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Resolving a Misunderstanding

1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

3: III: Albus Reflects

4: IV: More McGonagalls

5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

6: VI: Spero et Expecto

7: VII: Chez Albus

8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

10: X: A Smooth Apparater

11: XI: The Special Project

12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

15: XV: A Success

16: XVI: Preparations

17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

19: XIX: Waiting

20: XX: Hiding

21: XXI: Seeking

22: XXII: Finding

23: XXIII: Escaping

24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

25: XXV: Meeting

26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

32: XXXII: The Attacks

33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

35: XXXV: Hagrid

36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

38: XXXVIII: Requests

39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

40: XL: Horrid Relatives

41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

46: XLVI: More Relatives

47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

50: L: Curious Conversation

51: LI: The Lovely Couple

52: LII: Shall We Dance?

53: LIII: The End of the Party

54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

60: LX: The Magic of Memory

61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

66: LXVI: Many Meetings

67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

69: LXIX: None But the Two

70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

72: LXXII: Not a Date

73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

74: LXXIV: Ever Green

75: LXXV: Collision

76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

77: LXXVII: Impulse

78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

83: LXXXIII: Family Time

84: LXXXIV: Mates

85: LXXXV: Plans

86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

90: XC: A Confidant

91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

95: XCV: Home Again

96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

98: XCVIII: Warding

99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

100: C: Touring Hogwarts

101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

104: CIV: Gifts

105: CV: A Werewolf's End

106: CVI: Reverberations

107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

108: CVIII: In Memoriam

109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

110: CX: Seduction

111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

125: CXXV: Rematch

126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

131: CXXXI: Realising Love

132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

135: CXXXV: A Spree

136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

140: CXL: Sorted

141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!

Resolving a Misunderstanding

MMADfan

954 Reviews   |   954 Ratings, 0 Likes, 108 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 887,445 Words 157 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Armando Dippet Rubeus Hagrid Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Rufus Scrimgeour Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Moaning Myrtle Aragog Bellatrix Lestrange Druella (Rosier) Black Bartimus Crouch Filius Flitwick Horace Slughorn Professor Binns Mr. Ollivander Gellert Grindelwald Nicolas Flamel Cornelius Fudge Professor Kettleburn

Minerva has just finished her first term teaching. A series of misunderstandings leads to an embarrassing moment, injured feelings, regret, growing understanding, then resolution. A Minerva McGonagall fic set in 1957, with forays into the past. More than a Romance; stories within stories. Features Minerva, Albus, and Poppy, with appearances by Slughorn, Grubbly-Plank, Hagrid, Flitwick, Moody, Riddle, Grindelwald, and other canon characters. Not DH-compliant. Disregards DH.
Nineteen Parts.
Most content T-rated, but ratings rise to M and MA for several later chapters. Overall M rating reflects later content.
Pertinent warnings in individual chapter summaries.

Voted First Place, Minerva McGonagall: Legacy Fic, in the HP Fanfiction Fan Poll Awards Spring/Summer 2013.

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Chapters (141)

Chapter 1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

Chapter 2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

Chapter 3: III: Albus Reflects

Chapter 4: IV: More McGonagalls

Chapter 5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

Chapter 6: VI: Spero et Expecto

Chapter 7: VII: Chez Albus

Chapter 8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

Chapter 9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

Chapter 10: X: A Smooth Apparater

Chapter 11: XI: The Special Project

Chapter 12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

Chapter 13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

Chapter 14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

Chapter 15: XV: A Success

Chapter 16: XVI: Preparations

Chapter 17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

Chapter 18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

Chapter 19: XIX: Waiting

Chapter 20: XX: Hiding

Chapter 21: XXI: Seeking

Chapter 22: XXII: Finding

Chapter 23: XXIII: Escaping

Chapter 24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

Chapter 25: XXV: Meeting

Chapter 26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

Chapter 27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

Chapter 28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

Chapter 29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

Chapter 30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

Chapter 31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

Chapter 32: XXXII: The Attacks

Chapter 33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

Chapter 34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

Chapter 35: XXXV: Hagrid

Chapter 36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

Chapter 37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

Chapter 38: XXXVIII: Requests

Chapter 39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

Chapter 40: XL: Horrid Relatives

Chapter 41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

Chapter 42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

Chapter 43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

Chapter 44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

Chapter 45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

Chapter 46: XLVI: More Relatives

Chapter 47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

Chapter 48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

Chapter 49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

Chapter 50: L: Curious Conversation

Chapter 51: LI: The Lovely Couple

Chapter 52: LII: Shall We Dance?

