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Malfoy Manor The Snake's Head Fritillary
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10: Epilogue

The Snake's Head Fritillary

pyjamapants

68 Reviews   |   68 Ratings, 0 Likes, 59 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Romance Action/Adventure Malfoy Manor 22,850 Words 10 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Name Withheld (surprise)

Lucius Malfoy is plagued by the delivery of several suspicious packages. Auror Hermione Granger is sent to investigate.

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Chapters (10)

Chapter 1: 1

Chapter 2: 2

Chapter 3: 3

Chapter 4: 4

Chapter 5: 5

Chapter 6: 6

Chapter 7: 7

Chapter 8: 8

Chapter 9: 9

Chapter 10: Epilogue


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pyjamapants

Member Since 2006  |  12 Stories  |  Favorited by 144  |  277 Reviews Written  |  893 Review Responses

I'm a freelancing Yank who lives in the Midwest with her husband, three cats, and two dogs.

I'm a dabbler by nature. Jack of all trades, master of none. I write, run, swim, garden, quilt, bake, and so on. 

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Reviews for The Snake's Head Fritillary

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10/10

diva

This was absolutely amazing! Loved it :)

0/10

Ljpjcg

What a wonderful surprise.  I'm glad you kept everything a mystery, especially the warnings. I love it when I'm served some Snape Surprise!

10/10

Owlbait

I am so a lucky duck!

10/10

Owlbait

I cant tell you how much I love this chapter and all the naughty things it hints at :-)

0/10

isalie

I think I already told you - once or twice -how much I liked this story.So I will concentrate on the smut.Lovely sex-scene. So very intimate and cuddly whilst graphic. And detailed without the usual choice of words. It didn't seem written in haste.And you managed to put some sweet humor in it as well.Well done!Thank you for this wonderful story.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

It thrills me to hear that you liked the smut. I aaaaaaagonized over the smut. And, actually, it was my express intent NOT to usual the usual words, most particularly because, you know, when it comes to threesomes, some things just don't need to be described graphically.  I believe I've told you, once or twice, how much I appreciate your reviews. *squish*

0/10

isalie

Aha! The person was right, the reasons completely wrong.I'm either bad at guessing or this could not be seen.To me this was the best chapter so far.Was it random or very well planned? Don't know, don't care, I just enjoy.And Fluffy (Sounds totally like something the meddling old fool would come up with. Extra thumbs up for that name.) using the internet?! So wonderful. Shows how similiar Lucius and his captor are.I am totally in love with that story so far.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Thank you so very, very much. This was one of my favorite chapters too. I like when Lucius suddenly turns off the charm (um, assuming I'm remembering the right chapter here)

0/10

isalie

Aaaah. Tease.I think I love you.I wish I could not simply read on.But I will.She recognized him somehow. Now I wonder: Is it even possible for the reader to make an educated guess? Or is all our wracking our brains for nothing.Let's see...

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

I almost wish you'd guessed here. :) I wonder who you suspected. 

10/10

isalie

Er, I just realized who you are. The names aren't that different, right? *promises herself to check profiles from now on*Well, hello there!However, on with the review.lol. Poor Hermione; wherever she goes people will roll eyes at her and make nasty remarks for saying things like 'I have a question'. Must be frustrating to be a curious little know-it-all.And her job?! Oi. Who would have thought that being the brain of the Golden Trio would lead to this. Some friends she has there..Although,..the boys matured nicely, eh? Stopped farting the anthem, how lovely.Wonder if she ever would have realized her situation if not for the given circumstances. That's a wicked twist! Who got kidnapped. Uuuh, great tension. I love it. Like guessing along with Sherlock who the culprit is!And then there's the damned parcel again! What took them soooo long?! Hilarious.And cliffy again.Gods. This is so good, I just have to vote.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

*waves back*  *grins* If I were *cough* normal, I'd only have one username. Ah, well. Your review has me grinning from ear to ear. The prompts for this story just spawned these characters. They were brilliant.

10/10

HBAR

A nice ending to a fun story!

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Thank you!!

0/10

mock_turtle

heh.  I like.  :)  thanks for an enjoyable and interesting read!  you write a good mystery.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Thanks very, very much. Mysteries can be tough to know whether you pulled off successfully. I'm glad this one worked for you!

