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Her Little Secret

1: One-Shot

Her Little Secret

MuseAmusant

8 Reviews   |   8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drama Angst General Drabble/100-Word Psychological Hogwarts Castle 568 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Dolores Jane Umbridge Original Character

Dolores' secret is uncovered...

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Chapter 1: One-Shot


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10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Wow, this was GREAT!  

Response from MuseAmusant (Author of Her Little Secret)

HermioneW, I am so delighted (and relieved!) to hear you liked it! !!!

10/10

emmeline33

Wow, that was intense!  I can totally see it, too.  Very nicely done! 

Response from MuseAmusant (Author of Her Little Secret)

Thanks, I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it! :)

10/10

snitchette

I hadn't realized she's that old. And she wished to trifle with poor Severus. EWWWW!

Response from MuseAmusant (Author of Her Little Secret)

To the best of my knowledge, there was never an exact age given for Umbridge, but I didn't think she was in Severus' age range, which would have been in his late thirties, nevermind Alan Rickman's real age.I had figured that present-day Dolores to be approximately in her mid to late fifties, which would have put her in Hogwarts roughly around the time as a young Tom Riddle, if not necessarily in his year, so that's what I decided to go with.And EWWWWW! indeed to the idea of Umbridge perving over our Severus. Dolores seemed to really be turned on by cruelty in general, and she was most likely a Death Eater sympathizer, if not actually one herself, so I can imagine her being attracted to Severus for that reason alone. But I rather doubt she would have felt the same way had she had any inkling of his true loyalties.Sorry for rambling on a bit, but that's my take on Dolores and her apparent thing for Snape. Anyway, thanks for taking a moment to review!

10/10

blue artemis

So she always was a conniving little sociopath.  Chilling.  Well done!

Response from MuseAmusant (Author of Her Little Secret)

Thanks!

10/10

rosewood

You certainly hit that nail on the head. This is definitely the classic persona of Umbridge. Kudos!

Response from MuseAmusant (Author of Her Little Secret)

*Blushes*I'm so pleased to hear you felt my take on Umbridge was true to her character. Or the lack thereof, as the case may be.  Thanks so much for taking a moment to review! : )

10/10

Anonymous

"Write the defining moment which made Umbridge into Umbitc..."

BINGO!

Damn that was good!


Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so pleased you enjoyed my take on the Making of Umbitch. : )

And thanks for taking a moment to review, it's greatly appreciated!

EdgeOfDark's response: You're quite welcome. It was a great piece!

Please, feel free to reciprocate! ^_^

0/10

Rose of the West

I did not see that coming.  Very creepy, and convincing.

Response from MuseAmusant (Author of Her Little Secret)

Thank you! : )

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Ohhh dear lord. Umbridge is very scary, even as a kid. And her pureblood superiority crap makes more sense (in a deranged way) now. Yipes.

Response from MuseAmusant (Author of Her Little Secret)

Umbridge is a really nasty piece of work, isn't she? I've always thought there was something a bit off in her obsessive hatred of Muggleborns and those of mixed blood... the notion that she might have something to hide about her own ancestry is what came to mind when I was writing this piece.Anyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing! : )

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