Chapter 53: LIII: The End of the Party

Chapter 54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

Chapter 55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

Chapter 57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

Chapter 58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

Chapter 59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

Chapter 60: LX: The Magic of Memory

Chapter 61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

Chapter 62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

Chapter 63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

Chapter 64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

Chapter 65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

Chapter 66: LXVI: Many Meetings

Chapter 67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

Chapter 68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

Chapter 69: LXIX: None But the Two

Chapter 70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

Chapter 71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

Chapter 72: LXXII: Not a Date

Chapter 73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

Chapter 74: LXXIV: Ever Green

Chapter 75: LXXV: Collision

Chapter 76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

Chapter 77: LXXVII: Impulse

Chapter 78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

Chapter 79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

Chapter 80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

Chapter 81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

Chapter 82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

Chapter 83: LXXXIII: Family Time

Chapter 84: LXXXIV: Mates

Chapter 85: LXXXV: Plans

Chapter 86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

Chapter 87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

Chapter 88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

Chapter 89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

Chapter 90: XC: A Confidant

Chapter 91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

Chapter 92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

Chapter 93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

Chapter 94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

Chapter 95: XCV: Home Again

Chapter 96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

Chapter 97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

Chapter 98: XCVIII: Warding

Chapter 99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

Chapter 100: C: Touring Hogwarts

Chapter 101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

Chapter 102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

Chapter 103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

Chapter 104: CIV: Gifts

Chapter 105: CV: A Werewolf's End

Chapter 106: CVI: Reverberations

Chapter 107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

Chapter 108: CVIII: In Memoriam

Chapter 109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

Chapter 110: CX: Seduction

Chapter 111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

Chapter 112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

Chapter 113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

Chapter 114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

Chapter 115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

Chapter 116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

Chapter 117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

Chapter 118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

Chapter 119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

Chapter 120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

Chapter 121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

Chapter 122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

Chapter 123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

Chapter 124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

Chapter 125: CXXV: Rematch

Chapter 126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

Chapter 127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

Chapter 128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

Chapter 129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

Chapter 130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

Chapter 131: CXXXI: Realising Love

Chapter 132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

Chapter 133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

Chapter 134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

Chapter 135: CXXXV: A Spree

Chapter 136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

Chapter 137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

Chapter 138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

Chapter 140: CXL: Sorted

Chapter 141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!


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Fishy

The password was absolutely delightful.... I grinned at Albus' embarassment quite a bit, and the more I learn about Gertie, the more I really, really like her. I love how absolutely frank she is, Slytherin style.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Gertie is pretty "straightforward," in a Slytherin sort of way, though Minerva can sometimes be a tad dense in her interactions with her until she gets to know her better. Glad you like the frank Slytherin!

0/10

Fishy

My heart is all a flutter.... so tangible is their love... I can almost taste it.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I'm glad you feel that -- or taste it, as the case may be!

10/10

Fishy

“Where are we going, Albus?”“Ah, well, my dear, would you trust me for a moment?”“Of course, but –”“But? Do you trust me or not?” “Yes, I do, Albus.” Minerva smiled at him and shook her head. Silly, dear man.“Then, my dear, close your eyes.”*snip*Ohhhhhhhh, how I love this.... looooove this... yumm.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks! They do have their special romantic moments even when they think they're "just friends"!

