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Resolving a Misunderstanding

1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

3: III: Albus Reflects

4: IV: More McGonagalls

5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

6: VI: Spero et Expecto

7: VII: Chez Albus

8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

10: X: A Smooth Apparater

11: XI: The Special Project

12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

15: XV: A Success

16: XVI: Preparations

17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

19: XIX: Waiting

20: XX: Hiding

21: XXI: Seeking

22: XXII: Finding

23: XXIII: Escaping

24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

25: XXV: Meeting

26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

32: XXXII: The Attacks

33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

35: XXXV: Hagrid

36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

38: XXXVIII: Requests

39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

40: XL: Horrid Relatives

41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

46: XLVI: More Relatives

47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

50: L: Curious Conversation

51: LI: The Lovely Couple

52: LII: Shall We Dance?

53: LIII: The End of the Party

54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

60: LX: The Magic of Memory

61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

66: LXVI: Many Meetings

67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

69: LXIX: None But the Two

70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

72: LXXII: Not a Date

73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

74: LXXIV: Ever Green

75: LXXV: Collision

76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

77: LXXVII: Impulse

78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

83: LXXXIII: Family Time

84: LXXXIV: Mates

85: LXXXV: Plans

86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

90: XC: A Confidant

91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

95: XCV: Home Again

96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

98: XCVIII: Warding

99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

100: C: Touring Hogwarts

101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

104: CIV: Gifts

105: CV: A Werewolf's End

106: CVI: Reverberations

107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

108: CVIII: In Memoriam

109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

110: CX: Seduction

111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

125: CXXV: Rematch

126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

131: CXXXI: Realising Love

132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

135: CXXXV: A Spree

136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

140: CXL: Sorted

141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!

Resolving a Misunderstanding

MMADfan

954 Reviews   |   954 Ratings, 0 Likes, 108 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 887,445 Words 157 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Armando Dippet Rubeus Hagrid Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Rufus Scrimgeour Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Moaning Myrtle Aragog Bellatrix Lestrange Druella (Rosier) Black Bartimus Crouch Filius Flitwick Horace Slughorn Professor Binns Mr. Ollivander Gellert Grindelwald Nicolas Flamel Cornelius Fudge Professor Kettleburn

Minerva has just finished her first term teaching. A series of misunderstandings leads to an embarrassing moment, injured feelings, regret, growing understanding, then resolution. A Minerva McGonagall fic set in 1957, with forays into the past. More than a Romance; stories within stories. Features Minerva, Albus, and Poppy, with appearances by Slughorn, Grubbly-Plank, Hagrid, Flitwick, Moody, Riddle, Grindelwald, and other canon characters. Not DH-compliant. Disregards DH.
Nineteen Parts.
Most content T-rated, but ratings rise to M and MA for several later chapters. Overall M rating reflects later content.
Pertinent warnings in individual chapter summaries.

Voted First Place, Minerva McGonagall: Legacy Fic, in the HP Fanfiction Fan Poll Awards Spring/Summer 2013.

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Chapters (141)

Chapter 1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

Chapter 2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

Chapter 3: III: Albus Reflects

Chapter 4: IV: More McGonagalls

Chapter 5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

Chapter 6: VI: Spero et Expecto

Chapter 7: VII: Chez Albus

Chapter 8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

Chapter 9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

Chapter 10: X: A Smooth Apparater

Chapter 11: XI: The Special Project

Chapter 12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

Chapter 13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

Chapter 14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

Chapter 15: XV: A Success

Chapter 16: XVI: Preparations

Chapter 17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

Chapter 18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

Chapter 19: XIX: Waiting

Chapter 20: XX: Hiding

Chapter 21: XXI: Seeking

Chapter 22: XXII: Finding

Chapter 23: XXIII: Escaping

Chapter 24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

Chapter 25: XXV: Meeting

Chapter 26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

Chapter 27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

Chapter 28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

Chapter 29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

Chapter 30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

Chapter 31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

Chapter 32: XXXII: The Attacks

Chapter 33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

Chapter 34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

Chapter 35: XXXV: Hagrid

Chapter 36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

Chapter 37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

Chapter 38: XXXVIII: Requests

Chapter 39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

Chapter 40: XL: Horrid Relatives

Chapter 41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

Chapter 42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

Chapter 43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

Chapter 44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

Chapter 45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

Chapter 46: XLVI: More Relatives

Chapter 47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

Chapter 48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

Chapter 49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

Chapter 50: L: Curious Conversation

Chapter 51: LI: The Lovely Couple

Chapter 52: LII: Shall We Dance?

