'll look forward to more updates!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. As you say, it is significant that at least Draco indicated to Ginny that there was more to discuss than NEWTs, and that there's something that he finds too difficult to talk about, at least at that point.We can keep our fingers crossed for my Muse! I hope she'll stick around! LOL!Thanks for the review!
yay! an update!! I think it was very good of Draco to write to Harry, I hope Harry will understand that Ginny wasn't meant for him and be able to move on. Draco needs more time to cope with his choices before he can talk to Ginny I believe, but it's very nice that she's willing to wait and that he knows that. I can't wait to read more!!Will you update LVS and CSG soon? yes? pleeeaaaseeeeeSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
I wish I could say I am updating LVS and CSG, but unfortunately, I can't. I am, however, making some headway on the short fic I've been working on, so that will be here soon -- I hope!I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter -- thanks for the review!
Man, haven't we all had days like Ginny's? I can totally relate to her view on the world some days. But, I'm glad Draco was there to take care of her. That's truly a new side of him and one that is a definite improvement over the ones from JKR's books.I love that he had to go to Poppy and she was super concerned, too. I wonder if she and Severus had a little chat about the Ginny/Draco situation? tee hee.Thanks for the update and I'm still eagerly awaiting an update on the Poppy/Severus story as well as the Johannes/Siofre one!!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Oh, yeah, Ginny's day was familiar to many, I assume! LOL!I figured that if Draco had a way out, plus the time and space -- and distance from his peers & pureblood society -- he might grow up to be a bit different than he was able to be. Being whisked away in March of his sixth year did him a world of good.I know that Poppy & Severus had had a couple chats about the two -- don't ask me how I know! It's just one of those mysterious things! LOL! (Yeah, I'm a nut! haha!)I'd love to write more of the Johannes/Siofre chappie that I started way back in October. I'm beginning to go into withdrawal, myself! So maybe we'll both be lucky, and I'll have the time & energy to do some writing this week.Thanks much for the review! Glad you enjoyed it!
yay!!! an update!!! I was so worried you had given up on this!! I hope this means that updates for LVS and CSG are coming soon, yes? lol. I loved, loved, loved this chapter! Draco was just wonderful!! it's funny because always run for the hills when that time comes! LOL, I loved it that he was ready and willing to help, it was just so cute! I can't wait for the next chapter! Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
I've been really busy lately, so I haven't written anything in weeks, but I had this chapter sitting in reserve, and I decided there was no point leaving it there!If things settle down some in the next week or so, I might be able to get a little writing done. We'll see! I have more of LVS written, but I've decided to wait to post until I have most or all of the story written. If I can get the next chapter of CSG written & polished, though, I'll post that as soon as I can. :-)I'm glad you enjoyed that chapter -- I think Draco was glad that the potion worked, that's for sure! lol!Thanks very much for your review!
Sorry it took me so long to review. Real life happened and it detained me! I can't decide if it's funnier when Snape was actually having the conversation with Draco or if it's funnier when he retells the story for Ginny. Either way, I had a huge grin on my face. tee hee.I think it's really sweet how Draco's feelings for Ginny are developing and he's slowing starting to see his future with her by his side. awww.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Ah, yes, RL! that thing that's always interfering with fanfic! LOL!I'm glad you enjoyed the chappie and found it amusing. :-) Yep, Draco's really gotten serious about her!Thanks for the review!
aaawwwww, this chapter was soo sweet! I'm liking Draco more and more, he's great! I love it that he likes thinking of marriage now that he's with Ginny, I hope they do get married sometime in the future! I can't wait for that dinner with Arthur, that's going to be fun! thanks for the updateSam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this little chapter. Draco's definitely serious about her.Thank you for your review!
oh this was so sweet
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Thank you,
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Great chapter title!!!I could love to have been a fly on the wall when Severus had that chat with Draco. I bet that was one for the books! tee hee. And I bet Snape had to have a little chat with Poppy about how to proceed with that conversation, or at least to obtain the little blue book. Draco calling Snape "Dad" was priceless!!!!Loved this chapter!!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Yeah, I have a feeling that Poppy had a little input there, too! haha! We'll have to see if they have that conversation in LVS. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks!
