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Saturday Night Drabbles Argilah and Smoke Rings
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Argilah and Smoke Rings

astopperindeath

11 Reviews   |   11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

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Severus rests after a long day of teaching with bare feet and smoke rings.

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Member Since 2009  |  29 Stories  |  Favorited by 80  |  132 Reviews Written  |  919 Review Responses

Twentysomething lover of Harry Potter fic. I have served as a beta (btw, i am P.I. accredited) for many authors, and welcome the opportunity to do more. I also serve as co-moderator of the LJ community ptterpr0nprmpts along with the fantabulous tonksinger.

I've been around the fandom for a long time... probably since 2003. I've spent most of it lurking, but published some stories under an old pseudonym. Upon entering the fandom, I immediately became a fan of the Snape/Granger pairing. I prefer Hermione to be a bit older, but have been known to deviate from that preference. Other ships that I prefer include Draco/Ginny, Draco/Harry, Snape/Lupin, and Snape/McGonagall. I am open to most ships and recommendations, as ultimately it is this universe that I love.

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Reviews for Argilah and Smoke Rings

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nagandsev

Sev and an argilah - absolutely! Really love the idea of him being able to relax and clear is mind in a deligtfully organic way. Smiling like the Cheshire Cat!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

thanks!  glad you enjoyed it :)

10/10

lyn_f

What a nice picture you paint, ASID! It really does sound blissful, and so wonderful that you gave him some needed time to relax and unwind. Well done!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

thank you!  i'm glad it didn't just come across as a technical manual on smoking shisha... i was worried.

10/10

ApollinaV

Oh fantastic!  You have no idea how happy I am that you took this - and worked such magic with it.  I particularly like that in the end what he pondered was nothing at all - just relief for a few hours.  And the barefeet relaxing on carpet was such a human touch.  Excellent!  AV

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

thank you so much. i'm so glad you liked it!

10/10

snitchette

Add a back rub or better a feet rub and it's heaven.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

i'll get a house elf right on that :-P...

10/10

blue artemis

I can see him doing this to relax.  Nicely done.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

thanks :)

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morgaine_dulac

Thanks for giving the poor man some nice alone time.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

:).  thanks for the review!

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debjunk

Ah, don't we all love our alone time?

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

yes, we really do :).  thanks for the review!

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh what a nice evening for him. I like the detail you put in about the argilah. It makes it seem relaxing. I can so see Severus in this. Good job.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

thank you so much!  it really *is* a relaxing process, so I'm glad you liked it!

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sara lady dalian

Interesting.  The descriptions you use bring to mind a very specific picture.  Sara

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

thanks :)

10/10

sunny33

It definitely sounded like you knew what you were talking about! :)

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

thanks! :)

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Rose of the West

Heh heh.  I don't know why I didn't read this when it first posted.  It's definitely a keeper.  I love the way he savors his creature comforts.  I like this scene of contentment.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Argilah and Smoke Rings)

thank you so much!

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