Chapter 53: LIII: The End of the Party

Chapter 54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

Chapter 55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

Chapter 57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

Chapter 58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

Chapter 59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

Chapter 60: LX: The Magic of Memory

Chapter 61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

Chapter 62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

Chapter 63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

Chapter 64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

Chapter 65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

Chapter 66: LXVI: Many Meetings

Chapter 67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

Chapter 68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

Chapter 69: LXIX: None But the Two

Chapter 70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

Chapter 71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

Chapter 72: LXXII: Not a Date

Chapter 73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

Chapter 74: LXXIV: Ever Green

Chapter 75: LXXV: Collision

Chapter 76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

Chapter 77: LXXVII: Impulse

Chapter 78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

Chapter 79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

Chapter 80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

Chapter 81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

Chapter 82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

Chapter 83: LXXXIII: Family Time

Chapter 84: LXXXIV: Mates

Chapter 85: LXXXV: Plans

Chapter 86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

Chapter 87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

Chapter 88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

Chapter 89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

Chapter 90: XC: A Confidant

Chapter 91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

Chapter 92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

Chapter 93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

Chapter 94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

Chapter 95: XCV: Home Again

Chapter 96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

Chapter 97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

Chapter 98: XCVIII: Warding

Chapter 99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

Chapter 100: C: Touring Hogwarts

Chapter 101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

Chapter 102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

Chapter 103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

Chapter 104: CIV: Gifts

Chapter 105: CV: A Werewolf's End

Chapter 106: CVI: Reverberations

Chapter 107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

Chapter 108: CVIII: In Memoriam

Chapter 109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

Chapter 110: CX: Seduction

Chapter 111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

Chapter 112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

Chapter 113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

Chapter 114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

Chapter 115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

Chapter 116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

Chapter 117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

Chapter 118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

Chapter 119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

Chapter 120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

Chapter 121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

Chapter 122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

Chapter 123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

Chapter 124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

Chapter 125: CXXV: Rematch

Chapter 126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

Chapter 127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

Chapter 128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

Chapter 129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

Chapter 130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

Chapter 131: CXXXI: Realising Love

Chapter 132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

Chapter 133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

Chapter 134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

Chapter 135: CXXXV: A Spree

Chapter 136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

Chapter 137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

Chapter 138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

Chapter 140: CXL: Sorted

Chapter 141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!


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10/10

Mars_M

 'Albus lay in the cavity beneath the rock, hoping that he hadn't dug himself his own grave'...what a horrible situation: to find yourself a place of protection that can easily turn out to be a trap, but obviously he didn't have much choice. Minerva is, once again, wonderful here, trying to reassure, clean and heal Albus, while at the same time planning ahead. Multi-tasking before the word was even invented I love to see how they are comfortable with each other, whilst trying to minimize the embarrassment of the situation they have to cope with. Very interesting and revealing (no pun!) how you've described the scene of the urinating: such situations will occur in certain disastrous circumstances and it is better to simply deal with it than make a drama out of it or try to endure it just to avoid the embarrassment. Good that Albus was a bit more warm and comfortable in the end, so that he could doze of a little.I really love this chapter for the warmth and deep and easy friendship which I could feel between Albus and Minerva and of course also for the  angst combined with hope. 

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, Minerva was efficient and on top of everything! And Albus could lie back now and relax a bit, knowing he was in Minerva's hands.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the review!

10/10

mars m

Oh my...what about trusting someones own judgment! This Auror Sprangle treats Minerva as if she were a child, in full need of guidance and protection. Utterly insulting and impractical! And even possibly dangerous. The discussion they have before leaving, sounds very believable and natural to me, I think you've caught the right tone. In other words: very well written! Indeed, that couldn't have gone much worse...poor Frankel! I hope he'll live and escape, somehow, from German captivity (though his chances look slim) Very bad that Minerva has no Portkey now, I wonder how she'll manage to get her self and Albus and Carson out, if she'll be able to locate them. Engaging chapter!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks! There are those officious types who are like that -- I'm sure you've encountered them at times!Minerva's nothing if not brave and resourceful, so "stay tuned" to see how she copes!Thank you for the review!

0/10

Fishy

That was most peculiur - but, i was actually wondering if something like that was going to come up - hehehehehe... interesting.Well - i've read through all of RaM and loved it - just loved it, and now i will move foward wtih Act of love i think - thank you again, write to me! keep in touch! HAd a blast talking to you through this whole read - and enjoying the sexiest wizard in the world!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, it was a very peculiar, um, potion. It has been fun! And fun seeing RaM again, seemingly fresh and new for me.Enjoy An Act of Love!

0/10

Fishy

That was a fun chapter! I especially liked the new special door and floo connected for the two of them! WOO HOO! I also enjoyed seeing all the students return - though, I know that's a bit silly of me, but it always seems like a fun time, the begining of the year!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

It's a time filled with bustle and the promise of new beginnings and new experiences, plus seeing old friends again after a long summer, or meeting new ones. Quite a fun time for most people, I think!Thanks! Glad you liked it!

0/10

Fishy

“No, well, not really. I couldn’t sleep. I thought . . . you said once that if I couldn’t sleep . . .”*snip*I think they should sleep together when ever they can... silly wizard!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, that's definitely the way to go! :-)

0/10

Fishy

Holy cow, what a chapter! First the Silent Knight and his unusual tale, which was sad and kind of creepy and then weird and then neat - and then, the wards, I really enjoy the way you describe magic - and then the ceremony to Minerva for being added to the wards - that was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooo yummy - that's all I'm saying about that - and I am guessing the package Albus gave Minerva was a music box, though it was never stated - that was neat and finally, they get to snooze together... YAY! Snuggle bunnies!Favorite part was the Hogwarts Heart and the ribbons of magic, neato!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I'm glad you liked the Silent Knight's tale. It was actually one of the first things I wrote when I was writing RaM, and I knew it wouldn't come into play until late in the story, only after Minerva and Albus got together to break the curse and allow him to fulfil his geas. So it was fun to get it in there. I am glad you enjoyed the Hogwarts Heart and all the magic there, and Minerva's introduction to the wards. Hogwarts Heart was another early concept, and it's one that crops up in a few other of my stories, too, so you may encounter it again if you read more of these fics.Oh, yes, snuggle bunnies! So nice after a long wait. And yes, it was a music box. :-)Thanks very much!

