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Forbidden Forest Untouched
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Untouched

1: Desipentia

2: Breaking the Curse

3: Morning After

4: Consequences

5: Meals

6: Bellatrix

7: Bound

8: Solution

9: Wolf's Mate

10: Full Moon

11: Epilogue

Untouched

chivalric

86 Reviews   |   86 Ratings, 0 Likes, 45 Favorites )

Drama Romance Action/Adventure Slash Forbidden Forest 50,151 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Remus Lupin Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Rabastan Lestrange Bellatrix Lestrange Poppy Pomfrey Hermione Granger Harry Potter

In the night of the final battle, Snape gets hit by a curse. Lupin goes to great lengths to save the Potions master's life and sanity.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Desipentia

Chapter 2: Breaking the Curse

Chapter 3: Morning After

Chapter 4: Consequences

Chapter 5: Meals

Chapter 6: Bellatrix

Chapter 7: Bound

Chapter 8: Solution

Chapter 9: Wolf's Mate

Chapter 10: Full Moon

Chapter 11: Epilogue


About chivalric

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chivalric

Member Since 2007  |  65 Stories  |  Favorited by 776  |  213 Reviews Written  |  4,182 Review Responses

Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.

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10/10

snitchette

That's very dark. Remus shouldn't blame himself so much. After all he didn't have a choice. And maybe Severus has enjoyed it so much because deep down he loves Remus too. That's probablt the only thought that can alleviate Remus' guilt.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

You are right: ultimately, he didn't have a choice. Severus is his friend, and without him, the Potions master would have died. Right now, though, he cannot see it; they are both broken, and I must say the next chapters will be dark, too. Still... there's always hope ;-)

10/10

sevibaby

Poor Remus,  I hope that Severus will be able to see what saving his life has cost Remus.   This was a really good chapter.  Well worth the wait.  Please update soon.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

The next chapter is in queue, and I will update regularly. about once a week, I guess. Severus is broken; so is Remus. Right now, they cannot see anything but their own pain. But then... there's always hope ;-)Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

debjunk

What a horrifying situation to be in! Both have been brutalized.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Yes, definitely. Thanks to a very mad Bella, who will reappear in a later chapter ;-)Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

blue artemis

So sad.  For both of them.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Hi, hon. I promise, it will get better - eventually ;-)Thanks for reading and reviewing!

0/10

snapes_witch

One would assume since this is in Potions Under Distress that Hermione is planning on making an appearance at some point?

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Hi there! And so sorry! At the first chapter, I put on the wrong category. This story is entirely Forbidden Forest. Thanks for telling me, I just changed it. Though... Hermione will make an appearance ;-)Thanks for reviewing and again sorry. Hope you are not too disappointed!

10/10

zanzi

I love this. So compelling, just like all your work. Looking forward to see how they can resolve this!

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

I'll post the remaining chapters a bit quicker. Hope you will like the path this story will take. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

sunny33

It was as much a rape of Remus's mind and sensibilities as it was of Severus's body.  Powerful stuff! :)

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

I wanted to show the horrors of rape - although, things are not quite as they seem right now, as you will learn in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

Phyllidia

What an enjoyable story.  Thank you.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

So glad you enjoyed it!

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

So glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

Phyllidia

Aww, I think this might be my favorite chapter.I loved Severus' initial response to Minerva's questions. Priceless.  I'm surprised there weren't a few faintings or a heartattack.  And way to go Hermione.  I want you to know that I got a little teary-eyed when Severus said what he did to her and gave her points.  Seriously.  I even sniffled.And his helping Remus with his transformation.  And the playing!!! (as a dog person I give that two thumbs up).Much awesomeness.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Got the playing scene by watching my own doggie play ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing and for liking this story. Not that many did, given it is slash and pairs S. with s/o else but Hermione, so I am double thankful *hugs*

Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)

In truth I'm not into any particular pairings--I just want a good Severus.  So who he shags doesn't often matter (no Umbridge).  I actually really like the dynamic in most SS/RL stories.  Their history and personality work so very well.  I wish there were more of them.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

*nods* Never, ever Umbridge.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Got the playing scene by watching my own doggie play ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing and for liking this story. Not that many did, given it is slash and pairs S. with s/o else but Hermione, so I am double thankful *hugs*

Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)

In truth I'm not into any particular pairings--I just want a good Severus.  So who he shags doesn't often matter (no Umbridge).  I actually really like the dynamic in most SS/RL stories.  Their history and personality work so very well.  I wish there were more of them.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

*nods* Never, ever Umbridge.

