Paving a Life

sunny33

6 Reviews | 5.0/10 (6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Romance Short Story 1,077 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Dennis was not an easy man to live with. One day his temper got the better of him.

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sunny33

Member Since 2008 | 129 Stories | Favorited by 689 | 8,383 Reviews Written | 8,235 Review Responses

Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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10/10

blue artemis

That was an interesting plot. My husband keeps wanting me to write stories that include cigarette smuggling. I refuse.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Paving a Life)

Only do it if the smugglers get caught and punished severely. Muhahaha! :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Make the man shaped puddle a garden feature

Response from sunny33 (Author of Paving a Life)

But... but... it's on the driveway! :P

0/10

mreid

Punny title. Funny ending.Michelle sure liked to unload on a stranger. Good thing he found her attractive.One question: Nick Carter?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Paving a Life)

Nick Carter is a name I made up. Is he someone famous? Thanks for your review. :)

Response from mreid (Reviewer)

Depends on your definition of famous. Thank you for posting your original work.

0/10

liviconnor

This story makes me happy, with the new beginnings and all. And the twist at the end kind of wipes off any of the bitter feelings we might have- death being unpleasant and all.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Paving a Life)

Thanks, livi! )

10/10

snitchette

That's a lovely story. I'm glad Michelle finally found happiness.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Paving a Life)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Paving a Life)

. It's nice to get reviews in this section. :)

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

I usually don't read not HP related work. But as it's you and you're one of favourite authors ever I thought I'd give it a try. And I'm very glad I did it.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Paving a Life)

Aww. You're so sweet. xx

10/10

Anonymous

turn it into a novel.

Author's Response: That's a novel thought.

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