0/10

Fishy

When his hand touched her thigh, Minerva thought she would expire right there and then. A rush of warmth flooded her and she could feel her pulse increase at Albus’s touch. She blinked, startled, “Yes, yes, of course.” Minerva reached for her own glass of cider and almost knocked it over before catching it and raising it to her lips. She had gone from being nervous that he was upset with her about the parchments to being highly aroused by his touch in less than a second. It was all very well for her to tell herself that she would simply not act on her feelings for Albus, but she really must do something about these physical responses. Thank goodness Albus hadn’t noticed, but had begun to eat his meal again.*snip*And for good measure...That had been an error on his part. He had simply meant to comfort her by giving her a reassuring pat. He should have patted her shoulder or her arm, Albus thought. Her gown was a thin summer-weight silk, and he had felt her leg through it as though he had been touching her naked thigh. The sensation had streamed through him, bypassing his brain entirely and shooting straight to his groin. Fortunately, dinner had just begun, there would be time for his reaction to pass, and the robes he was wearing that evening had more drape to them than the blue ones he had worn that morning. He would have to do something to control his physical reactions, though; if he were to allow himself to continue to act on his love for Minerva as a friend, he could not let this recurrent problem go unaddressed. Fortunately, Minerva hadn’t seemed to notice his reaction and was drinking her cider.*snip*AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA.... I LOLed... I loved that... LOVED that.... yus... *grins*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

There's just a bit of sexual chemistry there, wouldn't you say? Glad you loved it!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

A bit? How about a volcano! YIKES.... the castle may not be able to remain standing if these two actually do make it to the bed together... I can already feel the foundation cracking.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I do think you'll appreciate the moment that happens, then!

0/10

Fishy

Dawwwwwwwww, Minerva bought Hagrid a broom and adopted him as her wee brother.... *sniff* That is soooooooooooooooo adorable.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I'm glad you liked that!

10/10

Fishy

I liked how Professor Gamp handeld Minerva - she knew simply scolding the young Gryff wouldn't suffice. She also knew that to truly get Minerva to really understand the gravity of her actions, she had to appeal to Minerva's fondness for Professor Dumbledore - and show her the situation Minerva put HIM in - that was a particularly brilliant move on Gamp's part.And Kudos for writing a Slytherin who is both wise and kind, but still believable as a Slytherin. I see others here don't much like her, but I do.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I'm glad you like her. I think she did a fine job with Minerva, myself! Some folks, I think, identify a bit too much with Minerva's feelings about Gertrude in this part of the story, rather than judging her on her own merits. I think that Gertrude's method of handling Minerva's behavior actually demonstrated respect for her -- as you say, she didn't just scold her.I'm rather fond of her, too! Thanks!

0/10

Fishy

Albus opened his eyes and turned his head toward her. “Ah, a visitor. But you should go, little one. It isn’t safe for either of us here. Of course, you are a French cat. I should speak French, no doubt.” Albus reached out to stroke the small animal. “I know a cat a bit like you at home, she’s a sweet . . . Minerva?” he said as he touched the cat. “Minerva, am I going mad, or is that you?”*snip*Bloody brilliant - I just love that, he can touch her and instantly knows, its her - and he's just dumbfounded that SHE is there... not sure if I mentioned that before, but I wanted to. I love the way you've explained their magical connection and how very true an individual's magical signiture is.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks! There is a lot connecting them, and Albus is always "in tune" with Minerva's magical signature. And he was completely astounded -- it simply seemed impossible that she be there in that grubby little hole in that terrible situation, but there she was!It's wonderful, too, to be reminded of these scenes, of the bits & pieces and chapters that I hadn't exactly forgotten, but which I hadn't thought of in a while. It's like experiencing the story anew, myself.Thanks!

