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Wonder Witch Love Potion 69

1: As If Flying on Firebolts

2: The New Wonder Witch Love Potion

3: The World Comes Crashing Down

4: From a Dream Into a Nightmare

5: Resolving a Misunderstanding

6: Things Are Starting to Look Up

7: Everything Is Coming Out Right

Wonder Witch Love Potion 69

beaweasley2

166 Reviews   |   166 Ratings, 0 Likes, 35 Favorites )

Humor Angst Smut General Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 32,562 Words 7 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood Severus Snape

Sometimes your life simply turns upside
down when you least expect it to. Hermione thought her life was all mapped out and going according to plan. Nevertheless, one night at the opera and a mysterious romantic dream may have changed things for her forever.

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Chapters (7)

Chapter 1: As If Flying on Firebolts

Chapter 2: The New Wonder Witch Love Potion

Chapter 3: The World Comes Crashing Down

Chapter 4: From a Dream Into a Nightmare

Chapter 5: Resolving a Misunderstanding

Chapter 6: Things Are Starting to Look Up

Chapter 7: Everything Is Coming Out Right


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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company. 

“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
 “Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov 
“Imagination is everything. It is the preview of life's coming attractions.”― Albert Einstein

“Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were, but without it we go nowhere.” ― Carl Sagan

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salvamea

LOOLL"...dark, mysterious and broody. a babe magnet.Merlin knows why women like the sort...."hey, you make fun of us fandomgirls? what do  you think makes me read all that stuff*gg*aha, finally we see the house redecorated. and as he mentioned, after he is "done" with her, there will be plenty of time to redo everything. ah, fine indeed.well done."Everybody loves somebody sometimes. everybody falls in love somehow.... lalala"

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Salvamea, Gads, NO! I would never make fun of US! Me included. *hand on chest* Yes, well at least color changed a bit. Just think he's gonna let HER redecorate! Course she will have to wait until he's done with her... who knows how long that took!Thanks for the compliment, I appreciate it very much!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Salvamea, Gads, NO! I would never make fun of US! Me included. *hand on chest* Yes, well at least color changed a bit. Just think he's gonna let HER redecorate! Course she will have to wait until he's done with her... who knows how long that took!Thanks for the compliment, I appreciate it very much!

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salvamea

just say, he is definitely making solid plans for him and Hermione.HE believes that they will work out.Of course she has not faith in anything, now that she found out what her Ronnikins had had the cheek to do.So they are not all soul-mates. some are just together because they chose, some because of their hormones misbehaving.but this time everybody is acting really grown up.chapeau.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Yes, ever since the confirmation of the potions mixup, Sverus has decided that Hermione will be his. period. Of course he believes it will work out, why not! He's right about everything, isn't he. He is a guy afterall. TeehheheNope, it's just that so much is happening so fast and when your world and everything you've been planning and counting on turns upside down it takes a while to find your feet - let alone start a new relationship, replan your furture and start counting on anything again.In regards to 'so they are not all soul mates,' only one couple isn't. Angelina and Lee. But she was 'drawn to the loss' of Fred, so to speak, missing him so much she went to see his grave. Lee just happened to be there. He might have been drawn to her, but possibly not. But they took the time to try and figure it out and... you'll see.And yes, I didn't want to type a bunch of adolecsent kids, but add some maturity to it all. (Ron doens't count)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Yes, ever since the confirmation of the potions mixup, Sverus has decided that Hermione will be his. period. Of course he believes it will work out, why not! He's right about everything, isn't he. He is a guy afterall. TeehheheNope, it's just that so much is happening so fast and when your world and everything you've been planning and counting on turns upside down it takes a while to find your feet - let alone start a new relationship, replan your furture and start counting on anything again.In regards to 'so they are not all soul mates,' only one couple isn't. Angelina and Lee. But she was 'drawn to the loss' of Fred, so to speak, missing him so much she went to see his grave. Lee just happened to be there. He might have been drawn to her, but possibly not. But they took the time to try and figure it out and... you'll see.And yes, I didn't want to type a bunch of adolecsent kids, but add some maturity to it all. (Ron doens't count)

10/10

pookah

I have really enjoyed this story.  Thank you for sharing it with us!  I still feel sorry for Lavender, poor dear.  I admit I am a sucker for happy endings.  This is a delightful response to the prompts you chose.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I had a lot of fun writing this. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Don't feel to bad for Lavender, I'll make it up to her in another story.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I had a lot of fun writing this. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Don't feel to bad for Lavender, I'll make it up to her in another story.

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elsolel

Very, very, very cool.  I loved this chapter.  I think it is funny that the Malfoys are annonymously improving their standing. 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thank you very much. Yes, well, he is saving face.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thank you very much. Yes, well, he is saving face.

