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Saturday Night Drabbles Greg's Latest Misstep
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Greg's Latest Misstep

1: one-shot

Greg's Latest Misstep

Rose of the West

5 Reviews   |   5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

General Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 49 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Draco Malfoy Gregory Goyle

Draco confronts Greg about what he told Scorpius. Companion to "The New Dinner Table".

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9/10

MlleGigi

I know Goyle is supposed to be stupid, but...good grief!  One wonders how he managed to get through a day without forgetting how to speak...someone almost as stupid as Heathcliff the Cat in the old Looney Tunes cartoon ("Breathe, stupid, breathe!  Ya forgot to breathe again!")

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Has Greg got any brain cells? I do like the idea of him overwhelmed by Pansy's girls.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Greg's Latest Misstep)

*Snicker.*  All that female whatever in the Goyle house just seemed to fit when I got to that point of the story.  He finally gets to "hang out" with someone who's male and maybe he forgets Scorpius is so young.  Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

snitchette

Greg is what 30, 35? And it never occuer to him that young boys are impressionable? I hope he never takes care of his daughters' education.

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Greg's Latest Misstep)

I think Goyle will suddenly get the point about the proper education of boys about the time one wants to date a daughter.  ;)  In the meanwhile, I think he forgets just how impressionable a ten-year-old is.Thanks for the review!

10/10

sunny33

Draco's gone soft.  He shoulda hexed him!  :P

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Greg's Latest Misstep)

I really thought about having Draco cast a body bind and then yelling in his face, but it occurred to me that this was probably a conversation played out quite often over the years and so I went with Draco sighing and trying to explain, YET AGAIN, as Greg thinks to himself, "What is it THIS TIME?"Thank you for the review!

0/10

Bettina

Greg is dim, and yet Draco likes him. That's admirable in itself. I like the idea that Greg uses any male's attention to play the hero. So many do. Yet with his particular history he must learn.. ah, forget it, he won't. 

Response from Rose of the West (Author of Greg's Latest Misstep)

He'll adjust his behavior around Draco's family because he admires/fears Draco, of course. You may be right about how he will act around other people.  Thanks so much for all the reviews!

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