10/10

Fishy

Okay - I loved this chapter, for several reasons. Firstly, the lion has roared... I love it when this particular lion roars - AND... he has also made Minerva QUITE plainly aware, even though at the begining, she truly was completely clueless - that her death would be heartwrenching for him - I think this quote is quite significant, and gave me warm fuzzies, all the same.“Minerva McGonagall! Do you honestly believe that I care about the time I spent helping you as though it were some kind of an investment? Do you truly think that I would regret your death only because you would be unable to help with the wards?” He seemed perplexed by Minerva’s response.*snip*And this - “No!” Minerva cried, responding in horror at the thought of Professor Dumbledore lying cold and dead on a floor somewhere in Hogwarts. “No! That would be dreadful. I don’t think I could bear coming back to school. It wouldn’t matter if they closed it or not.” Minerva shook her head at the vision. “It would be just . . . awful . . .” she finished quietly.*snip*I love how Dumbledore - ever the teacher, uses someone else's words and their own emotions to convey his feelings - and to teach - far better to SHOW someone something that just tell them - that is wisdom in a nutshell.Brilliant, as usual, and as I've come to expect from you. *winks* Even if you do torture me with this pair's extream lack of insight later on in their relationship - though Albus seems completely able to express how much he values her, here.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thank you! I'm glad you appreciated those scenes. I felt that that was how Dumbledore would try to impress a lesson on Minerva.At this point, Albus is quite comfortable with his affection for her -- his love for her, even -- because at this point, it hasn't progressed into being "in love" with her. He hasn't even quite noticed she's growing into an attractive witch, though he certainly does notice her maturing mind. A pity he can't stay as comfortable with his feelings for her as they progress! Very glad you liked the chapter!

0/10

Fishy

*chuckles* Sneaky paintings.... isn't Dilys the one who was so pleased in "Obliging Minerva"?*grins*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, indeedy! She most certainly is! She's quite a lively portrait!

10/10

Fishy

I am very pleased that Albus could come to this conclusion, that he was indeed, in love with Minerva, and deal with it - instead of trying to deny it, and embracing her friendship instead of shunning her - that would be difficult and I almost expected Albus to turn tail and run from her, shutting her out. I'm very glad he didn't.And Fawkes is a very nice touch. I always wanted to learn more about the relationship he and Albus had.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

He will try various methods of dealing with it throughout the story, and we'll see how well they work out!I like Fawkes. I always wished we could see more of him. I don't use him nearly as much as I'd like to in my fics, but he's one cool bird. Or hot, depending! I'm glad you liked that bit of progress on Albus's part. Thanks!

0/10

Fishy

I seriously think I'm going to have to step into this story and push these two together.... for PETE sake, these two are geniuses! Can't they see what they have, collectively?Nevermind, I can remember a certain

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

who was head over heals for her Spanish professor and the two of them didn't notice that the other was feeling the same.... *groans* I guess we can all be blind... but hopefully, one of them SOONER or later, will speak up! I know I finally did... I'll never forget that either... anyway... these two are PERFECT for eachother, sheeeesh.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

LOL! If they weren't so perfect for each other and weren't so good together, there wouldn't be much of a story, would there? Don't worry! It won't take them quite as long to get together as it will feel to you -- although quite likely, you'll be wanting to shake one or the other or both of them at different points of the story! When I started out the story, although I had a sweet PWP plot bunny jumping around in my head, I decided I wanted to write the other story that had been going through my brain for much longer, and didn't want to skip all the plot of that story. I think you'll have great fun with the story as it proceeds -- when you're not feeling like throttling the two or locking them in a cupboard together or something! LOL!Thanks very much!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Okay - help me out - PWP?

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

PWP =  either "Porn-Without-Plot" or "Plot? What Plot?" So jumping from Minerva swearing about Albus & his beard to their actually doing what Albus thought "an interesting idea" would have made it definitely a PWP! But PWPs can be quite hot and fun!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Ahhh... I see... yes, they can, but I think the emotional depth you're establishing makes it far more enjoyable... when they finally DO GET IT! I seriously hope they get it.... going to have to chuck them both off the Astronamy Tower pretty soon if they don't WAKE UP!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

They'll also have some help along the way in "waking up" -- though you may still, at at least one point in the story, feel like chucking 'em! Remember that "Obliging Minerva" takes place in the October after RaM, and A Holiday with the Headmaster takes place actually between two chapters of RaM -- later chapters, but still -- there's hope!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

If you say so...............

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

LOL!

10/10

Fallen_Angel_Mione

Cute chapter! :D

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks!

