The Petulant Poetess
  • Stories
  • Browse By
    • Category
    • Character
    • Genre
    • Author
  • Info
      Useful Info
    • General Information
    • Message Board
    • Membership & Story Ratings
    • Submission Rules
    • Important Links
    • Support The Petulant Poetess
    • Writers' Resources
    • Punctuation Guide
    • Writing Fan Fiction
    • Harry Potter Resources
    • Dictionaries
    • Beta Resources
  • Create an Account
    • Create an Account
    • Sign In
Saturday Night Drabbles Dances in the Dark
Chapters Menu
Download PDF Version

New Chapter for Dances in the Dark

Dances in the Dark

1: A moment captured

Dances in the Dark

Melenka

6 Reviews   |   6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Drama Romance General Saturday Night Drabbles 1,820 Words 1 Chapter Complete

What happens in the closet stays in the closet - or so it is hoped.

Start Reading

Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: A moment captured


About Melenka

Validated
Author

Melenka

Member Since 2008  |  20 Stories  |  Favorited by 82  |  104 Reviews Written  |  967 Review Responses

Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.

Author Website
http://pushcomestoshove.blogspot.com/

Reviews for Dances in the Dark

Displaying all 6 Review
10/10

braye27

This little story is wonderful and filled with possibilities galore!  It seems as if Ginny's need for a book on Love Potions has already worked its magic without her having to brew the potion.  And Draco was somehow found his way into the same magical closet.  Don't you just love the way magic works?  I do!Now I have to ask myself the same thing Ginny asked herself.  Why did Professor Snape need a book on Love Potions?  This little one shot has set a great foundation for an expanded story if you ever decided you wanted to write it.  Well done, Melenka!Beth

Response from Melenka (Author of Dances in the Dark)

Thank you so much!  I am really glad you liked it.  It was a great deal of fun to write.  And you know how much I love ambiguous endings. :)  I figure if I don't write it, someone else is free to!  Might make for a fun challenge.

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

Ooh, that was smokin' hot and incredibly witty to boot.  I just love stories that make me giggle as I blush!  I adored the play on words here:“It’s long past time you two were in bed,” Madam Pomfrey said. “I couldn’t agree more.” Draco sauntered past her. Simply awesome!  This one is going straight into Favorites.  Wonderful writing!

Response from Melenka (Author of Dances in the Dark)

Thank you, darling.  I am so glad it made you laugh.  You know me and entendre... too close friends, I'd say.  Thanks for the lovely review. :)

10/10

blue artemis

That was cute.  I really liked it.

Response from Melenka (Author of Dances in the Dark)

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

sara lady dalian

Why didn't Severus take the book then?  Did he want her to find something in particular in it?  *hums... Thanks for the good read - Sara

Response from Melenka (Author of Dances in the Dark)

I think he wanted her to suffer with the knowledge that he knew she'd taken it.  The subsequent return would be adequate humiliation for what he was not acknowledging had happened in the closet.  He's casually cruel that way. ;)I'm glad you liked the story.  Thanks for the review!

10/10

karelia

Who- or whatever it was that lured you in to the chatroom tonight, I have to thank them. Brilliant piece of writing, as always, and so very enjoyable! <3

Response from Melenka (Author of Dances in the Dark)

Give thanks to yourself, dear lady.  I followed the link in your status message. ;)Thank you for the lovely review, and for the beta.  Callow wench that I am, I forgot to note that.  I withdraw to fix my error. :)

10/10

mick42

The staff seem to know how the closet works,  love your cheeky Draco. 

Response from Melenka (Author of Dances in the Dark)

Thanks! I have often wondered what sort of person Draco might have become if he hadn't been both spoiled and browbeaten his whole life. I like to think he'd have been more fun.

Displaying all 6 Review

The Petulant Poetess

A moderated archive, hosting stories by authors who enjoy dabbling in the wonderful world of Harry Potter fanfiction.

More About The Petulant Poetess

© Copyrights. All rights reserved. ThePetulantPoetess.com

Explore

  • All Stories
  • by Author
  • by Category
  • by Character
  • by Genre

Links

  • General Information
  • Terms and Conditions
  • Message Board
  • Writers' Resources
  • Submission Rules