A Dreaded Detention
sunny3315 Reviews | 5.33/10 (15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
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sunny33
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
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So I said to myself, "Self, surely there are some stories by Sunny which you have yet to read." So I went looking, and what do you know, there are. Of course it would be nice to find another chapter of a certain story instead *whistles innocently*As for commas, those are evil little buggers.Off to find more gems ...
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
*cringe* That was one of my very early efforts! 1700 words into next chapter, my dear. I can't believe how knackered I was last week after we got back from Australia. Holidaying is sooo tiring! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
2650 now. Not bad for an hour or so. *yawn* Time for bed!
Anonymous
ba-dum-ching.
Author's Response:
DING DI NG DING! You win the prize! :P
Oh, hang on, this isn't a slot machine...
KingPhilipsWench's response: god i love slot machines.
I think there is a major conspiracy amongst some members of society against commas. Maybe someone should inform the Office for Mistreatment of Punctuation Addicted Authors.
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
ROFL! :)
I heard her scream.poor thing. the rights of the artist. where are they. *sigh* "she doesn't want to hurt, she just wants to play"all my teachers must have had nervous breakdowns because of my individual interpretation of poetic licence *gg*And what was her detention for? Abuse? o-ho. maybe I start to feel a little for the punished nerves of my teachers...
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
I'm impressed you got so much from 100 words! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
I'm impressed you got so much from 100 words! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Anonymous
Evil comma, thinking she cant go unpunished just because she's got curves in all the right places!
Author's Response: She's young, she's cute, she's got curves in all the right places... beeyatch!
You have a wicked sense of humor. Surely you never misuse a comma. I just don't believe that.
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
Who, me? *looks around furtively to see if LITC is about* ... Never!
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
Who, me? *looks around furtively to see if LITC is about* ... Never!
She thinks highly of herself, doesn't she? with her nicely rounded curves. LOL Thanks for the laugh!
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
She is just a silly little apprentice after all!
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
She is just a silly little apprentice after all!
Poor little thing,she is just learning, after all.
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
You've been busy! :)
This made me laugh so hard, possibly because of my own comma-related inadequacies. I don't believe I've ever read a drabble on punctuation before, but now I see what I've been missing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
There's plenty more where that came from, I did seven in all, some for various requests by reviewers! Thanks for reviewing!
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
There's plenty more where that came from, I did seven in all, some for various requests by reviewers! Thanks for reviewing!
*grin* poor little comma.
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
LOL the comma thanks you for your review.
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
LOL the comma thanks you for your review.
ah, but did she prevent someone's story from being validated? that's a major crime in my book!
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
That's why she got detention!
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
That's why she got detention!
I'll be doodling curvy commas all day now *grin*
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
LOL, morgaine! :D
LOLOL, I'm afraid my sympathies are with ladyinthecloak!
Response from sunny33 (Author of A Dreaded Detention)
Hehe. :)