III: Touching
Chapter 3 of 5
morgaine_dulacA series of drabbles answering a challenge from sinbad: ‘I have a challenge for you if you choose to accept it. I would like you to do a story that has a purely happy ending for Severus. Any ship, any trials and tribulations are up to you, but I'd like to see a happy ending. Just for giggles.’
Reviewed‘What is wrong with my eyes?’ Severus asked.
‘The snake’s poison affected your nervous system,’ Helena explained. ‘The Healers are working on a potion as we speak. But unfortunately, the best potioneer in the country cannot help them.’
She squeezed his shoulder with her small hand.
‘You will have to be patient, Professor Snape.’
He sneered. ‘I am not a patient man.’
To that, Helena laughed. ‘Yes, I know that, Professor.’
Once more she cast the spell that kept him from straining his vocal cords. But Severus suspected that she just did not want him to ask how she knew.
Talking hurt a little less each day. But still he sounded like an old raven.
‘Don’t worry,’ Helena soothed him one day. ‘Soon your voice will be as soft as velvet again.’
He scowled at her, and she laughed.
‘Your scowl doesn’t frighten me anymore, Professor.’
‘Not anymore?’
‘I remember the first time you swept into the Potions classroom, your robes billowing behind you and that scowl on your face. I was a timid sixth-year Ravenclaw. And you scared the living daylights out of me.’
Helena Scott. Severus remembered her. He never forgot a face. Especially not one that beautiful.
‘I remember you. Your hair is chestnut.’
‘Yes, it is.’
‘And your eyes are blue.’ Severus paused and searched his memories. ‘Grey when you are angry.’
‘You really do remember.’
‘May I look at you?’
He touched her hair first. It was silken.
Next was her neck. Her skin felt soft under his fingers.
When he touched her lips Helena smiled, and the fine lines at the corner of her mouth told Severus that she did so quite often.
But the smile faltered as he touched her cheek. And he withdrew his hand, startled.
He could not remember a scar.
That night Severus saw Helena’s face in his dreams. There was no scar. She was simply beautiful.
In his dream, his fingers touched her lips once more. They were warm and soft.
In his dream, he leant in and kissed her. And her lips parted for him, welcomed him, kissed back.
When he awoke, every fibre in his body seemed to be on fire, seemed to be screaming for her touch.
He stroked himself with a firm hand, moaned into his pillow to keep himself from screaming out her name.
In his mind, the hand giving him pleasure was hers.
‘Are you angry with me?’ he asked the next day.
‘Why would I be angry with you, Professor?’
‘Because I touched you,’ he started. ‘Because I touched your scar.’
Like the day before, she took his hand and held it against her cheek.
‘If you could see, you would have seen it the moment you opened your eyes. I don’t mind that you know it’s there.’
‘You did not have it at school,’ he went on. ‘What happened?’
‘It was a Dark Curse,’ she explained. ‘It was Sectumsempra.’
He let go of her as if burnt. Sectumsempra was his spell.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Love Is Blind
54 Reviews | 7.3/10 Average
Sweet and tender.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
This story was a big challenge, both the format and the happy end. But it was good fun!
I am glad he survives. Fawkes is know for coming to those who are loyal and in need and who could be more of both than Severus.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
We all know Severus survived. End of discussion. ;-)
I hope that it's Helena he saw through the windows.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Could be the Dark Mark *evil grin*Cheers. /M
patience, Sev, patience! :)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Since when is Severus Snape a patient man?? ;-)/M
Three weeks of brooding - even by Severus standards that's a lot of brooding! So, just what is he going to see out of the window?... I just hate it when you leave us wanting more like this, grrr! :-)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
I promise that the next (and final) chapter is in the queue.And it's MA rated ;-)Cheers. /M
Response from Sevvy (Reviewer)
It better be up before I go on my hols!! LOL :-)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
#22 in the queue!