0/10

Fishy

Looking down into his eyes, Minerva smiled softly and said, “You know, there have been a few things you have done that I have especially enjoyed, Professor Dumbledore – one thing in particular for which you seem to have an impressive talent, in fact, and then there was something else you did last night that, well, I have never felt anything quite like it before.”*snip*Starting with this paragraph and extending down - I just have to say that might be one of the most erotic scenes I've ever read/seen/heard of anywhere - the foreplay talk, the teasing, the formality, and the complete honesty - as well as the erotic talk, is sooooo entoxicating and I can so easily see these two characters trading these words back and forth with breathless passion - I know I've left about 100 reviews and likely you are tired of reading them all, but I keep coming back to this part of the story and rereading it - it is just that enjoyable - had to mention it specifically - very well written!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

*snip*“I see . . .” Albus thought for a moment, then said, returning to the present, “I suppose I should get dressed. Let me know if you do want assistance selecting your robes, though, my dear.” He looked around. “I do wish I had a dressing gown, though. As comfortable as I was a little while ago, I do not feel comfortable wandering about your suite in my altogether.”*snip*Oh I found that so adorable... and I loved the towel that Minerva transfigured for him - sooooo soooo sweet. Yummy Albus.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you very much! I always feel that dialogue can be quite erotic, so I'm glad that you enjoyed this verbal foreplay between Albus and Minerva. Albus can be quite adorable, agreed, so I'm glad you found him so in this little scene!Thanks for all your reviews! It's been fabulous revisiting RaM through them!

0/10

Fishy

Describing fantasies... undressing for your lover... out in the open... Thunderstorms! GOOD GOD WOMAN! I think I was completely lost once Albus took charge after Minerva described her fantasy to him... yes... I'm still blind and can't find the light switch.... *blinks*

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Oh but Doppleganger Albus returned at the WORST time and I wanted to flog him, repeatedly - Minerva has the patience of a Saint... prepare for me to die Minerva and go on and forget me.... I mean really - how romantic is that? *snorts*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, Albus's timing is fabulous in some regards, but in others . . . *sigh*Minerva's got a lot of practice being patient! LOL!I'm very glad you enjoyed that romantic lemony interlude on the mountain!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Oh yes.... you've got the whole psychological thrill of being completely open to your lover - with words that is, down to an art - them describing what they find arousing, role playing or even just job playing - that is so freaking erotic - talking to eachother as if they were mearly co-workerrs - colleuges (sp?) when the situation is far, far removed from that - to competely divulging private fantasies - SO erotic... especially when they CAN and WILL do something about them - omgtfa! (oh my God that's freaking awesome) yes I made that up!Mind play, mind foreplay, is just incredible! 

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you! (And I like "omgtfa"!)

0/10

Fishy

A Most delicious and adventurous and exciting chapter.... so glad these two are movinng foward, wish Albus didn't have a hang up about felatio - but ahh well - Minerva will have to help him with that - and I love how they role play mock seriousness, so yummy!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Oh, don't worry, he really doesn't have a hang-up -- he was simply concerned that Minerva didn't really want to do it, or was doing it only to "return the favor," so it will be sorted out very quickly.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Good... I can't imagine him denying her the pleasure... well I can due to his hang ups, but I'd have to hammer him for it anyway, or flog.... yeah, flogging is better. *nods*

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

I had to read it again, and its still terribly delicious.... *dies*

0/10

Fishy

*snip*“I will be very glad to get out of these Muggle clothes,” Minerva remarked, “and into something more comfortable.”Albus grinned at her. “Would you require any assistance in that area, Professor McGonagall?”She returned his smile and said, “I just might, at that, Professor Dumbledore.”“Well, then, shall I accompany you to your rooms and lend you a hand?” Albus asked.“Indeed, that would be most appreciated,” Minerva replied. “And you might also assist me in selecting something appropriate for this afternoon’s outing, if you would be so kind.”“I shall endeavour to be of some help in whatever you may need, my dear Professor,” Albus said with a twinkle. “Let’s take the Floo from my office, then, Professor Dumbledore, so that we may embark upon this activity as soon as possible,” Minerva said, barely restraining a mirthful grin.“A very sound suggestion, Professor McGonagall,” Albus said, not restraining his own grin and giving her a wink, as well.The two hastened up the stairs to the large oak doors, eager to reach Minerva’s office and her Floo and even more eager to attain the privacy of her suite.*snip*That was especially fun!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Glad you liked it!

0/10

Fishy

*snip*“How is he supposed to be related?” Minerva asked, feeling slightly unsettled. “It is rather peculiar.”“Oh, a lot of people call relatives ‘uncle’ or ‘cousin’ when it would be too hard to call them by whatever they really are – can you imagine introducing someone by saying, ‘this is my second cousin, once-removed, on my mother’s side’?” Melina giggled giddily. “You can just be a vague sort of relative like that. Maybe by marriage or something. Anyway, I doubt anyone will ask. If they do, just say something about the family tree being complicated, or something.”*snicker*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, I do wonder why Aunt Minerva might feel slightly odd there! haha! (Related by marriage? lol!)