0/10

mock_turtle

oh dear lord.  I love the ending to this chapter.  hilAAArious.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

*grins* Glad it left you giggling. :)

0/10

mock_turtle

"extermination of wizards and witches of Muggle dissent"  I think that should be "descent".

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Thanks for the head's up. Should you spot anything else, I'd prefer a PM. I'd rather not air my dirty laundry in public.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Also, please refer to rule #9 here:http://www.thepetulantpoetess.com/terms.php

Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)

Sorry!  I'll bear that in mind.

10/10

indigo_rose

Beautiful story.  Brilliant ending.  And some very very hot sex!  Wow!  I loved reading the banter between the three of them, and how well their personalities meshed with one another.  My favorite line was when Hermione said:'Severus, Lucius, loves of my life, I never thought I would say this, but could you please shut up about that book?'I'm with Severus, it was pretty darn funny coming from her!    The really ironic part about this chapter for me was the whole cooling charms incident--my husband and I are the exact opposite of this.  He gets overheated when I crowd up to him.  I'm freezing, but he says I feel like a furnace.Thank you for a very enjoyable and thoroughly satisfying story!

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

*blushes* Thank so very much. You left some truly lovely reviews that have had me grinning as I've answered them. The Cooling Charms seem like they'd be a necessity. Amongst three people, you're bound to have at LEAST one furnace. :) Thanks again, PJ.

9/10

ozarkmoon

This was a lovely story. I adore this trio, and feel you captured each of their personalities beautifully.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Thanks so very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

10/10

blue artemis

Lovely, and hot.  Wonderful job.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Thank you!

10/10

bournespeed

Brilliant story, loved it.  Especially all the thriad loveliness at the end there.  Didn't know Amazon sold leather goods, must go and take a look ;o)

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Thanks so much for the wonderful reviews. I'm glad you liked the story, and I hope your Amazon searches were fruitful!

10/10

sunny33

ROFL, fancy abandoning her mid coitus! But it was worth it. :)

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

It was indeed worth it. :)

10/10

blue artemis

That was a lot of fun.  I really did enjoy it and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Thanks so much. It was a blast to write this, and I'm glad it's fun to read too.

10/10

makaem

Thanks, this was fun!

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

You're quite welcome! Glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

HBAR

This relationship sounds like a big undertaking.  But I am sure it will be well worth it.  I still like the fact that Hermione is ignorant to some things of the pureblood world.  At least they are all on even ground now.  Lucius made  clear his intentions.  Snape and Hermione together seemed to be the potential problem in this scenario.  The end of the chapter made it quite clear that it is not going to be a problem.  Am I looking forward to the promised SS/HG/LM?  Would you believe me if I said no?  ;)

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Managing both Severus and Lucius would be an enormous undertaking... but, like you said, well worth it. :) Hermione does her research, but she can't read everything ya know. :) So glad you're enjoying the story.

10/10

sunny33

Quack! ;)

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Waddle, waddle.

10/10

hgelman

I am such a lucky duck!  I love SS/HG and have recently spread out to include HG/LM.  However I really love a good SS/HG/LM!  This is a really good one - thoroughly enjoyable!

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

*grins* *welcomes you to the flock of lucky ducks*

10/10

makaem

Oh my gosh, this is not what I expected--- rather it is so much better. This is wonderful!

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

*grins* So glad you were pleasantly surprised!

10/10

Sirius Girl 08

And now I want chocolate torte...Lovely chapter!  Me thinks Lucius has just 'seen' Hermione for the first time - can't wait to see what he does about it! ;-)  xXx

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Did I include the recipe? I forget...http://www.jamieoliver.com/recipes/dessert-recipes/hazelnut-torte#

Response from Sirius Girl 08 (Reviewer)

It's Jamie Oliver?!  *drools...*  Shall have to try this one.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

Sadly, I haven't yet. I must remedy this!

10/10

blue artemis

Hmm, that is an awfully nice room.  I think he's really interested in her.

Response from pyjamapants (Author of The Snake's Head Fritillary)

I think he might be. :)

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