10/10

pookah

I like that Hermione is sensible and knows the power of influence.  Harry on the board is better than her hand in Harry's pocket.  and good for Severus!  This is working out very nicely, so for.  I am enjoying it a great deal.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. She is supposed to be brilliant, and Harry is helping out alot in many other ways. Yes, Severus is stepping up. I'm glad you like this, Thanks for the review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. She is supposed to be brilliant, and Harry is helping out alot in many other ways. Yes, Severus is stepping up. I'm glad you like this, Thanks for the review.

10/10

pookah

I am enjoying your tale, you're weaving the prompts together nicely.  This is a lot of fun.  I really want Lavender to use the potion and attract her own soul mate! 

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm fhaving so much fun writing this. Sory, Lav can't drink eat a truffle, Hermione destroyed them all and it's not likely Hermione will brew that potion again.

Response from pookah (Reviewer)

Pity if she doesn't make the soul-mate drawing potion again.  she could make a lot of money, (but also open herself to lawsuits from disgruntled customers.)  I really like your take on this prompt.  the mixing up of the potions that YOU invented, the absorption through the skin, very nicely thought out.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm fhaving so much fun writing this. Sory, Lav can't drink eat a truffle, Hermione destroyed them all and it's not likely Hermione will brew that potion again.

Response from pookah (Reviewer)

Pity if she doesn't make the soul-mate drawing potion again.  she could make a lot of money, (but also open herself to lawsuits from disgruntled customers.)  I really like your take on this prompt.  the mixing up of the potions that YOU invented, the absorption through the skin, very nicely thought out.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I love all the Slytherin tactics going on here  you have to love him  he trys so hard

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. He is so much fun to write. If only JKR actually really loooked at the man she invented instead of hated him so... oh, well.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. He is so much fun to write. If only JKR actually really loooked at the man she invented instead of hated him so... oh, well.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Ron the git Severus and the room man you have everything in this one

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. Yes, Ron is a git. Severus is quite the man. and I'm glad you like this story.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. Yes, Ron is a git. Severus is quite the man. and I'm glad you like this story.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

lol what a chapter love it

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

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10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

its amazing how you took all those prompts and made it into this magnificent story.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. They (#63, 1, 70, 100) just all seemed to fit as I read them and the more I played around with them I found that I could actually even add two more #34 & 35 to give it even more depth. I'm still amazed that they all pulled/pushed/squeezed and folded together as well as they did!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. They (#63, 1, 70, 100) just all seemed to fit as I read them and the more I played around with them I found that I could actually even add two more #34 & 35 to give it even more depth. I'm still amazed that they all pulled/pushed/squeezed and folded together as well as they did!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

this is very indepth and well written.  and the story line is brilliant  i so want to more on now

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm so flattered that you think so.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm so flattered that you think so.

10/10

Maddie

Severus is so clever. A brilliant way to win Hermione's heart.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I thought so. Glad you liked it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I thought so. Glad you liked it.

0/10

kimjo2

highly intriguing story!  thanks so much for the great update

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thank you, and you are most welcome.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thank you, and you are most welcome.

9/10

Southern_Witch_69

Another good chapter. I like that she's  feeling confused. It seems only right, but she does need to remember she's screwed around, too.Good of the Malfoys, though it's for their own gain. :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. Well, yes, which is why the friendship can be mended... eventually.Ype, although, it's still nice of them. Would you really expect anything less from a Slytherin couple?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. Well, yes, which is why the friendship can be mended... eventually.Ype, although, it's still nice of them. Would you really expect anything less from a Slytherin couple?

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WriterMerrin

I didn't think I could like a chapter with no direct interaction between the two so much, but it really was great! Severus' planning is incredible, and I'm really looking forward to seeing how many dots Hermione can connect. Looking forward to seeing them together again, soon ;)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. wow, I'm so glad you liked it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. wow, I'm so glad you liked it.

10/10

Sampdoria

I really, really like this story! I like this Severus who aknowlegde what he wants and in stead of the usual dribble "I am to old, ex-death eather, to ugly etc etc", he goes for what  he wants. Not only that, he is quite sure that he will get her I like him this secure, and I like how he uses his Slytherin shceeming to help her and in the same time move himself into her path, very well done:-))I would have liked to harm Ron more though. In my eyes he insulted Hermione and the word love when claiming that he loved her when doing what he did. Especially the incident at the Victory party, bedding Lavender the whole nigth and then go on claiming to love and pursuit Hermione. Denying his own child also shows his lack of moral, even he should have braincells enough to know that there were sure and fast ways to find out if he actually was the father in sted of denying his chlld. I absolutely don't like him and don't think he deserves Hermiones friendship and/or forgiveness. Then again, I do of course want Hermione to move on, and you can at least let Ron know what an amazing time she has making love to Severus.........:-))Update again soon.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm really golad you like my Severus version. I admit I don't paint Ron well in this story, but oh well. At least I made it plain she is moving on.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm really golad you like my Severus version. I admit I don't paint Ron well in this story, but oh well. At least I made it plain she is moving on.