0/10

Fishy

“I would bring you to your rooms, my dear, but I would rather that I were the only one to enjoy this particular vision of you,” Albus murmured into her ear. “Mmm,” was the only response that Minerva could manage as the motion as Albus walked up the stairs was stimulating her again, and despite having felt as though she had reached the peak of arousal and surpassed it, and that she was now past being aroused, her body was responding to the sensation of Albus still inside her and her breasts gently rubbing against his beard.*snip*Oh dear lord..... *falls over breathless* I think I have seen Heaven... in that glorious beard.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I think that Minerva is very glad that Albus didn't really shave it all off!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Lets not discuss such horrid acts of depravity and blasphemy - please, please, don't utter that dreadful word again *begs* - and the rest of this chapter - well I haven't gotten to the wedding yet - but the rest of the chapter of Minerva and Albus in his room is just so utterly wonderful and .... pure joy... *groans* I can't even find words to express how truly magical it is. I especially love how open and honest they are able to be with each other, after they are temporarily, sated. *grins* Emphasis on temporary!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I do think I will have to read this chapter again, myself. :-)

0/10

Fishy

“Don’t you . . . don’t you want me, Albus?” she asked softly, drawing her hands down, parting his outer robe, then lightly caressing his chest. “Is there something I can do . . . so that you want me? Something that would make me more desirable?”*snip*And everything below that....... OMFGGGG........ *falls backwards on couch in bliss* Did I mention that Albus is the sexiest living thing on this earth?

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Mmmmm, I'm not sure you have, but I'll make a note of it!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Cheeky thing you! He freaking IS! Damn.... that was.... well I hate to say it... I really hate to say it... I hate admitting when I'm wrong BUT... here I am, I'm going to bloody say it.... That was WORTH the feckin' wait! DAMN!There, I said it.... *sighs deeply* much as I hate to admit it... but you were right!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Always trust MMADfan. At least when it comes to ADMM!Very glad, though, that you enjoyed it!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

I trust NO ONE! Constant VIGILANCE! That's my motto - but I'm glad I had faith in this... even if I was a complete and utter bull headed goof to you - so I apologize for all that hair pulling and complaining I did before now.I am SO very glad Albus finally gave Minerva what she so very well deserved... and glad they are finally OVER their fears/hesitations/hang ups, at least, more so anyway.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Oh, that's okay! All in the past! I assure you that they will have a lot of fun getting past whatever other hesitations they may have about making love! Lots of fun. And when Albus loosens up, he does know how to have fun!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

*snip*“I will admit it was surpassingly difficult, my love,” Albus whispered, “but if you are asking what I believe you are . . . I am holding that in reserve, with the assistance of a bit of a charm, until we can make it back to my bedroom, where I can continue to make love to you and finish demonstrating to you how very, very much I love you, desire you, need you, adore you.”Good lord..... *swoons*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I hope your couch was handy to catch you!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Thankfully, my couch is quite sturdy... and extreamly comfortable *nods* yes... adaquatly supported, there will be no irritating concussions or unfortunate accidents.... thankfully... but that chapter certainly could have done me in! *winks*

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

After finishing DD last night, I had to read this chapter again... since I didn't get to enjoy Minerva and Albus celebrating the end of the wizarding war with Riddle.... and I just have to say... AGAIN.... OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG*wipes tears*intense....... intense.... oooh

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I am sure that once Albus wasn't afraid for Minerva's health, he made love to her very intensely and wonderfully! I had wondered why I had a review from you for this chapter! LOL! Now I know!

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Fishy

Minerva raised her face to him and said, “Kiss me, Albus, please. It’s been hours since our last proper kiss.”Albus grinned at her. “Hours? Has it been hours? And you would like a proper kiss? Let me see if I can manage a proper kiss.”Albus raised one hand to cradle the back of her head, then he very slowly approached her, his lips coming a breath away from hers. “Minerva,” he said in a low voice, his lips just brushing hers as he said her name. “Minerva.”His lips brushed hers again, just for a moment, then he softly kissed her. He repeated his soft kiss, this time taking her lower lip between his and simply holding it between them before he kissed her full on the mouth again. Then Albus gently sucked her lower lip before stroking it with a feathery touch of his tongue. Minerva moaned, and Albus moved his lips over hers, softly and sensuously, then he deepened the kiss, pulling her toward him, and Minerva’s embrace tightened. Finally, he ended the kiss much as he had begun it, with soft brushes of lip on lip.Albus looked down at her and said in a warm voice, “Was that a proper kiss, my dear?”Minerva opened her eyes. “Mmm.” She could barely think, but she said, “If a proper kiss makes you melt, that was a proper kiss.” Minerva let out a breath and lay her head against him. “I love you, Albus.”*snip**chuckles and clears throat* That was sublime. *winks*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Very glad you enjoyed that.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Just a bit.... mmmmOf course that's just one example of my extream underestimitation if that's even a real word *chuckles*

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Ahhh, and she asks him to read his poem... I can so relate to that, I have asked others to read to me, nothing this intense nor anything so personal, but listening to someone read to you - especially when that someone causes such passion, well, its pretty heady. *nods* I approve!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I like that, too. :-)

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Fishy

Minerva sighed and nodded. She opened her mouth to reply when there was a large flash, startling both witches.“Fawkes!” Minerva cried, astounded by the bird’s sudden fiery appearance.The phoenix landed on the bed beside Minerva and held out his leg, offering her a large rolled parchment. As soon as Minerva took it, Fawkes trilled happily, then disappeared in the same manner in which he had appeared.“A phoenix!” Egeria said, having regained the power of speech.*snip*Did I mention how awesome Egeria's reaction was? I didn't think I had, so I wanted to make up for that - AWESOME! I am seeing her sitting there, eyes huge, not sure what the hell happened.... and opening and closing her mouth.... such a perfect image just from one sentence - the last - by Egeria.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks! It would certainly be a bit startling to have a phoenix suddenly appear in your home!

