Happy Little Fool
Battle of Lissa4 Reviews | 4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Angst at its finest (or worst, however you may look at it). This will either make you roll your eyes or aptly illustrate your own experiences.
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About Battle of Lissa
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Battle of Lissa
Member Since 2007 | 12 Stories | Favorited by 141 | 65 Reviews Written | 765 Review Responses
Student at California State University of Los Angeles. Currently studying Law and Society Sociology and Criminology while hovering in graduation limbo.
I enjoy writing simple poetry about love, life, and betrayal; either about myself or those closest to me.
Notice! December 2, 2010:
This site is amazing. The numerous reviews and reads I have received here has been beyond humbling. However as I have gotten older, RL has taken main priority to reading and writing fanfic. Any tiny fraction of personal time I am able to indulge myself has been spent in the fandom, but I must admit it had been dwindling more and more. I will NEVER abandon anything I have begun, and attempt to finish my WIPs every day. However, like many authors, I have made the mistake of submitting my work to more archives than I am capable of maintaining with the care that is due them. If I am able and time willing, I might continue to update my fics here, but my main priority lies elsewhere. MODERATED ARCHIVES ARE A BLESSING AND NECESSARY FOR QUALITY FIC. I stand by that. Unfortunately submitting my fics to various moderated archives means more time necessary to edit the various mistakes each individual archives will find in my work. My fics will continue to be updated at Ashwinder and Potter Place Archives, anywhere else will have to take a back seat. This is my problem and I take full responsibility. Thank you for reading, reccing, voting, and reviewing my fics on The Petulant Poetess!
Reviews for Happy Little Fool
So true. And so sad. Thank you for sharing. /M
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Happy Little Fool)
Your welcome. And thank you for the read and review.
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Happy Little Fool)
Your welcome. And thank you for the read and review.
Your last verse dives straight into my heart and reveals my deepest disappointment in my previous marriage. Have you been performing Legilimency long distance? Great title and very well written.
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Happy Little Fool)
The last verse was the first thing written. Everything else was my attempt to explain 'why'. I'm very sorry about your previous relationship, that's sad to hear. Very happy you liked it though, thanks for the read and review!
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Happy Little Fool)
The last verse was the first thing written. Everything else was my attempt to explain 'why'. I'm very sorry about your previous relationship, that's sad to hear. Very happy you liked it though, thanks for the read and review!
At the same time, this is so true, yet so devastating. There are times I have felt like this within my marriage. I think that in a way men are simply clueless about women, what they need from their men, what they want.... Thing is, he''ll change because of you and for someone else, but things will degrade in that relationship too most likely and she'll end up relating to this poem as well.Oh, that's a fatalistic attitude. I have to nudge myself when I get that way, be more positive....
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Happy Little Fool)
Bad habits are bad habits, that is true. As you mentioned intentions for the 'next one' might sway for the better, but those bad habits could most likely come back again or just take a different form. Very excited you enjoyed this! Thanks for the read and review!
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Happy Little Fool)
Bad habits are bad habits, that is true. As you mentioned intentions for the 'next one' might sway for the better, but those bad habits could most likely come back again or just take a different form. Very excited you enjoyed this! Thanks for the read and review!
That was powerful! And so filled with undeniable truth! It is, unfortunately, a truth too many have to learn in order to have a happy and fulfilling life.Very well written!Beth
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Happy Little Fool)
Very true. It is a truth, and one that needs to be learned. Unfortunately for some, it takes much longer than it should. Very glad you liked it! Thanks for the read and review!
Response from Battle of Lissa (Author of Happy Little Fool)
Very true. It is a truth, and one that needs to be learned. Unfortunately for some, it takes much longer than it should. Very glad you liked it! Thanks for the read and review!