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Finding Her Style
notsosaintly25 Reviews | 7.96/10 (25 Ratings, 0 Likes, 56 Favorites )
Ginny's experience in kissing boys is certainly helpful to Hermione, who must learn to find her style. (Warning: femmeslash)
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While I have nothing to judge by, the slash and minage-a-trois was quite ummm, ... you know...yeh, that! The idea of Ron and Ginny watching each other was not disturbing though I suppose it should have been for proprieties sake. However, since nothing her was proper I shall not worry too much about that. I must say that the idea of them watching each other was pretty, well, you know...the same!! I must be very naughty to like the entire thing very much. If I were to imagine such activity I would say you did a really good job!
Oh goodness. Well, not exactly incest, but a interesting threesome! Gads, the girrls were insationable!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
LOL I know. I should have a warning that says 'not-quite-incest'. But there was a sister and brother both in the same room and I think some people might be a little squicked by that.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
LOL I know. I should have a warning that says 'not-quite-incest'. But there was a sister and brother both in the same room and I think some people might be a little squicked by that.
Oh goodness! Well the lesson on how to kiss surly went well. I think she's got it down now.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I'd say. I think the problem would be finding a guy who kissed as well. Ginny may well have spoiled her.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I'd say. I think the problem would be finding a guy who kissed as well. Ginny may well have spoiled her.
Here's hoping that in three years, we'll find out exactly how much Hermione enjoyed Ginny's enthusiasm. ;)Well worth a three year wait!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Oh, another one who doesn't believe that I've truly ended it. *lol* Yeah, well, I plead momentary insanity, writer's prerogative, um ... story confusion? Not buying it? *shrug* Yes, well, I have found never to believe myself when I say it's over. Isn't that right, self? Yup. Yeah, we agree.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Oh, another one who doesn't believe that I've truly ended it. *lol* Yeah, well, I plead momentary insanity, writer's prerogative, um ... story confusion? Not buying it? *shrug* Yes, well, I have found never to believe myself when I say it's over. Isn't that right, self? Yup. Yeah, we agree.
Thanks love. That answered any and all questiona I had or might have had. Your a genius.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
*bows* Glad to oblige. Nothing like getting an author to revive an old story just to answer your question, eh? Erm... can you release the Imperius now? LOL
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
*bows* Glad to oblige. Nothing like getting an author to revive an old story just to answer your question, eh? Erm... can you release the Imperius now? LOL
"fin (and I mean it this time)"?? Come on!! You're good at writing this. How about adding another third party, someone outside the family? I mean, there would be nothing wrong with a Gryffindor Sandwich for a change, eh?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Actually, a Fred and George sandwhich has always appealed to me. But I think I did that one already. Though that story also needs a bit of editing.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Actually, a Fred and George sandwhich has always appealed to me. But I think I did that one already. Though that story also needs a bit of editing.
Oh my, looks like I missed out on something not readig femmeslash. That has to change! Now!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Normally, I don't read it. But Ginny and Hermione, I don't know, they're just begging for it.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Normally, I don't read it. But Ginny and Hermione, I don't know, they're just begging for it.
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What, exactly, do you mean by, "fin (and I mean it this time)", because I am unsure. LOL.
Ginny and Hermione femmeslash is awesome. I think I will agree with you and say that it's the people involved--like anything. For example, I like het, but I can't stand reading about Harry with any girls. I just don't care for Harry.
This read as entirely plausible to me and oh so effin' hot. I wasn't even hoping that Snape would make a sudden, unannounced visit, and that's saying a lot!
Now, about the next part of the Virgin's Primer...
Author's Response: I knew someone was going to say something about Tutoring Session, which I've severely neglected. Hmm... I think I'll have Molly teach me the spell that packs boxes.
I was a little disappointed that this chapter ended up being only (barely) 2,000 words. But I didn't want to overdo it, and there's always that danger where I'm involved.
I'm pretty sure if it's Weasleycest, it can't be wrong...Did I just say that? I did. Hot. And cute.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yes, I think there's a law written somewhere to that effect. At least, in my world there is. (Thank you!)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yes, I think there's a law written somewhere to that effect. At least, in my world there is. (Thank you!)
