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I'm Not In Love Chapter 9: Millinery Wisdom
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I'm Not In Love

1: Is That Really You?

2: Fancy Seeing You Here.

3: Here We Are Then...

4: I Want To...

5: No Promises

6: What Is This?

7: How About You?

8: Is That All There Is?

9: Millinery Wisdom

10: I Want You To...

11: Home Is...

12: Epilogue.

Millinery Wisdom

I'm Not In Love

Chapter 9 of 12

neelix

Hermione and Severus bump into each other while on holiday. Do they ignore each other, or risk saying hello?

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A/N: To set the scene. The holiday is now over, and Severus has just finished his duties at the start of term feast. Another short chapter. I do apologise.


Severus walked from the Great Hall with the Sorting Hat in his hands. His speech had been short and to the point, and this year’s new students were in no doubt as to who was in charge at Hogwarts School. It was irritating to him that this old, moth-eaten bit of head wear had to stay in his office. It gave its opinion as and when it felt like it, most often at inappropriate moments. Like now, for instance.

‘It doesn’t have to be like this, you know.’ The Hat sprang into life in his hands, and he sneered at it.

‘What are you mumbling about?’ Severus intoned slowly.

‘The Gryffindor.’ The Hat managed to sound smug.

‘To which particular Gryffindor are you referring? You seemed to give them more than their fair share this year.’ Severus narrowed his eyes and pursed his lips.

‘Mmm, still loyal to Slytherin, I see, Headmaster?’ The Hat gave what passed as a chuckle and shook in Severus’s grip.

‘When the need arises,’ Severus said softly as he stopped in front of the gargoyle.

‘Wolfsbane,’ he murmured and stepped quickly onto the revolving staircase, eager to rid himself of his cargo.

‘I am referring to your Gryffindor, of course,’ the Hat continued. ‘The one who takes up most of your heart. I can see her there, you know. Love is powerful indeed.’

‘I have no idea what you are talking about.’ Severus pushed the Hat back onto its shelf.

The Hat shivered slightly and started to speak again.

‘Just as clipping the wings of a phoenix would take the joy of flight from its life, denial is disabling your heart. You could stay on your perch and remain unhappy. Or you could spread your wings and fly. The student always chooses, in the end.’

Severus stared at the Hat, which had fallen silent again.

‘Ridiculous,’ he muttered and sat at his desk, looking over the staffing schedules and waiting for Minerva. Her retirement was long overdue, and he felt he should address the delicate situation now so she could prepare herself.

Severus tried to focus, but the words of the Sorting Hat were filtering into his brain, and he found himself thinking about Hermione for the umpteenth time that day. He put his head in his hands and sighed deeply before reaching inside his robes to pull out her latest letter to read again.

***

Hermione stirred her potion and stared into space. The sun shone through the window of her lab, but she didn’t look at the view. The rolling hills went on for miles, just reminding her how far away she was from Severus. She sighed and checked her ingredients list one more time and then glanced at her watch.

The French school system worked on a different time frame to Hogwarts, starting early in the morning to allow a few hours respite for a leisurely lunch before classes recommenced. Hermione didn’t mind it; it gave her time to work on her own personal projects. Today, however, she was running late, and she hadn’t written to Severus yet.

She itched to write to him every day, but their correspondence was friendly, bordering on formal, and she didn’t want to pester him. On one particularly low day, when she had missed him so much her heart was aching, she had written him a love letter, begging him to see her and declaring her unending passion. It was the truth, but she had read it with disgust and incinerated it with her wand. They were not lovesick teenagers; they were adults who had just happened to have spent an amazing week together. That’s all. So she forced herself to only write to him once a week and was glad he replied consistently.

Hermione had no idea that receiving her letter was the high point of Severus’s week and that he awoke earlier than usual, with a spring in his step, when he knew her owl would arrive. She didn’t know that he traced her handwriting with his fingers and tenderly touched the parchment, imagining her hands there.

Hermione grabbed a folder of papers and left for her next class, resolving to write to him as soon as her students were set to task.

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Latest 25 Reviews for I'm Not In Love

112 Reviews  |  6.86/10 Average

10/10

mkwiant

WOW - LOVE the ending!  Thanks again for writing!

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moor

Love the ending -- embarking on another new adventure together. :D

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Montara

Loved their love story. Thank you.