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Fishy

*snip*Albus’s smile grew. “Oh, very decadent, indeed, and so early in the day, too! But I will be happy to oblige you, my dear!”I think now that I've read Obliging Minerva I'm going to have a very hard time seeing that word used in a sentence, especially between these two, and not thinking about that particularly tantilizing one-shot..... yumms

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

*snip*“No . . . not really,” Albus said hesitantly. “But I don’t want you to let go. I was thinking that as I was changing my robes earlier. I want to be able to get used to having you in my life. Not to take you for granted, but to know that you will be there,” he said softly. “But I won’t ever hold too tightly to you; if you ever wish to go, you may. So I ask that you hold me tightly. It doesn’t make very much sense, does it?”*snip*Silly Albus... silly wizard, as Wilspy would day.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

*snip*Albus kissed her forehead, then he closed his eyes and rested his head on hers. “If your parents . . . if they are unhappy, will you still . . .”“They won’t be unhappy. But if, by some bizarre chance, they are, I will hold on even more tightly. I won’t allow anyone to take you away now, or to come between us,” Minerva said. “Not unless you change your mind on your own, and I can assure you that, unlike you, I most certainly would not quietly allow you to go. I know we belong together. I love you, Albus. I love you more than I can possibly express.”*snip*That is just such a beautiful way to say "I'm insecure and scared, but will you accept me anyway, no matter who says what?" I love these two... really do.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, Albus does enjoy obliging Minerva! I'm very glad that you love those two together -- what a disappointment it would be if after all the trouble they had to get together, you didn't like 'em! Eeep!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Yes.... that would be dreadful... likely though I'd just stop reading - so obviously I do love them! *winks*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I think I'd probably have to duck 'n' cover if that happened! Fortunately, I think I'm in the clear now! (I'll cross my fingers on that one, though! lol!)

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

*chuckles* oh come on... I'm not THAT bad.... am I? *ponders*Actually... I think you're right... I am that bad. *winks*

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Fishy

“Now, do you remember the rules for the day, dearest?” Egeria asked, turning back to Merwyn.“Yes, um, mention his advanced years at every opportunity, accuse him of stealing my baby away – ouch!” Merwyn cried in mock distress when Egeria tapped his arm with her open hand. *snip*LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Glad you like Merwyn's sense of humor!

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Fishy

“Refill?” Malcolm Summoned two more bottles of cider and uncapped them with a flick of his finger. As he refilled their glasses, he said, “She loves you fiercely, Dumbledore. Practically took my head off, she did – almost literally – when I dared to say something a bit uncomplimentary of you.” He took a long drink of his cider, then set the glass down and looked at Albus quite seriously. “It turned out to be a test of her, as much as of the openness of your relationship and of what she knew of you. She really does love you. Don’t do anything to betray it or to hurt her – I don’t believe you would do so deliberately, nor do I believe you are likely to do so. But if you do, I am just giving you warning that she would not suffer it easily. She is a McGonagall and a Tyree. You are more powerful, but . . . her temper might overcome your caution. That’s all I’m saying.” He touched his cheek briefly. “And if her temper didn’t, mine certainly would. And I don’t cool off as quick as she does. But that isn’t really what I wanted to talk to you about today. Let me be blunt. Very blunt. You may decide you don’t want to offer me the job, I’m so blunt. She says you’ve been a perfect gentleman to her.”Albus, somewhat at a loss at the sudden turn the conversation had taken and unsure of where Malcolm was heading with it, shrugged slightly. “I have certainly endeavoured to be.”“Don’t ‘endeavour’ so hard is my advice, for what it’s worth. As I said, Minerva is a McGonagall and a Tyree. She is fiery. Buttoned up much of the time, but still, it’s there. She didn’t go into detail – she was very circumspect, in fact – but you have been too much of a gentleman. That much she did say. Minerva likes romance as much as any witch, I am certain. And she assuredly deserves romance and to be treated well and with respect . . . but . . . well, not to put too fine a point on it, don’t treat her like a delicate flower all of the time. I don’t know what you’ve been up to over the last several . . . decades, but if you are nervous about the, um, the warmer aspects of romance, just” – Malcolm took a deep breath – “just get over it. You defeated Grindelwald after more than two days of torture – I knew Katherine Fellows rather well at one time, so I know about that – and if you could do that, you can get over your nervousness. Make her happy, Dumbledore. You can make her happy. Romance is more than flowers and pretty speeches. Don’t try so hard to be a gentleman with her. Just be yourself. That will be enough. She loves you.” Malcolm drank off the rest of his cider then looked at the clock on the wall. “I said I’d have you back by two. It’s getting on toward one-thirty. So, am I fired?” Malcolm asked, turning back toward Albus, not looking in the least bit worried.*snip*Malcolm - how in the hell does he know all this? Well - however he does, and what ever gall he has to stick his head in where it doesn't belong - which of course, is just my personal opinion - I just love Dumbledore's reaction....Albus laughs.... *grins* I love that bearded wizard.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Malcolm was quiet for a moment, then he said, “All right, I suppose I was blunt with you. But you needn’t worry. She and I have already had this talk, and to be honest, I am afraid that she will discover that she fell in love too fast and with a wizard who isn’t all she had thought he was. I fear disappointing her.” He looked at Albus steadily. “You’re the other wizard, aren’t you? The other love of her life. I thought for a while . . . I didn’t think it could be you.”Albus shook his head. “No, no, I wasn’t. I don’t know whom she was speaking of. I only knew of Reginald. If there was anyone else . . . it wasn’t me.” Albus looked uncomfortable. “I don’t discuss such things, but, as I say, we have been friends for a very long time. Our friendship . . . our friendship expressed itself in different ways at different times. But she was never in love with me. You are a lucky man – I am sure that there have been wizards over the years who had their hearts broken by her and her desire to remain only friends.”*snip*Holy...... is Malcolm a complete MORON? He may deny being a barbarian - but the boy IS! And thank GOD Albus had the decency to .... evade the whole truth - I don't much go for liars but this simply does not need to be out in the open... some things are much better left unsaid - and that's about all I'm going to say on that! *snorts and considers flogging Malcolm with wet lashings*

