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The Lady and Her Knight Chapter 5: 6-May
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The Lady and Her Knight

Chapter 5 of 6

shatteredrose

Tragedy happens on Hermione and Severus' wedding night. Inspired by the song "The Englishe Lady and Her Knight" sung by Loreena McKennitt. Now complete.

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I've decided to combine the last three parts into two parts, so this story will now be complete in 6 chapters rather than 7. Thank you so much to astopperindeath for helping me through this whole process, and thank you for being a great beta. As usual, these characters do not belong to me in any way.

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He had finally cried himself out, sitting there in the threshold of what was to be their bedroom. He was softly brushing her curls out of her relaxed face when he heard people running up the stairs and calling his name. Moments later, Harry, Ginny, Draco, and Minerva reached him. Harry was the first to reach him and cried out while falling to the floor beside him.

“What happened?!” He demanded while Draco moved around to support his godfather physically.

Ginny turned towards Minerva, crying. Minerva held her as she sobbed, “Severus?”

At the sound of his longtime colleague and friend’s voice, Severus spoke hoarsely. “I’d just come up from checking on the Wolfsbane, and she was sitting there on the bed drinking her wine.” Severus stared forlornly into nothing.

At the mention of the wine, Draco stood and walked over to the bottle. Bringing it to his nose, he sniffed experimentally. Smelling nothing strange, he dipped his finger in it and took care not to take more than a drop or two onto his tongue. His eyes widened; he couldn’t identify it, but there was something wrong with the wine.

“Severus,” Draco called softly to his godfather, and everyone in the room looked at him. He lifted the bottle of wine in reference. “I think it might have been the wine; I don’t know what it is. But there is something definitely added to this wine that shouldn’t be there. I’ve had enough of it to know the taste by heart.”

“But… that’s the wine that Ron gave Hermione,” Ginny said, confused.

Harry stood. “I’ll Floo him!” He rushed downstairs to Snape’s fireplace.

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Harry paced impatiently waiting for Ron. When he heard the pop of an Apparition, he threw the front door open. “Quickly!” Harry shouted. “Upstairs!”

Both of the boys ran up the stairs. Harry continued into the room where McGonagall was just leaving to use the Floo. Draco sat again with his godfather, and Ginny stayed on the bed, staring at Hermione, quietly crying. Ron stopped in the doorway. He had turned so pale that even his freckles appeared lighter.

“No,” he said softly, entranced by Hermione’s still body being held by her husband. “It wasn’t supposed – no!”

Everyone except Severus whipped their faces around to look at Ron. Severus slowly lifted his eyes to look at Ron and with deadly cold asked, “It wasn’t supposed to do what, Mr. Weasley?”

Ron startled and finally broke his gaze away from Hermione. Looking at Severus and Draco, then Ginny, then ending on Harry, he answered, “She wasn’t supposed to have died! Only make her sick.” His tone was pleading. “It was supposed to be his fault. So she would leave him. Harry, please! You know he would have hurt her in the end! I was only trying to help!”

Harry went white with rage, and Ginny sobbed and refused to look at her brother. But before anyone could do anything, Severus had laid Hermione to the floor and rose with purpose. He held the youngest Weasley son up against the wall with one hand and pressed his wand to Ron’s temple. “You did this,” Severus said coldly. “I’m going to make you hurt so badly that Molly will be sorry she ever had you!”

“Severus, no,” Draco said softly with a hand on Severus’ shoulder. “She wouldn’t want you to go to Azkaban for this pathetic excuse of a wizard.”

Severus’ shoulders sagged with despair, knowing that Draco was right.

“Harry,” Severus said, looking at the floor. Harry nodded and walked towards Ron. Grabbing his arm, Harry forced him out of the room and towards the Floo. Ginny and Draco looked at the heartbroken man, unsure as to what to do next.

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Lady and Her Knight

23 Reviews  |  8.0/10 Average

10/10

snitchette

You know, I really thought you'd find a way to save her. Now I'm terribly afraid to have rightly guessed what he's going to do next.

Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)

I was thinking about taking it that way, but the song that inspired me to write this story for them didn't quite end that way. I hope you aren't terribly disappointed.

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Terribly sad is more like it. And some blood (Ron's preferably) to avange them. Severus can even kill him (painfully of course) before...

0/10

pansycat

Hi there,

I have a question about Ron's plan.
If Ron gave her the wine why would she blame Severus
when she got sick from it ?

Pansycat

9/10

Jinxie

I love how you've written the despair in your story!

10/10

Marty21

0/10

Snarky Snape

oh damn update update!!

10/10

snitchette

I knew that! Bad author to make such evil cliffie! Is there hope for her or should I fetch a box of tissue ?

Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)

If you've heard the song, you might want to grab a box of tissues. However, I do promise a bittersweet happy ending.

10/10

snitchette

Why am I under the impression that they really shouldn't try that wine?

Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)

Probably because they shouldn't try it. :D

10/10

snitchette

Can Ron really not make a fool of himself? I doubt it.

10/10

snitchette

That's such a nice scene. But I fear given the summary that, soon, things are not going to be so sweet.

10/10

debjunk

Dang. 

10/10

esmelle

Oh this is so tragic! I hope Severus gets revenge on Ron.

10/10

braye27

Arrrggghhhh!  Ron's gift of wine has poisoned Hermione on her wedding night.  I guess he figured that if he couldn't have her, no one would have her.I hope Severus can figure out what was done and an can find some way to make Hermione well again.  I'm so afraid that she will die if something can't be done soon.Please update soon!Beth

Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)

I'll be uploading the next two chapters ( I decided to condense them from 4) as soon as my beta sends them back to me. Then it is up to the admins with how quickly it gets posted. Hopefully it won't be too long though!

10/10

braye27

What a beautiful wedding they had.  I've always thought the Black Lake would have made a lovely site for getting married.  I'm happy that their friends seemed so happy for the newly weds, but Ron's gift of the elf wine is scaring me a little... well, a lot.  I've gotta to catch the next chapter to see what happens.Beth

Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)

I must agree with the Black Lake being a great spot to get married. I wish it existed (with the giant squid) so that I could marry there myself!

10/10

debjunk

What an idiot.  Stupid, stupid boy.  I'm surprised that Severus was able to control himself. 

10/10

braye27

As sad as this ending is, it is very well done when I consider the song that inspired you to write it.  Well done!

Beth

10/10

braye27

Stupid Ron!  I hope he rots in Azkaban.  Or gets the Dementor's kiss.

Beth

0/10

sevibaby

This was really sad but a fitting end to such a tragic story.

10/10

snitchette

Somehow, I knew this would end like that. I wouldn't have want any other end but it's still very sad.

Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)

Yes, but I did toss in a bit of happiness with them together in the end, even if they are dead. I promise that my next story is actually going to have a happy ending. Maybe that'll make up for killing them off in this story.

10/10

debjunk

A beautiful, if heartwrenching tale.  Nicely done.  I suppose Ron living with himself for the rest of his life is punishment enough?  Probably not, but one can hope.

9/10

Jinxie

Well she's marked Ron as her brother, but that doesn't necessarily mean owt. 

Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

8/10

Jinxie

Strange way to propose.I'm hoping the story's not going to move in parallel to the song!

Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)

Unfortunately that is the goal. I hope its not too upsetting that I chose a bittersweet ending.

0/10

aurora borealis

Ack - that song has such a sad ending!  I am hoping you have an alternate version in mind.

8/10

MsTree

Interesting start. Would like to see more before I develop any real opinion. ^_^

Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)

Well the next two chapters are in queue! Thank you for reviewing.

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