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Resolving a Misunderstanding

1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

3: III: Albus Reflects

4: IV: More McGonagalls

5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

6: VI: Spero et Expecto

7: VII: Chez Albus

8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

10: X: A Smooth Apparater

11: XI: The Special Project

12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

15: XV: A Success

16: XVI: Preparations

17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

19: XIX: Waiting

20: XX: Hiding

21: XXI: Seeking

22: XXII: Finding

23: XXIII: Escaping

24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

25: XXV: Meeting

26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

32: XXXII: The Attacks

33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

35: XXXV: Hagrid

36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

38: XXXVIII: Requests

39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

40: XL: Horrid Relatives

41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

46: XLVI: More Relatives

47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

50: L: Curious Conversation

51: LI: The Lovely Couple

52: LII: Shall We Dance?

53: LIII: The End of the Party

54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

60: LX: The Magic of Memory

61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

66: LXVI: Many Meetings

67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

69: LXIX: None But the Two

70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

72: LXXII: Not a Date

73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

74: LXXIV: Ever Green

75: LXXV: Collision

76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

77: LXXVII: Impulse

78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

83: LXXXIII: Family Time

84: LXXXIV: Mates

85: LXXXV: Plans

86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

90: XC: A Confidant

91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

95: XCV: Home Again

96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

98: XCVIII: Warding

99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

100: C: Touring Hogwarts

101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

104: CIV: Gifts

105: CV: A Werewolf's End

106: CVI: Reverberations

107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

108: CVIII: In Memoriam

109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

110: CX: Seduction

111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

125: CXXV: Rematch

126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

131: CXXXI: Realising Love

132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

135: CXXXV: A Spree

136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

140: CXL: Sorted

141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!

Resolving a Misunderstanding

MMADfan

954 Reviews   |   954 Ratings, 0 Likes, 108 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 887,445 Words 157 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Minerva McGonagall Poppy Pomfrey Armando Dippet Rubeus Hagrid Wilhelmina Grubbly-Plank Rufus Scrimgeour Alastor (Mad-Eye) Moody Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Moaning Myrtle Aragog Bellatrix Lestrange Druella (Rosier) Black Bartimus Crouch Filius Flitwick Horace Slughorn Professor Binns Mr. Ollivander Gellert Grindelwald Nicolas Flamel Cornelius Fudge Professor Kettleburn

Minerva has just finished her first term teaching. A series of misunderstandings leads to an embarrassing moment, injured feelings, regret, growing understanding, then resolution. A Minerva McGonagall fic set in 1957, with forays into the past. More than a Romance; stories within stories. Features Minerva, Albus, and Poppy, with appearances by Slughorn, Grubbly-Plank, Hagrid, Flitwick, Moody, Riddle, Grindelwald, and other canon characters. Not DH-compliant. Disregards DH.
Nineteen Parts.
Most content T-rated, but ratings rise to M and MA for several later chapters. Overall M rating reflects later content.
Pertinent warnings in individual chapter summaries.

Voted First Place, Minerva McGonagall: Legacy Fic, in the HP Fanfiction Fan Poll Awards Spring/Summer 2013.

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Chapters (141)

Chapter 1: I: Minerva’s Grievance

Chapter 2: II: Minerva’s Mortification

Chapter 3: III: Albus Reflects

Chapter 4: IV: More McGonagalls

Chapter 5: V: Madam Puddifoot’s and a Complicated Situation

Chapter 6: VI: Spero et Expecto

Chapter 7: VII: Chez Albus

Chapter 8: VIII: Minerva’s Project

Chapter 9: IX: A Father Worried, A Father Reassured

Chapter 10: X: A Smooth Apparater

Chapter 11: XI: The Special Project

Chapter 12: XII: An Unexpected Arrival

Chapter 13: XIII: Lunch in the Great Hall

Chapter 14: XIV: To Train a House-Elf

Chapter 15: XV: A Success

Chapter 16: XVI: Preparations

Chapter 17: XVII: Minerva’s Mission

Chapter 18: XVIII: A Sudden Change of Circumstance

Chapter 19: XIX: Waiting

Chapter 20: XX: Hiding

Chapter 21: XXI: Seeking

Chapter 22: XXII: Finding

Chapter 23: XXIII: Escaping

Chapter 24: XXIV: A Missent Missive

Chapter 25: XXV: Meeting

Chapter 26: XXVI: A Lovely Sight to Behold

Chapter 27: XXVII: Pleasurable Anticipation

Chapter 28: XXVIII: A Bright Morning

Chapter 29: XXIX: Breakfast with Albus, Breakfast with Minerva

Chapter 30: XXX: Speculation and Facing Oneself

Chapter 31: XXXI: Curiosity Piqued

Chapter 32: XXXII: The Attacks

Chapter 33: XXXIII: A Difficult Conversation

Chapter 34: XXXIV: Professor Gamp’s Suggestion

Chapter 35: XXXV: Hagrid

Chapter 36: XXXVI: Dinner and Dessert

Chapter 37: XXXVII: A Morning Constitutional

Chapter 38: XXXVIII: Requests

Chapter 39: XXXIX: A Startling Revelation

Chapter 40: XL: Horrid Relatives

Chapter 41: XLI: Down the Garden Path

Chapter 42: XLII: Dalliance and Deception

Chapter 43: XLIII: Doubt and Comfort

Chapter 44: XLIV: An Early Breakfast and an Owl

Chapter 45: XLV: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

Chapter 46: XLVI: More Relatives

Chapter 47: XLVII: Dinner and Divination

Chapter 48: XLVIII: Lessons in Letter-Writing

Chapter 49: XLIX: Games at the Gamps

Chapter 50: L: Curious Conversation

Chapter 51: LI: The Lovely Couple

Chapter 52: LII: Shall We Dance?