0/10

Fishy

*snip*He kissed her hair and whispered, “I love you, my darling Minerva.”“Mmm, me too,” Minerva said, snuggling against him and nuzzling his hair. “Very much.”*snip*And from Madness*snip*“I love you, Albus,” Minerva whispered.Albus let out a low, satisfied hum, then he roused himself sufficiently to turn his head and kiss the side of her jaw. “Mmmm. Love you, too. Love you very much.” *snip*I knew I saw similarities - and that you switched the line from Minerva to Albus - found that very sweet - thought I'd point out that I was, indeed, paying attention!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

You were very attentive indeed! :-) Very good!It was fun to write a different, but very similar, Albus & Minerva in "Momentary Madness," where Minerva still makes some of the first moves, but where he responds, and where he is quite confident and nudges things along himself early on.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Woah - must have made your day or something - I have 13 notices in my inbox that you responded to this review! Mayhaps TPP is having some issues, or were you just really happy?

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

No, I responded to thirteen different reviews you left for various chapters of RaM & Momentary Madness. :-)

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

DOH!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

forgot! Silly

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

It's okay! You wrote those reviews two or three weeks ago, and I was just negligent! I'm glad I saw them again!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

You were very attentive indeed! :-) Very good!It was fun to write a different, but very similar, Albus & Minerva in "Momentary Madness," where Minerva still makes some of the first moves, but where he responds, and where he is quite confident and nudges things along himself early on.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

Woah - must have made your day or something - I have 13 notices in my inbox that you responded to this review! Mayhaps TPP is having some issues, or were you just really happy?

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

No, I responded to thirteen different reviews you left for various chapters of RaM & Momentary Madness. :-)

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

DOH!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

forgot! Silly

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

It's okay! You wrote those reviews two or three weeks ago, and I was just negligent! I'm glad I saw them again!

10/10

Fishy

*snip* “Go a winter, and go a summer, come to me then, when you want me, me for myself, if you ever truly want me, and you will have me, Minerva. But . . . not today.”*snip*Good on Quin for reminding her that she's USING him - and that when you USE people, people get hurt, especially friends - I'm surprised he's got the patience to put up with her right now - honestly - what Minerva is doing is pure selfishness and I'd like to slap her into sense - we know her to be sensible! Surely there's a bowl of it somewhere! Bad Minerva! Selfish Minerva!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Well, I think that Quin was being a bit kinder to her -- and very realistic. He not only wanted her to want him for himself and not because she was looking desperately for something to wipe away her bad feelings and replace them with something else, but he knew that anything that might begin between them then just wouldn't last, not beginning in that way at that time in Minerva's life. He also doubted that she'd ever really want to be with him, although he was definitely drawn to her, and he wants the best for her, even if that isn't him.Minerva does realize that she behaved thoughtlessly and out of her sense of need, and does apologize to him. He knows she didn't do it on purpose, though, and that she just wasn't thinking clearly -- wasn't herself. Anyway, she will come to regret it and to feel bad for hurting him, as she must have done.With these words, too, he doesn't hand her yet another rejection, which would make her feel worse about herself, but tells her, hey, give it time, and if you still think you feel this way, then come to me.Minerva was certainly not being her best self at this moment, but she'd been through a lot, and she didn't have a lot of emotional reserve left.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

I suppose the last time perfection walked upon this earth was some 2000 years ago, so I'll cut her a bit of slack. *nods*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Well, I think that Quin was being a bit kinder to her -- and very realistic. He not only wanted her to want him for himself and not because she was looking desperately for something to wipe away her bad feelings and replace them with something else, but he knew that anything that might begin between them then just wouldn't last, not beginning in that way at that time in Minerva's life. He also doubted that she'd ever really want to be with him, although he was definitely drawn to her, and he wants the best for her, even if that isn't him.Minerva does realize that she behaved thoughtlessly and out of her sense of need, and does apologize to him. He knows she didn't do it on purpose, though, and that she just wasn't thinking clearly -- wasn't herself. Anyway, she will come to regret it and to feel bad for hurting him, as she must have done.With these words, too, he doesn't hand her yet another rejection, which would make her feel worse about herself, but tells her, hey, give it time, and if you still think you feel this way, then come to me.Minerva was certainly not being her best self at this moment, but she'd been through a lot, and she didn't have a lot of emotional reserve left.

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

I suppose the last time perfection walked upon this earth was some 2000 years ago, so I'll cut her a bit of slack. *nods*

0/10

Fishy

*sighs* If only they could be truly honest with eachother...