10/10

Phyllidia

What a painful way to admit you love someone.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

I think S. is used to pain. And R. - well, he's beyond pain at that moment. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

I think S. is used to pain. And R. - well, he's beyond pain at that moment. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

Phyllidia

Ooh a binding.  Hmmm, did the curse cause it or something else.  Of course the curse worked quickly on him.  Maybe he was a virgin so he reacted differently.  I guess I'll just have to read and see.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Got it in one go ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)

<does happy dance>

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Got it in one go ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)

<does happy dance>

0/10

Phyllidia

You handled that very well.  I would have been concerned about Remus if he hadn't been horrified.  Powerful stuff.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Well, he's a gentle soul... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Well, he's a gentle soul... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

HBAR

Surprise!  Instant family.  What a great epilogue!  There is so much to like, and a happy ending to boot.  I like the friendship between Severus and  Hermione, and that Remus drags him out in a effort to make him social.  The best part, though, is that Severus took the news about Teddy without any fuss... even though it means that time for hot kitchen sex is now down to twice a month ;)  Thanks for another great story!

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

*lol* I like this wording, "instant family". Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear, and thanks for liking the friendship between S and H. I wrote enough SS/HG stories to know that it is a very well liked pairing, but as I prefer slash nowadays, I usually make them friends.

10/10

Sampdoria

Wonderful, wonderful ending to a great story. I am not sure what trills me the most; the happy ending for Severus and Remus, or the fact that Hermione didn't end up married to Ron... (you know my allergy to that pairing:-))Greedy as I am, I do hope you are working hard on a new story to share with us already:-))

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Ummmm, I think I need to confess here that I am not writing fanfic at the moment, and don't know when I will have time to finish the WIPs. My first original novel is about to get published, I am woring on the sequel... But there are fanfic stories which are finished and only await posting. So yes, there will be more ;-)Hugs, and thanks for reviewing!

10/10

la Chatelaine

This was a delight first to last.  Very well done.  Look forward to many more. 

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Thanks, dear! A few slashy stories are ready for posting; I will do so shortly.

0/10

TeaNBooks

What a lovely epilogue!  I love it that you worked Teddy and Albus Severus into the story - it's a nice touch!  I also love it that Severus is friends with Hermione & that she is not with Ron - we can't have it too epilogue-compliant, can we??I've thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end!  Well done!

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Epilogue-compliant is a total No-No! I wrote one story in this area (At the beach) - but of course I twisted it nevertheless ;-)Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear!

9/10

TeaNBooks

Love Hermione!!  She doesn't often play a role in stories where she isn't one of the main pairing, but she fit perfectly here!Great chapter - I especially liked their interaction during Remus' transformation.  A wonderful tale of healing and redemption!

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

I usually manage to bring her in somehow, and I liked the idea of her saving Snape no matter she's not in love with him.

0/10

TeaNBooks

Well, as evil and insane as Bellatrix was, she did one good thing before dying - exposing the truth of Remus' feeling toward Severus.  And clever Severus - using the wolf in Lupin to get what he wants!  Lovely chapter!

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

*beams* Thanks for reading and liking and reviewing!

0/10

TeaNBooks

Oh, wow - this chapter brought tears to my eyes.  Poor Remus & Severus - both thinking the other loathed them and for Severus to discover the truth under such horrible circumstances.  I'm glad he had no problem killing Bellatrix!! This is such an amazing story - such powerful images and so well written!  I'm really enjoying it and am hoping for a happy ending!

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

I think there are only one or two stories without a happy ending; this is not one of them ;-)

0/10

debjunk

I'm glad Snape took that secret so well.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Well, he loves Remus. And as I think life without kids is not as nice as life with kids, I had to add a child somehow ;-)Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

sunny33

They will have to behave around Teddy.  Won't hurt them! :)

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

*snort* They are looking forward to the weekends!

10/10

snitchette

Lee Jordan!!???? That's a surprise. And for a moment I really feared Sev would break things with Remus. I'm glad he's decided to be a father. That was a fantastic story that I've enjoyed a lot.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

Couldn't let her be with Ron - I like him, but not as her husband ;-)Thanks for reading the story and liking the way it ended!

10/10

blue artemis

I like the way Severus turned out.  And Remus deserves a whipping for that behavior at the end, but well, very Remus there.

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

*hugs you* Thanks, dear!

10/10

HBAR

Well, that went much better than expected.  I'm glad that Snape was able to be upfront about his feelings, because Lupin seemed to be adamant about having continual guilt regarding the night of the curse breaking.  Does this end soon, or are we just having a moment of content before we board the last train to angstville?

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

There is one more chapter and the epilogue. Some problems to solve, but definitely angstville ;-)Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

sevibaby

Umm lots of lemony goodness.  Thanks for all of the wonderful slash smut.  I liked how you were able to bring the wolf out and then when he was satified he curled up and went to sleep.  Just like a man.  Ha Ha ha

Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)

*grin* Didn't look at it from that angle yet, but of course you are right. I thought it was time for some smut ;-)

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