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Torment Poems Chapter 5: First Love
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Torment Poems

1: A present from us to you.

2: The Letter That Was Late

3: Cause and Effect

4: The first spell, Part I

5: First Love

6: First Love II

First Love

Torment Poems

Chapter 5 of 6

CantSpell

A poem based on a song by TheDarkness.

Angst Hogwarts Castle 871 Words 6 Chapters WIP
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I can't get rid of you,

And I really don’t know what to do.

I don't even know who is growing on whom.

Because everywhere I go you're there.

I can't get you out of my hair.

I can't pretend that I don't care.

It’s just not fair…

I'm being punished for all my offences.

I want touch you.

But I'm afraid of the consequences.

I want to banish you from whence you came.

But somehow,

You're part of me now,

And I've only got myself to blame.

You're really growing on me,

Or am I growing on you?

You're really growing on me,

Or am I growing on you?

Any fool can see!

Here I am again,

Sleeping in an empty bed.

I just can't get you out of my head.

I won't have a life until you're dead.

Yes, you heard what I said.

I want to shake you off, but you just won't go.

And you're all over me, but I don't want anyone to know

That you're attached to me, that's how you've grown.

Won't you leave me alone, leave me alone.

You're really growing on me,

Or am I growing on you?

You're really growing on me,

Or am I growing on you?

Any fool can see!

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Latest 25 Reviews for Torment Poems

11 Reviews  |  9.0/10 Average

10/10

mick42

Awww, he is so proud of himself.

10/10

mick42

You pushed his buttons, and found the one marked Crucio.

10/10

mick42

Severus had a lot to put up with.

10/10

mick42

Poor Severus, to want something so much, and then when he finally gets it, his mother suffers. 

10/10

mick42

Very dark, for one so young.

10/10

mick42

Oh ain't love grand.

9/10

Southern_Witch_69

I like the confidence in himself, and I can nearly see his smug expression as he finally gets the spell right! hehe

Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)

Yes, this is obviously before he begins to be made fun of. I think we he starts to get "tormented" I believe his self confidence will take a dive, poor fellow

0/10

CantSpell

No, I did. I got the letter the day before I had to leave, haha

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

LOL.. I hope that's him giving the speaker a Crucio. ~snicker~ Poor guy. No wonder he's so pissy, eh?

Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)

I think any kinda of gossip would make us all jsut a little cazy or in this case, very angry. Yeah, it's Snape. I enjoyed the pudding part, that one made me lauph when I wrote it. That too was based on a personal expirence!

Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)

By the way, I enjoy your stories very much. Yours are the best I’ve ever read, you hold true to character’s personalities. I think some of us forget what the characters are like in the books and we make the mistake of forming some kind of quixotic Snape that’s quit scary.

southern_witch_69's response:

Thanks. It's easier in some stories than others. I guess it depends if I'm feeling Snapey. hehehe! I am quite happy that you read my work though.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Poor Snape! I can just feel his disappointment. Grrr, his dad's a jerk!

Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)

This one is based on when I tried out for a band playing my tuba and they were to resond to tell me if I had made it in two weeks time and...sadly, the letter never came. I was so upset, then I had found out that it jsut got lost in the mail and I was accepted. But I think a Hogwarts letter would have disturbed me more.

southern_witch_69's response: Oh, man! So did you not get the chance later on to play?

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I think this is adorable. I like all the little names they call him (poor bloke). It reminds me of something Peeves would come up with.

Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)

This is my first try so thank you! yes, I'm really interested in Snape's childhood and I'll prolly do more stuff like this.Tongue out

Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)

Now that I think about it...you're right, it does sound like peeves would say...haha weird..southern_witch_69's response: Teehee! Cool. I can't wait to read.

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