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firefly124

10 Reviews   |   10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 12 Favorites )

Erotica Smut Shrieking Shack 4,196 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Remus Lupin

Trapped by a lockdown at the Ministry, Hermione and Remus are left with little to do but confront why their relationship has stalled. Post-war but wildly AU. Never mind forgetting DH, you could probably forget back to GoF if you wanted to.

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Member Since 2006  |  11 Stories  |  Favorited by 55  |  373 Reviews Written  |  299 Review Responses

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0/10

stgulik

Beautiful little story that always makes me sigh with happiness. Where is my Remus?

10/10

phoenix

Great job. Nothing like a little forced confinement to get people to own up to their emotions. I especially love that it was Harry 'rescuing' them.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

9/10

severuslover

Very cute! I love the fact that Harry caught them at the end...hilarious! Great job.~Jen

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it and found the end hilarious. :-)

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it and found the end hilarious. :-)

8/10

la Chatelaine

**Happy sigh****Very happy sigh!**

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Yay for happy sighs!  Thanks!

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Yay for happy sighs!  Thanks!

0/10

soccermom

Very well written.  I loved the interaction between Remus and Hermione.  It was so believable.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it and found it believable.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it and found it believable.

10/10

Anonymous

What a wonderful little story! :o) I truly enjoyed reading it. It's quite unusual, putting Hermione and Remus togehter - but then, why not, it works really well and they seem to be well suited in your piece. I love the line where Harry wants to gouge his eyes out! *rofl*

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  I know what you mean about HG/RL being a small ship.  Sometimes it seems like it should be larger, because they do seem to fit well.  Who knows why things go the way they do in fandom? LOL  Glad you got a kick out of poor Harry's trauma. *g*

10/10

Muggline

According to Murphy's law, it had to be Harry and he had to come in at exactly that moment. Thank you for a wonderful little love story.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Yep, Murphy's law in action. *g*  Thanks!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Yep, Murphy's law in action. *g*  Thanks!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

Gardengirl

Loverly! Thanks for sharing

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

braye27

Nicely done!  I enjoyed Hermione's assurances to Remus that she did understand his hesitancy and that she was, in spite of his concerns, more than willing to work through all of them.Harry's timing was priceless!  I had to laugh!Beth

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it and felt Hermione handled Remus' hesitancy well.

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it and felt Hermione handled Remus' hesitancy well.

10/10

notsosaintly

This was absolutely brilliant.  You very smoothly delivered all the backstory we needed so we weren't wanting for more information. You stayed firmly in one POV, showing Remus's feelings instead of slipping and 'telling' them.  This is wonderfully done on so many levels.  (Oh, and the punctuation/grammar was perfect, which you know I'd love instantly.)  And the scene between Hermione and Remus—you know, the more intimate one—was as perfect as Remus wanted their first time to be. It draws the reader in, doesn't use any language that might offend some; it was just right.  Although ... that last bit when Harry rescued them?  I wasn't expecting it at all and actually had to cover my mouth so I wouldn't wake up the whole house laughing and screaming, "Oh, no, I can't believe she did that!"  LOL  Well, I'm always one for torturing Harry....

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  (Including the Harry torture. *evil grin*)

Response from firefly124 (Author of Perfect)

Thanks!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  (Including the Harry torture. *evil grin*)

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