write fast, because I'm dying to see your epilogue.  I bet it's great because this whole story has been brilliant. 

hmmm, complications of a romantic nature.  This is turning out so sweet....

This is very interesting, I feel so sorry for Severus, but he seems to be adjusting to father hood well.  Hermione is bon to be a mom.  Now all we have to do is get them together.

Great story. Fantastic job with the cure potion.

Delightful!  And thank you for the little summary of their futures.  Wonderful story!

I'm so pleased they were able to help Remus.  I've often wondered (before book seven made it a moot point) if Remus would die young because of the stress the transformations put on his body.   Nice to see someone else was thinking along the same lines.

Oh, good.  it IS finished, then!  hooray!

Very good!  I love the kids being able to comunicate.  This is a very good chapter and I am really enjoying this story when I should be going to bed!

I LOVE Dobby's reading to Carly!  How funny.  Dobby is my favourite character and 'I am loving to see him in fanfics.'

This is really neat.  I am enjoying it, and it's finished!  hooray! I love that Percy is viewing Hermione so rationally.  It is funny.   NOT that we want Percy to  marry her!  And I love that Carly can read thoughts, a very neat plot twist.Happy new year, and thanks for writing this.

A sick child, and a natural legilimens!  A wonderful start to a story.  But i feel so sorry for the boy waiting for his real father.  I hope we hear more about him, and that he is OK after a while.  Percy?  oh no!

I read this story for the first time quit a long time ago. I have read through it again, still loving it. I know since there has been such a long time since the last update that it probalbly never will be finished, and I think that is rather sad. Among all the great SS/HG stories out there, it is refreshing with a story where my two heroes doesn't fight through most of the story before they become friends (and lovers). You have given each of them the perfect child, Severus needs someone who both needs him and is a challenge and who loves him unconditionaly. As I said, I am prepared on that I might never read more than this 6 chapters, but you sure would make me a very happy person if you continued and finished this story.

I really like the way that you have touched on parental love not being something that is strictly based on being a legal parent or being one in the biological sense. The fact that Severus loves both Carly and Stephen is very endearing.

I have loved what you've written so far - it's great!I hope you write more - soon!