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In the Light of Day
Hanagasume11 Reviews | 7.0/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )
In the light of day, they were enemies. But in the dark of night, they were lovers. DM/HG, written for the Hermione Fuh-Q-Fest.
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Hanagasume
Member Since 2008 | 31 Stories | Favorited by 246 | 119 Reviews Written | 1,704 Review Responses
I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion.
I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR.
I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.
SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!
Reviews for In the Light of Day
A sweet story. I could totally see them getting together in this context. Well, I can see them getting together rather easily if put together for any length of time, but this came off very natural and I enjoyed seeing the progression.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Thank you!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Thank you!
That was stunning. Loved it.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Thanks so much.
This fic is really beautiful! I do like the way Draco is in it. Congratulations!
lovely. if it isn't ss/hg i'll settle for dramione! thanks muchly
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Thanks for reviewing :) I know its not SSHG, but I was experimenting a little I guess! A~
How I wish they could live their relationship in the grand daylight. Of course they can't as long as the war isn't over. Or is it? I'm sure would get used tot he situation.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Yes, it would be nice. Perhaps once they leave Hogwarts they could try to make a life together. Thanks for reviewing! A~
very nicely done. Well written and engaging.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Thanks so much :) I am glad you enjoyed it! A~
I like how you developed the relationship between them. It wasn't love or lust at first sight, but a reluctant attraction. I can only hope that once they graduate they can have their relationship out in the open.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Thank you so much :) My aim was to try and make it seem as realistic as I could! I hope the five stars means I succeeded in doing so. Thanks! A~
I think you did well with Malfoy's character - he wasn't terrobly OOC at all, which happens a lot in fanfiction. Great job!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Thanks so much :) I tried my best to keep him in character when I could throughout the story. It wasn't possible the whole time! Thanks! A~
Wow, that was very sweet - not my usual ship, but lovely nonetheless. You captured their stolen moments together very nicely. Thanks!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Thanks :) I am glad you liked it despite it not being my usual ship either. Thanks for reviewing! A~
That was actually quite lovely, it is a pity they had to hide the relationship.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Thank you very much :) I am glad you liked it, and yes, it is a shame that they couldn't be together in the open even at the end there. Thanks for reviewing! A~
neatly resolved the quesiton of where for a first timelovely fic
Response from Hanagasume (Author of In the Light of Day)
Thanks.