yay! thank you for updating! this chapter was great and a bit funny, I never imagined Severus having this chat with anyone! though I do think he'd make a wonderful father, he has the drive to be better than his dad ever was at least. I love Draco in this chapter, he's really uncomfortable! lol poor thing! I can't wait to read more.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Thanks, I'm glad it was amusing. I think neither of them was particularly comfortable. haha! But Severus also had a bit of a behind-the-scenes nudge, as you might imagine. Thank you for reviewing!
a good chapter as allways. I loved the scene with Draco and Severus, it was very sweet and funny
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Thank you! I'm glad you found it funny -- I hoped it might be! :-)
And I guess this is where the spoilers start. I'm only about three quarters of the way through Resolving a Misunderstanding, so I have a ways to go. *pout* And with my nephew in the hospital with pneumonia, I won't be able to read much of the older stories for a while. *darn* At least Arthur's taking the news better than Ron did. ^_^
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
You can always skip over the rest of Resolving a Misunderstanding for the time being and read A Long Vernal Season -- you did say you'd read DD, right? -- then you might have some hope of catching up with the spoilerish stuff in this fic. Actually, there's still not been the BIG spoiler, which if you want to enjoy it in LVS, you might wish to wait for. (It hasn't come up yet in LVS.)I do hope that your nephew gets well soon! Pneumonia can be quite nasty. I hope you're enjoying RaM. :-) And that you enjoy the other fics, however you choose to read them! Yep, Arthur is definitely taking the news better than Ron -- he has a few more years of maturity on him, so that helped!Thanks for the review!
I hope I'm wrong but it looks like Arthur has a bit of crush on Hermione! lol, that could be interesting. I'm so happy it was Hermione giving him the news and not someone else, she was great at making him see that Ginny is happy and can decide for herself. I can't wait to see what's next and I'm curious about all that blushing! lolThanks for updating!Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Hermione's good at sweeping in and taking care of things, isn't she? I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next one is "Letter from Home," and you'll see Ginny again! :-)Thanks for the review!
It's a good thing Hermione went to see Arthur, not only for his stomach's sake but for his daughter's as well. lolI can easily see Arthur reacting just as you have him reacting to the news that Ginny is dating Draco. Given the history between those two families, it's sort of like an odd Romeo and Juliet version. I'm glad Hermione was there to talk to Arthur before he went charging up to the castle. eeep. I bet that would make Ginny an unhappy camper! I think it's great that they're going to work in the shop together, haha.Looking forward to another update!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.It is probably for the best that Arthur found out from Hermione and not in some other way -- he probably would have done something a bit rashl And ya know that Ginny & Draco are trying to avoid big drama! lol!Thanks for the review!
Gareth and Snape were really kind to go check on Draco and I agree: sometimes it's not your actions that cause problems but those of others that draw you into their path. Hopefully, when he thinks back on it, Draco will realize it was a nice gesture on both their parts.Loved the conversation about Albus and Minerva. You know they're my favorites so it's always nice to see or hear about them in a chappie. I think the kids are right in their estimation of Minerva. I think she would be approachable to them simply because they knew here in a different role. Still, I think she and Albus are both wonderful leaders!!
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Thanks! Gareth felt it important as Snape's friend to let him know that there might be an impending problem, and he also felt a bit of sympathy for Draco, who has, in Gareth's view, quite a few roadblocks in his path as it is without having him get in an altercation in the middle of the Three Broomsticks after being provoked by Ron. Fortunately, Ron's better nature came forward, and no intervention was necessary. Glad you enjoyed the conversation about the two. I thought it was a natural topic to come up among them.Thank you for the review!