Response from Sevvy (Reviewer)
I'll bring you back a stick of rock if it's good (chocolate if it's really good!!) :-)
Ah, Severus does what he does best... broods... thinks the woman can't possibly feel anything for him... Dunderhead! The good thing is... other than him regaining his sight and leaving the hospital... is that I didn't cry. 
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Didn't cry?! Who are you and what did you do to
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
??? ;-)Have patience with dear Severus. He's shy ... Cheers. /M
Curiouser and curiouser! This is a very intiguing little fic; I look forward to the next update with interest :-)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
It's on its way. Hope you'll like it./M
Oh dear. Something else for him to feel guilty about!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Got to love Snape on a guilt trip! ;-)Cheers. /M
Dang it! Well, at least I'm not crying... yet.Just what our beloved Potions master needs. More guilt. Hopefully she snaps, or slaps, him out of that one. 
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Gotta love to send Snape on a guilt trip. Not that he needs much help with that *rolls eyes*Cheers. /M
The plot thickens. Oh, please do write more!!!!!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
There will be 5 chapters, and they are all written. They just need to be validated.Cheers. /M
But Helena is too kind for not forgiving him, right? Plus, even if he invented it, he didn't cast it on her. I know it's no consolation, especially for Severus, and I hope he will forgive himself.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Snape in a nutshell, isn't it? Keep your fingers crossed. He might just get over it.Cheers. /M
How did she get hit with that spell? How did it? This woman seems to have an interesting past.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
You'll find out.Cheers. /M
Oh, I do hope he gets his beautiful voice back properly - just love SS' (or AR's I guess I should say) voice!Also the loveliest word he ever says (in anything) is 'beautiful' (he really sounds it out and makes it sound what it is!) Now I shall be thinking of that for the rest of the day - thank you!I'm guessing (like others) that he's blind currently - please tell me he'll get his sight back and be able to see the beautiful (or not?) Helena; just don't tell me that there's one of your horrible 'twists' to this! Want HAPPY, HAPPY, HAPPY this time!! :-)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
I promised a happy ending. I always keep my promises.Cheers. /M
Does this mean he can't see her? There's no referene to him seeing her; and in the previous chapter he only saw darkness.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
No, he cannot see hear. Next chapter will tell you, why he can't.Cheers. /M
I like this very much. And just like Severus, I'm curious to know who she is. Evidently, not Granger so...
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Hehe, no, no Granger ;-)/M
Very nice, but now a new mystery is upon us. Why does she think herself unattractive? I loved how he called her beautiful... twice!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
You will see, and so will he.Glad you liked the chapter.Have a nice week. /M
Mysteriouser and mysteriouser! :)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Is that even a word? ;-)Glad you're enjoying my drabbles.Cheers. /M
This is so very sweet. And you have really shown me how challenging and how much fun it is to write drabbles.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Drabbles are a lot of fun! Glad I figured that out.But be warned: Drabblitis is infectious ;-)
Interesting, I take it the nurse never heard the expression 'beauty is in the eye of the beholder'.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
She has heard it but doesn't believe in it :-(Glad you liked the chapter. /M
The mystery increases . . . [dramatic music here]
So who is this Helena? I know, I know, all will be revealed, in slow delicious snatches, lol. But knowing Severus as we know him, he will leave no stone unturned in finding out all he can about the Nurse Helena.Looking forward to more,Keep up the good work,
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
I'll be making it easy for dear Severus this time. But just this once, don't get used to it ;-)Glad you like my drabbles.Have a nice weekend. /M
Oh how I wish I could write like you!Your stories are magical (yes I used that word on purpose) and I hope you keep it up! =)
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
Naw, you're too sweet. I just wish I could make some money ;-)
Thank you, I just love a happy ending.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
So glad you enjoyed it!
Not good to leave him brooding on his own for that long Helena.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
But he broods so nicely!
Oh shit! now don't go all dark and guilty, give the girl a chance.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
But he does dark and guilty so well!
If he says she is beautiful, then beautiful she is.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Author of Love Is Blind)
It takes guts to tell him otherwise.