10/10

braye27

I look forward to each new chapter of your story.  This Severus is a real sweetheart.  He did a good thing getting Lucius and Narcissa to donate the orphanage and naming it after Remus.Severus' offer to donate the Wolfsbane Potion to the clinic serves two purposes: it helps to provide a much needed service to the werewolf population and helps his case with Hermione.  Nothing wrong with that.Hermione is still having exotic dreams about Severus.  Since she hasn't been exposed to either of the "Love Potions lately, she should soon be realizing that her attraction to Severus and his to her is the real thing.Great chappie!Beth

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm glad you like how I wrote the guy! Yep, he is really trying to get in good with her. First the building and grounds, then the potion. And yes, she is dreaming about him. Thanks for the review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm glad you like how I wrote the guy! Yep, he is really trying to get in good with her. First the building and grounds, then the potion. And yes, she is dreaming about him. Thanks for the review.

10/10

mikimoto

I am still a little stunned by how many prompts you are trying to knit together.  I especially like the laundry list of destruction Harry gave her.  Very funny in its completeness.I am a little confused by the werewolf thing.  Is it a clinic or is it a residential facility or is it only residential when they transform?  If it is the last, why would they need books??

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm glad that all the prompts are coming together. Yep, Hermione really 'blew up' at Ron. Kinda scary when mad. The werewold thing: books = magic tutorial for the young ones. Since they aren't really allowed at Hogwarts and we can’t have untrained witch and wizard werewolves doing random emotional outbursts of magic all over England, I just assumed it would be the best solution. And Remus is going to add teaching to his duties as werewolf liaison oficer.  It's in an orphanage =  dormatories if needed, huge kitchens, and yes, caged/locked area for transformation time.Does that clear it up?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. I'm glad that all the prompts are coming together. Yep, Hermione really 'blew up' at Ron. Kinda scary when mad. The werewold thing: books = magic tutorial for the young ones. Since they aren't really allowed at Hogwarts and we can’t have untrained witch and wizard werewolves doing random emotional outbursts of magic all over England, I just assumed it would be the best solution. And Remus is going to add teaching to his duties as werewolf liaison oficer.  It's in an orphanage =  dormatories if needed, huge kitchens, and yes, caged/locked area for transformation time.Does that clear it up?

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Isode

Severus is still 'undercover' and doing such a fine job at it. I hope Hermione will appreciate is heroics. Only Severus could get Lucius to donate to a cause sporting Remus Lupin's name.  Great update, looking forward to more.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Severus is showing interest in her activities, Slytherin style. and Yes, Severus knew just which buttons to touch to bring Lucius aboard, although I'm sure Narcissa liked the idea as a way of repaying Tonks for saving Draco's life. Thanks for the review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Severus is showing interest in her activities, Slytherin style. and Yes, Severus knew just which buttons to touch to bring Lucius aboard, although I'm sure Narcissa liked the idea as a way of repaying Tonks for saving Draco's life. Thanks for the review.

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sunny33

Maybe Hermione should look at the other couples, they seem to be working out ok.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Oh, don't worry. The only couple in trouble is RW/HG. Thanks for the review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Oh, don't worry. The only couple in trouble is RW/HG. Thanks for the review.

10/10

blue artemis

Thanks for detailing some of what happened to Ron.  He deserved it, and I can't believe he was thinking he could get Hermione back.  Well, yes I can, but I'm glad she wasn't willing.  

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks, and your welcome. I really wnated to close the any hope of a RW/HG pairing out of the window. Yep, he would take her back, but she's moved on.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks, and your welcome. I really wnated to close the any hope of a RW/HG pairing out of the window. Yep, he would take her back, but she's moved on.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh I love how Severus aquired her the orphanage. Really sly. I't so sweet that Neville and Hannah turned to Hermione for Potions help. Especially since it was her potions that got them together. Poor Crooks, getting old sucks.

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Thanks. Yep, when in doubt, a Malfoy. I'm surprised he went for it.Yes, well, Neville wasn't any good at Potions. Who else would he turn to?I know, I shouldn't have made a dig at the cat, but I did. sorry.

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Thanks. Yep, when in doubt, a Malfoy. I'm surprised he went for it.Yes, well, Neville wasn't any good at Potions. Who else would he turn to?I know, I shouldn't have made a dig at the cat, but I did. sorry.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh I loved Severus in this chapter. "Live long and prosper; only please, Miss Abbott, if you procreate, try and instill your capabilities into your children." So great! Ron is so out of the picture. A fling, a baby with his old gorlfriend and a jerk.  He's cooked his goose!

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked that line, me too. Yep, Ron is sacked, dumped, over.

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked that line, me too. Yep, Ron is sacked, dumped, over.

10/10

gabi1791

Great chapter, but please get them together again soon!!!!!!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. Oh I will.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Wonder Witch Love Potion 69)

Thanks. Oh I will.

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