Tomfoolery
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No wonder how twisted he became with not only one but two big bangs on the head.
Response from Amita (Author of Tomfoolery)
He was already twisted. :) The bangs on the head confused him.
Anonymous
Wow. What a complicated tale! Well written and enjoyable!
Great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Complicated? Perhaps. A DE's scheme backfires. He is rescued by two girls - one prim and one mischievous. He reveals his evil nature which is explained away by the prim one and taken as a practical joke by the other. At a social outing, he again reveals his evil nature. His next scheme, disguised as a practical joke, backfires. (If you like convoluted, is it appropriate to suggest a title search for 'Crossroads' and 'Warlock'?)
EdgeOfDark's response: Excellent suggestion!
Enjoyed this look into some of the adventures and inner thoughts of Tom, even though he seems to not be able to recall them himself at the end or has already dismissed them, placed them aside--his evil and indifference being tapped on, ah, the fickleness of being a Dark Lord
Response from Amita (Author of Tomfoolery)
Tom gives himself a sugar high and consquently gets bopped on the head. Then, in a state of amensia, he tries to do evil with the help of some Gryffindor coeds. It does not go well. "The fickleness of being a Dark Lord," indeed.