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

Thanks for reading :)

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

Thanks for reading :)

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herbologist

Forget that vibrator , Hermione!
Good smut, though very fast paced.
What I did find slightly disappointing (and perhaps a little OOC for these two), is that their attraction seems to be entirely physical, and rather superficial. I like to imagine Snape is a man who wouldn't stare at a woman's breasts, forgetting about the rest of her. :-)

0/10

Florws

Well done! :)

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

8/10

ginnydm

That was a beautiful story. Im new to this site and I kinda like what I have read of you stories.  Keep up the good work

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

Thanks! I hope you enjoy the site, you'll find excellent writing here :)

10/10

snitchette

And it ends on such a happy and full of hope note. I'm definitely jealous.

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

Of course! It's always warm and fluffy in my world!

10/10

snitchette

I envy them to have found each other.

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

I know. How lucky are they?

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kimjo2

aahhh yesss...a gloriously happy ending!  thanks so much

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

Thanks!!

10/10

makaem

Excellent ending!

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

Thanks!

10/10

snitchette

They're so cute both of them. *smile* I can picture them so easily. Oh and Hermione : you two are lovesick puppies.

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

lol... they're pathetic aren't they!

10/10

blue artemis

It is sad when a hat is smarter than some people.

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

ah but this IS the Sorting Hat we're talking about.. it's no ordinary hat after all!

9/10

Sevvy

Me thinks that there are a lot of men out there, like Severus, who could do with that Sorting Hat to make them aware of their feelings (like a sort of Jiminy Cricket - conscience - for them!)

I love the way he traced her handwriting with his fingers, so sweet - I don't think he can stay in denial for much longer personally!  I also love the title of this chapter - Millinery Wisdom - inspirational!BTW: Thank you for the 'hug' you sent me earlier today, I really needed it - bless you! :-)

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

My other half definately needs a Sorting hat - he certainly doesn't take advice from me that's for sure!As for the hug... anytime love. We all need it!Thanks for the positive praise. It makes me glow!

10/10

Nessa

I love this. That sorting hat isn't stupid is he? Lets hope Severus listens.

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

lol... I hope so too, 'cos there aren't many chapters left!

10/10

gabi1791

Ohh, that's so sad and sweet... I hope they come to their senses soon. Great chapter!

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

Thanks for reviewing - I don't think you'll be disappointed!

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ConstantComment

Aw, how sad! Please make it better! :) This was lovely.

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

I'll do my best~!

10/10

pearl city princess

They both seen so afraid of getting hurt that they could possible let this chance for love slip away.  Hermione, Severus don't let this chance get away.  One of you needs to be brave enough to make the first move.  I love this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter.  Hurry, Hurry, Hurry...................

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

It's in the queue!

10/10

Hechicera

Noooo...what a tease! More! More right now!

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

lol... it's queued, hopefully won't be long.

8/10

Sevvy

Please tell me this is going to have a happy ending.  I am very emotional & sad today & when I saw you'd posted another chapter of this story I thought a quick read of a bit of 'smut' would cheer me up! But, once again, you've created a real 'romance' with these two & my heart is now going out to Hermione (imagining how I'd feel in her place) so now I've got even more heartache to cope with today!  Boo hoo  (Not trying to make you feel guilty or anything of course ... I totally blame Severus; stubborn man!)BTW: SS drinking guiness?  Surely not?   A glass of the most expensive red wine at least, I'd have thought! :-)

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

ahhh now. Red wine? You're confusing SS with AR!! Never ever do that! Sev is a Guiness and Whisky man, defo.As for your low mood... {{ hugging you}}Sometimes a good cry is whats needed... or a good shag. I can't do both in one chapter, but I hope you feel better soon!

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Hechicera

OK, that was just...extremely hot. Whew!

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

lol... I'm glad you liked it!

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Hechicera

Ooh, I just discovered this, and I AM enjoying it!

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

thanks... let me know how it turns out for you!

10/10

therese

What a hot story.Just found it and couldn't stop reding.Come on Severus you are such a clever man I#m shure there's a resolve.

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

mmm... he's also a Slytherin!

10/10

makaem

You will make things all better won't you?

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

I think that depends on Severus. You know how damned stubborn he can be!

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londonlupin

oh - please write more soon - when I got to the end of the text, my thought was "Is that all there is?" 

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

I know... too short. Sorry.

10/10

blue artemis

No new job openings?

Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)

ah now... Severus wouldn't be that calculating. Or would he? *buahhaaaaaaaaaahaaahahaa* (evil laugh!)

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