Talk about developing a "taste" for it!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Well, you have to admit, at least there's no choking something down your throat. (That is the only plus I can think of seeing as I have never experienced it ... oh, and the fact that at least a woman would know what the hell to do!)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Well, you have to admit, at least there's no choking something down your throat. (That is the only plus I can think of seeing as I have never experienced it ... oh, and the fact that at least a woman would know what the hell to do!)
I love Ron coming in. Bet he doesn't know whether to be ashamed he is turned on, grateful, or just plain embarrassed!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
LOL I'm thinking a male at that age (and I left it ambiguous as to the age) is most likely very, very, very grateful.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
LMAO! Indeed!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
LOL I'm thinking a male at that age (and I left it ambiguous as to the age) is most likely very, very, very grateful.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
LMAO! Indeed!
I held my breathe through the whole thing. lol. My only ? is what did they do to Ron?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I actually read through it again just now, and I think I could improve on it a bit. I don't know what they do to Ron. That would be bringing in a whole other warning, now, wouldn't it? (Not that I haven't explored that in a story before.)
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
This story kinda reminds me of a friend I had a long time ago. Something similar happened to us. The kissing lessons anyway. Not else or someone coming in on us. Hot never the less. What is the title of this little diddy?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
The other story? Oh, I thought you read it already. Maybe it was someone else. It's called First Times at the Weasleys or something like that.
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
Oh I feel stupid now. Yeah I read that. I don't know what is with my mind lately. Forgive me.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yeah, you did. You can always go re-read it though ...I am so tempted to give this one another chapter. I have ti open on my desktop now. But I'm afraid RL is about to beat me over the head and I may need to take a few days "off". But the muse is very, very active.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yoo-hoo, Arabella dear. I've written another chapter just because you asked that question so nicely... let me know what you think.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I actually read through it again just now, and I think I could improve on it a bit. I don't know what they do to Ron. That would be bringing in a whole other warning, now, wouldn't it? (Not that I haven't explored that in a story before.)
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
This story kinda reminds me of a friend I had a long time ago. Something similar happened to us. The kissing lessons anyway. Not else or someone coming in on us. Hot never the less. What is the title of this little diddy?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
The other story? Oh, I thought you read it already. Maybe it was someone else. It's called First Times at the Weasleys or something like that.
Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)
Oh I feel stupid now. Yeah I read that. I don't know what is with my mind lately. Forgive me.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yeah, you did. You can always go re-read it though ...I am so tempted to give this one another chapter. I have ti open on my desktop now. But I'm afraid RL is about to beat me over the head and I may need to take a few days "off". But the muse is very, very active.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yoo-hoo, Arabella dear. I've written another chapter just because you asked that question so nicely... let me know what you think.
Very hot! Great story. Too bad it wasn't Harry, ready to jump in and join them. ;)
OMG, this is so awesomely well written. I love it. Though, I don't think Ron would react like that when he sees his little sister shagging Hermione ... or being shagged by Hermione? Hehe
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Probably not, but one can hope! *smirk*
the entire time i was reading it i couldnt help but htink how perfect it would be if a guy saw it. The guy i had in mind was actually Ron, too! hahah!. Perfect. loved it. TMI, but this reminds me exactly, almost down to the last detail, of my first... ahem... endeavor with a... um... girl. I guess what im trying to say was that this was very very well written.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Well, I'm very happy then that I portrayed it realistically because this came entirely from my imagination. Thank you!
I'm not much a fan of femmeslash but this sure pulled me in--sure wasn't expecting that surpise viewer at the end. Eeeek. Though teen boy, wouldn't take much, sister or no.
I certainly could relate to the part about experiences being kissed--the good, the bad, and the way too ugly to ever want it repeated.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Thanks, harmony. I'm not much of a femmeslash fan myself. But there was a discussion going around, and I wondered if I could write it. I'm glad it pulled you in ... I really need to go back and read this one myself. *lol*
Ron? Hot? ahahaha.... yeah, for a whingy 16year old brat... yuck... i'm into the dark and brooding men..not the pests!southern_witch_69's response: this was in response to cocoachristy lol
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Ron may not be dark or brooding or... *cough* a man, but I'm sure he's got something pretty nice hidden beneath those robes. Mwahahaha!
