Brilliant - no adverbs challenge - omg! And another one of your stories - no adjectives allowed and strict word limits - really admire and love how these sweet snapshots of their progressive relationship fills in the time-line of their relationship. Love it that Lucius is smitten by Narcissa from the very beginning: her grace and beauty striking him, the turning point in her life with her father insisting she consider her future, and the romantic proposal in the carriage - Lucius, you smoothy!

The perfect mood for the season. I know that the prompt statedit should be no more than 500 words but I'd love to read more. That was way too short.

How this was lovely and the progression so sweet. I loved his impression of her as a first year.

Karelia, long time no loveliesss (I'm not hissing, just emphasising the plural-s).Beautiful, indeed. I find that line about the bright-looking future and the blonde hair moving and I love L's silent Scourgify. Devilish little prompt produced two lovely LuNas within 2 days. Way to go!

It's always good to know that there's a human being behind all that evil. Loved it :)

It's harder than you think to avoid adverbs.  The 'ly' ones are easy to ditch; it's all the other sneaky ones!  Lovely job! :)

How sweet!

wow! i don't know what an adverb is, but this is pretty damn good