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Saturday Night Drabbles Ducky
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Ducky

sunny33

27 Reviews   |   27 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 1,130 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Severus Snape finds a rubber duck on his desk.

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Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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http://sunnythirty3.livejournal.com

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10/10

mick42

I knew in had to Hermione,no one else would be so subtle.   not in my classroom duck,   has to be my favourite line. I'm going to try and find a sequel { please let there be a sequel}

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

I always meant to write one, but I ended up writing lots of other stuff instead. 

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

I know ,I looked, but I'm having fun,reading your other work.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

I always meant to write one, but I ended up writing lots of other stuff instead. 

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

I know ,I looked, but I'm having fun,reading your other work.

10/10

Hellsvampireguardian

Haha, Go Hermione, I am sure she will achieve her plans

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

She has plans? Oh, yeah.  Must write the next drabble...

10/10

Anonymous

Oh, really, they ought to ban drabble night.

Author's Response: But, but, but... How would we torment you then? :P

0/10

kimjo2

take that, sevie-kins!  great stuff!  thanks muchly

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Thanks! :)

0/10

liviconnor

Ha!  I really enjoyed this, odd as it was.  It was a bit dark, and a bit foreboding.  Especially the rather threatening 'quack' at the end.  I don't know entirely what to make of this fic, but it was fun nonetheless.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

LOL.  Saturday Night Drabbles are like that.  Weird things happen, and ducks are often involved! :)

10/10

GeminiScorp

LMAO ~ I do hope this isn't the end!! Great job!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

A sequel will be forthcoming! :)

0/10

Evil Woman

Excellent! Please tell me you are preparing a sequel!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Not yet.  I have another deadline to meet at the moment, however I think there will be one in the pipeline a little later.  :)

0/10

EverMystique

That was funny stuff. I knew Hermione was involved. The setting is perfect, and the situation hilarious.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Thanks! :)

10/10

Stefdarlin

Not too dark, but laughingly awesome.  What better to drive him insane with than a rubber duck.  LOL!  Go, Hermione!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Driving him quackers, you mean? :)

10/10

Anonymous

LOL! Excellent!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

10/10

Becky

QUACK......ROFL...I love it..well done!!!   MORE PLEASE!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

I think the duck may have to have a sequel...

Response from Becky (Reviewer)

I'm GLAD you're listening to the DUCK! YAYAYAY!!! This is the most clever story ever! LOL....WONDERFUL!!!

0/10

morgaine_dulac

Snape ... nude ... hm? What duck? (Sorry, got distracted.)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Hehe. You would! :P

10/10

lilashannah

Oh that was funny!! Great work..

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Thanks! :)

10/10

mikimoto

It is interesting how frightening being stalked is and the fact that the stalker is a non-sentient toy is even more unnerving.You have done a really good job capturing the mood of "being unnerved."And I have to admit that the quack at the end makes me wonder just how far this duck will go to be noticed.As for Hermione teaching him a lesson ... I doubt it.  I think if he ever connected the duck torture to his words, he would simply become angry about it and use even more cutting words the next time.  If she wants to create a behavioral change in him, she'll have to be very sly about it.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

True.  But perhaps she just wants revenge, rather than behavioural modification? :)

10/10

snitchette

I'd love it if there was to be a sequel. Our little Gryffindor princess can be a tough opponent when she wants to.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Ducky is lurking for the moment.   He may reappear when you least expect it! ;)

10/10

beaweasley2

LOL  Severus unnerved by an innocent toy? Really.  I loved how the duck kept coming back. Good for Hermione!  Loved this.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Thanks, bea! :)

10/10

Anonymous

Lovely! And with such a scaring end... *fright-inducing movie tune is played*

Author's Response: ... BOO! ;)

Alcina vom Steinsberg's response: Aaaaaarhg! *runs away screaming*

10/10

MuseAmusant

And so the first Dark Ducky rises at an unsuspecting Hogwarts... Bloody brilliant!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Dark Ducky.  LOL :)

10/10

Sevvy

Absolutely brilliant!  Loved this!  Just the thought of a furious, perplexed and naked Snape stomping round the dungeons is more than enough to sustain me for a Monday morning! :-)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Ah, the imagery! :)

Response from Sevvy (Reviewer)

Indeed! And, having now had a bath (during which time you sent your response) - filled of course with Chamomile, Bergamot and Lavendar (well, the latter certainly!), I kept a close eye on my own little yellow rubber duck that always sits on the edge of the bathtub ... quackers or what?!

0/10

remy

lmao, this is great!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Thanks! :)

10/10

Mooncat

LOL Oh, that was great! Thank you for the giggle - I really enjoyed it. Cat

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Thanks, Cat! :)

9/10

moiramountain

Oh I LOVE this - a manic, possibly homicidal rubber duck !! Brilliant !!! Quack indeed !!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

LOL thanks! :)

10/10

blue artemis

That was a wee bit dark, but I liked it.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

Thanks! :)

10/10

peppermint

Yes, there must be a sequel. A post-war, DH-compliant, EWE sequel. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

LOL.  Bossy, aren't you? :P

Response from peppermint (Reviewer)

Always! :D 

Response from peppermint (Reviewer)

Always! :D 

10/10

rosered

Grim and menacing.  I love the evil 'quack'!!!  :D

Response from sunny33 (Author of Ducky)

You will never look at a rubber duck the same again! :)

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