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

At least they've been able to enjoy each other's company now. Don't worry -- you know from reading "Obliging Minerva" and "A Holiday with the Headmaster" that they do make it, and before the end of the summer, as well! I hope you enjoy the story of all that Minerva goes through as they arrive at the point!Thanks again for the reviews! I really enjoy them.

0/10

Fishy

If only they would  communicate..... communication, trust and respect are the three anchors of a good relationship - they have trust and respect, all they need is communication!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

You are completely correct there -- the communication between them is what's missing most!

0/10

Fishy

Oh boy, these two really aren't communicating - they are both in the same boat and ..... stuck together yet, missing the boat entirely as the tide flows out...

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, they're both on the same path, but it's like they're walking in the dark & don't know they have company! :-)

0/10

Fishy

When are these two going to get the clue and SMOOCH?

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Ah, well, more than a romance, remember? Where would we be with the story if they got a clue too soon? And as you'll see later, there's a pretty good reason that Albus doesn't have a clue. Minerva does try!

0/10

Fishy

Sheeeeeeeesh, very tense chapter..... I can breathe again.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, exhale, inhale, exhale, inhale -- they're safe! Glad you liked it! (I wasn't sure when I started this section of the story whether I could write suspense or not, so it was a relief for me to finish it & begin to breathe, too! )

0/10

Fishy

I loved this chapter - SO thankful she found him.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, you can breathe freely again!

10/10

Fishy

I love Minerva's letter to her parents, and how she's told them that she loved Albus between the lines and to help him with his grief, if she should not return.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Thanks!

0/10

Fishy

*sobs and bites nails*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

This part of the story is a bit of a nail-biter, I think! Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

Fishy

“His Majesty’s government thanks you for your readiness to serve your country in her hour of need, Miss McGonagall. It is with pride that I extend this thanks, pride that you have risen to take this challenge which, unlooked for, Fate has presented you. It is the youth of our nation who expend their lives in defence of us all; the bloom of youth has not yet left your cheek, and, loathe though we are to send our young women where must needs we send our young men, that loathing diminishes neither our pride nor our gratitude. I wish you the strength and courage that God gave to you and Britain made in you, Miss McGonagall, and may Fortune, sister to Fate, lead you to your goal and then home again.”*snip*THAT right there, is bloody brilliant. If someone gave me that speech, I'd walk through fire.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

*blush* Thank you. I tried to make it Churchillian. He was a pretty inspiring speaker, and I listened to some of his old radio addresses to try to get the cadence "right," or as right as possible given that this is written, not spoken.

0/10

Fishy

Albus smiled at that, and said, “Well, then, I’ll just have to ‘shoo’ myself – I hear that your boss is something of a tyrannical ogre, and I’d hate to have put you in his bad graces!”*snip*AHAHAHAHA!

Response from Fishy (Reviewer)

*snip again*Albus chided himself then. No wonder she had felt neglected since she came to Hogwarts; in truth, he felt now as though he had been neglecting their friendship for much longer than that. Unforgivably, to his mind, he had only truly begun to distance himself from his feelings following an event that might have, and should have, brought them closer.WHAT EVENT?????????????? *pulls hair out*

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I'm sure you've now reached that event, so I hope you've not become bald! lol!Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

9/10

fuchs295

Goodness, they are really dense, the two of them! But I suppose I could not enjoy your story for as long as I do if Albus and Minerva were a little bit more aware of the obvious... ;-)Your backstory for Albus is very interesting!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, and while I wouldn't say that the romance is just along for the ride in the fic, there's a lot of story there! LOL! And it really isn't quite as long as it seems, since Minerva ony had her blow-up in Poppy's office on the fourth of July and they both spend time away from Hogwarts at various points. Anyway, Minerva isn't quite as dense as Albus, but Albus is really quite dense -- but for added reasons than the obvious ones . . .Glad you liked the backstory! His backstory is one of the first parts of the story I sketched out early on. It seemed to make sense to me given the Albus we see in the first five or six books.Anyway, I'm glad you're still enjoying the story! Thanks, fuchs!

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