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

“All right, I’ll try to remember. Um, about yesterday. I’m sorry if I was rude. But I was uncomfortable with that. Being called ‘my boy.’ And it did strike me as odd, given that I am seventeen years older than Minerva and, well, never mind that – I do say the most inept things sometimes. And sometimes, in trying to make something better, I make it worse,” he said with a sheepish grin, “like now.”*snip*I'll say! That's the biggest understatement in the entire fic! Sheesh.... I'm nicknaming Malcolm "The Goat"

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Aw, poor Malcolm! LOL! He's really quite a good guy.(And in the second bit, it's Albus who's being clueless -- he really doesn't believe that he was the other wizard in Gertrude's life.)

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

BTW, you asked how Malcolm knew all that, and it was because Minerva told him -- after she'd gotten over her burst of anger with him and he was certain that she knew & didn't care about Albus's past. So now he wants his sister happy with Albus, and he figures that if he's being too much of a gentleman (as Minerva said), that Albus needs to move a little faster.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

*snorts* Maybe I'm just too much of a bulldog myself to appreciate Malcolm's candor - just seems far too interpersonal to discuss with someone you barely know, let alone they may be your future boss - but I'll just keep my nose where it is... best I do that anyway. *winks*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Perhaps you are recognizing traits of someone very, very close to you? But he is a pretty blunt Gryffy, though he also does know when to hold his tongue. Usually. When it really counts. (Remember the "little bird" told him that Minerva might know something about wards? -- that was from one of the tea party chapters. He's had a bit of knowledge about that for over a decade, and even when he does mention it to Minerva, he doesn't say anything more.)

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Aye, you're likely right, I've always been too bull headed for my own good. *nods* ONWARD! I'll try to forgive Malcolm for being far too much like myself! HAW! *shakes head* how's that for calling the kettle black.... yeah I'm good at that.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Ain't we all!

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Fishy

“Aye, more powerful, but you have the same feel. Whatever you send me will be similarly tuned – gives me a bit of an advantage, really, over a confrontation with a stranger,” Malcolm said.“We have the same feel?”“Yes, your magic. Very similar. His is richer, more powerful, but very similar. Noticed it when I met him, in fact. Couldn’t put my finger on it at first, but every time he cast a spell, there was something familiar about it. Then it hit me, his magic reminded me of my little sister.” Malcolm walked out to the middle of the pitch. “Come on, now, we haven’t all day!”*snip*Well that's interesting.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, indeed! Rather interesting in a few ways.

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Fishy

Albus seemed amused. “You told me that Malcolm is the one McGonagall who tends to hold a grudge. I would rather diffuse any troubles that may remain. I had sufficient misunderstandings with another McGonagall this summer; I don’t need to have any new ones with Malcolm.”*snip**chuckles* I love how sublimely he puts things, sometimes...

