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Build The Moon

BrenaMarie

7 Reviews | 8.57/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Drama Angst Romance Drabble/100-Word Songfic Saturday Night Drabbles 552 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Luna laments to her diary about the man she is secretly in love with.

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Chapter 1: One-Shot

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BrenaMarie

Member Since 2006 | 21 Stories | Favorited by 48 | 536 Reviews Written | 360 Review Responses

Hello There! My name is Karen and I live right outside of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. Way back in 2006 when we needed to put "Half-Blood Prince" spoilers on our fics... when DH didn't even exist... I created my profile here on The Petulant Poetess.

Falling in love with the SS/HG Ship changed my life and allowed me to be in a position to save the site from extinction in 2019. I'm so grateful to be here and to continue to see the wonderful fic here live on for as long as possible.

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http://brenamarie.livejournal.com/

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10/10

Poor Luna, it's a hard lesson to learn, that the heart wants, what the heart wants.

0/10

Very nice, Brena! :)

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Build The Moon)

Thanks Sunny, as always I appreciate the comments! Much Love ~ Me

10/10

I ache for her. Maybe he'll notice her one day, preferably before her heart is irremediably broken . That's all I can hope for her.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Build The Moon)

Hey Snitchette! Thank you so much for the review! I took this prompt because I've got some very angsty stuff going on in my life right now and needed an outlet. After some of the response I've received from this drabble I'm wondering if I might have a reason to get the two of them together after all, we can always hope. Thanks again for the review! Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

Love it, hon. So sweet and sad. Makes me thinks of being a teenager again.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Build The Moon)

Hey honey. Thank you so much for leaving a mark on one of my fics. It really does mean so much to me. I do have to admit I was channelling my younger self when typing this drabble. Thanks Again. Love Always ~ Me.

10/10

Good choice for characters. The usually aloof girl suffering her own brand of pain.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Build The Moon)

Hey

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Build The Moon)

! Thanks for the review and the wonderful prompt! It was just what I needed to write last night with everything that is going on in my life right now. I'm glad I could do it justice and I'm so very glad you liked it. Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

I hope he does love her.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Build The Moon)

When you hear about someone caring so much for another, you can only hope those feelings are reciprocated. The answer is in my head somewhere. Maybe one day it will come out. Hopefully when I'm not feeling as hopeless and miserable as I do right now. Thanks for the review. Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

*sniffle* This is really well done, I feel for Luna.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Build The Moon)

Hey hon. I feel for her too, I've walked those shoes, and they suck! Deb is trying to convince me to do a follow up to this... We'll have to see if I get attacked by any bunnies, maybe our girl can have a happy ending after all. Thanks for reviewing! Much Love ~ Brena

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