Whoops! Is he still jailbait?
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Well well well! Nice of Ginny to lend a helping "hand" to her friend in need...The only think that freaked me out was Ron at the end, because Gin is his sister. Although I realize it was watching Hermione be sexual that turned him on...Poor Harry, missing all the fun!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Yeah, if I was caught by a family member, I'd be mortified. Though, there is something about Ron... and he just keeps popping up in my stories.
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
Personally I think Ron is hot...although I am probably one of the few...;)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I love Ron too. In fact, Melisande wrote a Ron story for me you might like to read, if you haven't done so already.
Response from cocoachristy (Reviewer)
Thanks T!
for the first time. you did great.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
LOL... well, thanks.
Umm... wow? Great first foray into femmeslash! The only thing that squicked me was Won Won getting a stiffy over his sister... *shudder* Hopefully he was just watching Hermione. That and he's a teenage boy... it doesn't take much! I'm surprised he didn't stain his shorts! Great job, and I hope you have to purge more demons soon!! *grin* GG
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Ron got a "stiffy" over seeing two girls together. I don't know what it is about men and watching two women. *shakes head* Heehee. Squick? You want squick? Oh, I could direct you to squick. ROFLMAO!! (I'm in a crazy mood; ignore me.)
Response from Gardengrrl13 (Reviewer)
Now... squick for squick's sake is fun and often entertaining... *evil grin*
It's just that that was a hot and steamy scene between the girls, and that twist at the end just made me go, "Yipe! The Perve!!!" *grin*
Seriously, I hope you write more femme slash in the future! You've got a real knack for erotica, I think. Well, you've made me sweat, anyway...
*kisses!* GG
Naughty, Ron! Will he and Harry join in at some stage? Or will this be strictly "girls only"? :)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
It totally depends on the response. This is my first foray into femmeslash of any type. These archives have a heavy female readership, so this should be interesting. And anyway, I'm supposed to be putting my brain on Tutoring Session next... though had to purge a demon first with this one.
Muahaha! Man, I loved this. It so makes me want to call up my little Kristie. lol... **zips lips** Brilliant. I eagerly await what you might do next with this. I can just see Ron there... "That's my sister that Hermione's doing... but bloody hell! Those cries and moans... wicked!" ~Snicker~
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
I just may have to incorporate that bit of dialogue, since you put it so... wickedly. LOL!southern_witch_69's response: teeeheee... Lavender never excited him that much, poor bloke! lol
I am really impressed with how you eased by the whole possiblity of incest. (Not a squick of mine, but I know it does bother some) Very, very well written.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Thank you.Actually, it isn't exactly ease with the concept of incest. I read a book once that I was unprepared for that involved incest between a father and daughter, and I literally tore the book in pieces before throwing it in the garbage. If I could have, I would have burned it. And it's funny, because when I was in Borders yesterday I unwittingly saw that book on the shelf, and I thought, "It must have been a sick mind who wrote that." Of course, it simultaneously occurred to me that I have written incest a couple times (though NEVER father/daughter).I think it is the Weasley children that make it comfortable for me. Just like I do not particularly enjoy slash (male or female) unless it is between the right people. The "right" people meaning that in my mind it just feels that they're right together. I am a picky person that way. *lol*
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
Thank you.Actually, it isn't exactly ease with the concept of incest. I read a book once that I was unprepared for that involved incest between a father and daughter, and I literally tore the book in pieces before throwing it in the garbage. If I could have, I would have burned it. And it's funny, because when I was in Borders yesterday I unwittingly saw that book on the shelf, and I thought, "It must have been a sick mind who wrote that." Of course, it simultaneously occurred to me that I have written incest a couple times (though NEVER father/daughter).I think it is the Weasley children that make it comfortable for me. Just like I do not particularly enjoy slash (male or female) unless it is between the right people. The "right" people meaning that in my mind it just feels that they're right together. I am a picky person that way. *lol*
I bet Ron is sooooo confused. I can't even begin to put myself into his shoes.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
No kidding. *lol*
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Finding Her Style)
No kidding. *lol*
damn!