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

haha! Thanks very much!But he does learn his lessons well! *ginr*

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Fishy

“What, that you and the Headmaster of Hogwarts are shtupping?” Minerva had never heard the term before, but she knew immediately what he was saying, and it angered her, but before she got another word out of her mouth, Malcolm continued. “Is that why you were so eager to take this job, then? To make it easier for the two of you? And how long has this been going on? Years? Does anyone know of it? Or is it just your little secret? Gertrude wouldn’t tell me a thing – just kept saying, ‘speak with your sister’! Wouldn’t even give a hint of what she might know or guess!”*snip*For a wayward brother who seems to have very little to do with his sister, let alone the rest of his family, just WHERE in the bloody hell does he get the gall to impune such questions upon Minerva?!? He's fortunate he's not asking ME that.... I'd do far more than she did. *grumps**snip*“It’s just that . . . I’m a bit older than you are, remember, and I’ve heard things about Dumbledore, during the war, you see. A few rumours, you might say. But rumours with foundation. You don’t hear them any more – defeating Grindelwald does tend to make people think twice about saying anything uncomplimentary about a person.” Malcolm held up a hand, forestalling Minerva’s protest. “Please, let me finish. There were scarcely any rumours even at the time I heard them, myself, and I didn’t particularly care about them. It had just been a little talk and some chuckling among a few of the old timers. I ignored the rumours. It didn’t matter to me at all whether they were true or not. Not at that time. Now, though – after seeing the two of you together last night, I began to remember some of them. Where there’s smoke there’s fire, little sister. This wizard apparently screwed his way across half of Europe, pretty indiscriminately, too. Young, old, married, unmarried, he kept the witches entertained. He was a good-looking young man, and he traded on his looks for his keep –”*snip*Okay - right there, if I were Minerva, he'd be reeling in unquestionable pain, likely from more than one particularly sensative area... tha GIT! *snorts*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yeah, he didn't exactly put his concerns in the most diplomatic way possible, did he? And Minerva did have him feeling a bit of pain quite quickly -- and completely shocked him!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Yeah well, Minerva is too kind... I'd have done much worse!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

He's her brother. I'm sure if it were some stranger or mere acquaintance, or even a friend, they would't have gotten that far! lol! Although, of course, she'd likely have stopped their tongues before they could say enough to incite her enough to cause quite the damage she did.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

That would be a very handy spell - tongue tie that is... I can think of a zillion uses for that... esepcially with my teenage daughter.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

LOL! Yes, I can imagine that well!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Gertie is still my hero for stopping that baboon Dustern from that slough of trash that came spewing out of her mouth at Minerva... perhaps Gertie can teach Malcolm a few things... *shakes head* sorry but Malcolm is on my #&@! list now.... the nerve.... *snorts*

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Fishy

Albus chuckled. “That was a nice piece of wandless magic, Minerva.”Minerva grinned. “I was highly motivated.”“I shall have to find other opportunities to motivate you, then!” Albus said, his eyes bright.*snip**just grins*

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

And I was wondering WHEN Albus was going to refer to that first chapter "misunderstanding" - apparently it is finally - RESOLVED! And after 127 chapters, I bloody hope so!*nods*Way to go MMADfan - good on ya.... made us suffer long enough, thank you for finally giving us all a reprieve!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

And some people when I was writing this were afraid I was going to end the story right after they finally confessed their love to each other -- but where's the satisfaction in that? lol! Well, there's some, but then there's even more! I'm glad you liked that!

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Fishy

She did hope that Albus felt some sexual passion – Minerva remembered her speculations earlier in the summer about his love life and any urges he might have, and she began to worry that even though Albus was still capable of sexual activity, and even though he clearly did become physically aroused with her, perhaps his passions had died away to a bare simmer. He had, after all, led what he had described as a “retired life.” Minerva assumed that he had spent a long period of his adult life, perhaps most of it, in abstinence. It could be that either the abstinence came easily to him because he was not particularly sexual – she did know some people like that, after all – or possibly the abstinence itself had extinguished any passion he had once had. It could be that there was some . . . not truth, but some cause for Valerianna’s nasty words – if Albus had found it easy to be a gentleman with Valerianna and not press his advantage with her, and she was used to rutting with every wizard who caught her fancy, it could be that she sensed his lack of desire. Although if that witch had sensed a lack of desire, it had been a lack of desire for her, not necessarily a lack of desire in general. Nonetheless, Albus had been very restrained. Minerva did hope that it was merely out of a desire to be a gentleman, and perhaps because of a little lingering insecurity or nervousness, and not from a lack of sexual desire for her. She did want him to want her and to . . . well, to find sex with her more than just a pleasant pastime on the same order as a game of chess.*snip* While I can sympathize with Minerva here, I think she's completely off base... I don't think she has anything to worry about, once she gets him over his hang up, and shows him that being open with his emotions and desire is a good thing, he'll be far more responsive, and hopefully.... *crosses fingers* more initiative with her. I'd hate to think she has to initiate everything - or even MOST - lets hope Albus isn't that daft.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

No, Albus isn't that daft, I'm sure! But poor Minerva -- fortunately, she doesn't need to worry about Albus finding sex no more enjoyable than a game of chess! haha!Thank for the review!