Would not have wanted to be Ron in this situation. Either way ya go, it was going to be awkward and explosive. I think Harry handled it in the manner I would have expected of him. Can't say I blame him for his reaction. Draco was a nasty git during their time at school together. However, if he's truly a "Newman," then he deserves a chance. Besides, Harry shouldn't shoot the messenger!!!Looking forward to more.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Yeah, Harry didn't take the news well at all, but as you say, the Draco he knew was pretty awful. He's already still stinging from Ginny breaking up with him, while trying to hold out hope it's just temporary, then this happens. He's also just not doing well with no structure after the war -- if he didn't have Kreacher coming in to clean the house regularly, it'd be a pigsty. Don't worry tooooo much about Harry. (Some of the Harry backstory will be mentioned in a coming chapter of LVS, so keep your eyes open for that -- blink, and you'll miss it, as they say! haha!)thanks much for the review!
I really don't like Harry here! he's being an idiot, he should understand better than anyone that war changes you. He's a pain! lol, I hope Arthur's reaction will be better, I can't wait to read more. Thanks for updating so soon.Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
He is a pain, but he's also in pain, himself, and this news hurt him even more, so he got angry. He's also been avoiding things and just hanging out with other stockroom guys -- fine for a bit, maybe, but for Harry, it's escapist. Ron escaped by dropping Luna and "boinking blondes," as Hermione put it in LVS, Ginny did her thing, Arthur his, and Harry something else. Doesn't mean he's being particularly kind or mature about it. But he never had a normal family life, either. Yup, Arthur's up next! :-)Thanks for reviewing!
Ya know, I have got to stop reading this before I finish the other fics. *grin* Yeah, right. Like I'm going to do that. ^_^
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
LOL! There haven't been too many really spoilerish spoilers yet. Those don't come until the later chapters, and I'll be posting them after I've caught up to this point in LVS. We're getting close, though!Glad you're enjoying it!
Oh what a nice surprise- some bonus Gareth! I can sort of understand Rons views on Draco but hope he takes the good advice he's been given.
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
It's in giving that we receive, they say, and I love giving a little bonus Gareth, 'cause I receive a lot of enjoyment from having him in a chapter, myself! LOL!Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
great chapter! I love Gareth, he's so sweet! well he is Gertrude's son so it's hard not to love him, it's too bad his mother doesn't go out with him more often *hint hint* lol. I miss Gertrude!!!!! lol. Anyway, wonderful chapter, it was very nice of Severus to check up on Draco, I loved loved that they shared the cake that's sooooo sweet and I really doubt that Ginny coos like her parents, she seems a bit more reserved. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction to the news!. Thanks for updating. Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
I'm glad you liked Gareth's appearance here! And the rest -- yep, Severus was concerned. Harry's reaction will be in the next chapter, then we'll get Arthur's in the one after that. Good times! LOL!Thanks for the review! (Oh, and there will be some Gertrude coming up in LVS, so be on the lookout for that! )
Well, that was a fun chapter in an odd sort of way. haha.I think it was wise of Draco to not make waves with Ron and for Ron to try to be an adult about the whole situation. If he pushes Ginny, she may do something drastic and turn away from the family. However, I really don't think that's going to happen. Telling Harry should be another matter entirely. I can't wait for that chapter. haha
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
Yeah, telling Harry -- Ron's a hero to do that! LOL!Ginny doesn't want to turn from her family, and family is really important to her. I think, too, that the Weasleys all felt a greater loss when Percy died since they had had such a rift between them for so long. I don't think any of them would want anything similar to happen. That doesn't mean it'll be easy. But maybe they'll all work on at least tolerating Ginny's choice.Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
you are no fun, giving all those details at the end, I was just going to say that that was the broom Severus and Helena tested, but it makes no sense now! lol. I really liked this chapter, I'm glad Ron is willing to give Draco a chance and it was very smart of Draco to keep a low profile during lunch, I really think Mr. Weasley won't make a fuss about Draco and Ginny, in LVS he seemed ready to do anything to help her; I'm more worried about Draco's parents to be honest, lol. Thanks for the update!Sam
Response from MMADfan (Author of Draco's Heart)
LOL! I'll try to moderate the number of tie-in details I give in the future! (It's mainly for people who haven't read LVS or aren't that far in the fic yet, etc. -- and to refresh memories!)Yeah, Draco did keep his head down, speaking up only once to make a joke everyone could appreciate. He has some sense of discretion being the better part of valor on occasion! Thanks for the review!