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Fishy

“You seemed to require some of the Headmaster’s time and . . . personal attention, Professor McGonagall. I thought perhaps rather than wait, we would come . . . straight . . . here,” Albus said in a low voice that sent shivers of pleasure through Minerva, and he raised one hand and touched her arm very lightly, a mere grazing touch, but it caused her to take in her breath sharply.Minerva swallowed and looked up into his eyes. They seemed a deeper blue than ever, and his pupils were dilated as he gazed down at her. She licked her lips, then said, “I did require your personal attention, as you say, but I could have waited.”“Could you, indeed?” Albus said, quirking a slight smile. “Well, then, would you care to show me your classroom, Professor? Or would you prefer to begin with your office?” He made no move away from her, however, and continued to gently caress her arm with his fingertips.“I think that it is more in the way of personal attention that I am needing from the Headmaster,” Minerva said. “Really?” he asked with a playful twinkle in his eyes. “Something in the way of this sort of attention, then?”Coming no closer to her, nor ceasing his tantalising caresses, only moving them to the side of her breast, he bent his head and kissed her lips softly, lingeringly, then he whispered, his words a breath against her lips, “This sort of attention, Professor McGonagall?”“Yes,” Minerva breathed, “that sort is a start.”“A start?” Albus asked before gently pulling her lips between his own. He licked his lips and hers, too, then asked in a low voice, “And would this be the proper way to proceed from there?”Albus brought his fingertips around to circle her nipple, hidden though it was beneath her robes, as he continued his gentle, seductive kisses of her lips. He moved her over-robe aside as he caressed her breast, eliciting an intake of breath from Minerva. Albus chuckled in pleasure and delight at her reaction as he resumed his tantalising touches to her nipple, covered in cotton and silk though it was. Minerva raised her hands to rest them on his upper arms, not wanting to obstruct Albus’s movements, and when Albus brought his other hand up to caress her other breast in the same way, she moaned. Albus made an answering, low sound in his throat, and deepened his kiss, parting his lips further, bringing hers with them, and beginning a slow, languid caress of her mouth with his tongue, as though learning and treasuring its every contour.Albus slipped his arms around Minerva and held her close to him, allowing her to feel his arousal. Without thinking, Minerva put her arms around his neck, then she pressed herself against him, arching her back slightly to increase her contact with his erection. This time it was Albus who moaned, and when Minerva rolled her hips slightly, he broke from their kiss in a gasp and buried his face in her hair, his lips coming to rest near her ear, where they reflexively kissed the gentle curve of her ear. He let out a shuddering breath, and Minerva pressed against him harder and brought one hand down to caress his shoulder and back.He took a steadying breath, then he kissed her forehead, then her nose, then her lips, before drawing back to look down at her with a smile. “Was that the sort of personal attention you were requiring, Professor McGonagall?” he asked teasingly.“Precisely, Professor Dumbledore,” Minerva responded, and the sound of her pleasant burr brought a wider smile to his face, and he kissed her forehead again lightly.*snip*That about undid me.... *groans* talk about dead sexy... Minerva has far more restraint than I certainly posess... and Albus was being terribly wicked, knowing just how badly he was teasing her... and he certainly did!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

I have not yet disconnected this Floo from mine, though I meant to do so when I connected it up to your sitting room. Would you care to Floo through to my office?” he asked.“Yes, I would – and you needn’t disconnect it. Unless you feel you must, of course,” Minerva added hurriedly.“I feel no imperative to do so,” he replied with a twinkle as they walked to her office, “if you would not view it as an invasion of your privacy.”“Not at all, Headmaster,” Minerva replied with a shy grin. “In fact, I would be pleased if you would see fit to invade my privacy on occasion.”*snip*And that! We've gone from timid and hesitant Albus to an almost obnoxious tease, knowing just how intense Minerva's desire for him is... its almost Cruel! *shivers* But so freaking sexy at the same time.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

A nice building of sexual tension and desire there, huh? Gee . . . I wonder where such teasing and tension could lead? I do think that Minerva did a bit of tantalizing there, as well -- but quite fairly, I'd say! Minerva put her arms around his neck, then she pressed herself against him, arching her back slightly to increase her contact with his erection. This time it was Albus who moaned, and when Minerva rolled her hips slightly, he broke from their kiss in a gasp and buried his face in her hair, his lips coming to rest near her ear, where they reflexively kissed the gentle curve of her ear. He let out a shuddering breath, and Minerva pressed against him harderYep, a little bit of payback -- there just may be an explosion coming soon! Glad you enjoyed that!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Bloody hope so, its not healthy these two suffereing for this length of time... what is it now, they've been in love for what... 10 years or so? *shakes head* Complete foolishness - not just having at it on her office desk... *nods* that would be most sensible...

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Fishy

“Believe me, Albus, believe me,” Minerva said softly, still gently running her hands over his back. “You are extremely handsome, immensely attractive, and your touch warms and excites me. I love to hear your voice, to feel your hands touching me, to feel your lips on mine, your lips over my skin, your tongue touching mine, and,” she continued even more softly, “feeling your desire for me, your very physical desire, it quickens my own need and desire. Touch me, Albus, touch me, and you will see and feel how much pleasure you bring me, how you awaken my desire, and how my desire is for you and for you alone.”*snip*I just love that... I am so in awe of how Minerva can place herself in such vulnerable positions for Albus' sake - and be so completely honest, and still so tender with him. So beautiful.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Albus smiled brightly up at her, and said in a low voice, “And you, my love, are my sun and my stars, the wave that lifts me, the fresh breeze that invigorates me, the very rhythm of my heartbeat; you, my sweet Minerva, are the passion in my life, that which animates my very being, the pinnacle I never hoped to attain. You are the light beyond the clouds, the joy on the far side of sorrow: you are my love.”Minerva leaned forward and kissed his cheeks. Tears entered her eyes. She whispered, “I wish I could say to you anything at all as beautiful as your words to me.” Albus pulled her toward him, down one more step, and held her close. He turned his face into her hair and took a deep breath and let it out.“Your words are beautiful to me, my dear Minerva. Very beautiful, words of love. Your presence in my life, even more so,” he said softly. “And the words that you uttered, that brought me beyond my fears . . . they could not have been more beautiful.”*snip*Pure poetry.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked that. Somehow, Albus can be more poetical than I can -- one of those strange paradoxes of writing fiction.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Aye, Albus is like that.... *nods* you write him very well.

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