Chapter 53: LIII: The End of the Party

Chapter 54: LIV: Breakfast al Fresco

Chapter 55: LV: Return to Hogwarts

Chapter 56: LVI: A Conspiracy of Witches

Chapter 57: LVII: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

Chapter 58: LVIII: The Comforts of Home

Chapter 59: LIX: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

Chapter 60: LX: The Magic of Memory

Chapter 61: LXI: An Owl from St. Mungo’s

Chapter 62: LXII: To Be of Assistance

Chapter 63: LXIII: Tasseomancy

Chapter 64: LXIV: Debate and Dissension

Chapter 65: LXV: Hagrid’s Hut

Chapter 66: LXVI: Many Meetings

Chapter 67: LXVII: An Escort in Dark Places

Chapter 68: LXVIII: A Date for Minerva

Chapter 69: LXIX: None But the Two

Chapter 70: LXX: Forever in the Sun

Chapter 71: LXXI: If This Were a Date . . .

Chapter 72: LXXII: Not a Date

Chapter 73: LXXIII: A Tale of Two Wands

Chapter 74: LXXIV: Ever Green

Chapter 75: LXXV: Collision

Chapter 76: LXXVI: A Most Pleasant Disturbance

Chapter 77: LXXVII: Impulse

Chapter 78: LXXVIII: Meeting Morag

Chapter 79: LXXIX: Jeremiah Was a Jarvey

Chapter 80: LXXX: An Evening in Hogsmeade

Chapter 81: LXXXI: Disarming Minerva

Chapter 82: LXXXII: Silly Wizard

Chapter 83: LXXXIII: Family Time

Chapter 84: LXXXIV: Mates

Chapter 85: LXXXV: Plans

Chapter 86: LXXXVI: A Mother’s Trust

Chapter 87: LXXXVII: Of Altruism and Magical Accidents

Chapter 88: LXXXVIII: From Albus, Sincerely

Chapter 89: LXXXIX: A Perfect Flat

Chapter 90: XC: A Confidant

Chapter 91: XCI: Hope, Suspect

Chapter 92: XCII: Expectations and Arrivals

Chapter 93: XCIII: Tea Party on the Ceiling

Chapter 94: XCIV: Poppy and Potions

Chapter 95: XCV: Home Again

Chapter 96: XCVI: Not to Be Tolerated

Chapter 97: XCVII: Happy Birthday, Albus

Chapter 98: XCVIII: Warding

Chapter 99: XCIX: Head of Gryffindor

Chapter 100: C: Touring Hogwarts

Chapter 101: CI: The Tale of a Young Wizard

Chapter 102: CII: The Sorrows of a Young Wizard

Chapter 103: CIII: Defeating Darkness

Chapter 104: CIV: Gifts

Chapter 105: CV: A Werewolf's End

Chapter 106: CVI: Reverberations

Chapter 107: CVII: Unsolicited Advice

Chapter 108: CVIII: In Memoriam

Chapter 109: CIX: Holiday from Hogwarts

Chapter 110: CX: Seduction

Chapter 111: CXI: Headmaster’s Holiday

Chapter 112: CXII: Unexpected Arrivals

Chapter 113: CXIII: Seeking Counsel

Chapter 114: CXIV: His Lady’s Servant

Chapter 115: CXV: Questionable Intentions

Chapter 116: CXVI: Seeking Solace

Chapter 117: CXVII: Comfort and Consolation

Chapter 118: CXVIII: Confronting Albus

Chapter 119: CXIX: Love Unceasing

Chapter 120: CXX: The Morning Beyond Never

Chapter 121: CXXI: The MacAirt Pledge

Chapter 122: CXXII: Another Date for Minerva

Chapter 123: CXXIII: Love Beyond Disbelief

Chapter 124: CXXIV: Courting Minerva

Chapter 125: CXXV: Rematch

Chapter 126: CXXVI: Age Cannot Wither

Chapter 127: CXXVII: An Interesting Idea

Chapter 128: CXXVIII: Romance Interrupted

Chapter 129: CXXIX: A Mercurial McGonagall

Chapter 130: CXXX: The McGonagall Cliffs

Chapter 131: CXXXI: Realising Love

Chapter 132: CXXXII: Melina Marries Her Muggle

Chapter 133: CXXXIII: Abiding Love

Chapter 134: CXXXIV: Sweet Delight

Chapter 135: CXXXV: A Spree

Chapter 136: CXXXVI: Aprés Spree

Chapter 137: CXXXVII: The Silent Knight’s Tale

Chapter 138: CXXXVIII: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 139: CXXXIX: Lagniappe

Chapter 140: CXL: Sorted

Chapter 141: Epilogue: . . . and his stupid beard too!


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10/10

HogwartsDuo

Auror Sprangle should have been Auror STRANGLE! That's exactly what I want to do to him. GRRRR. He's such a goofball.Minerva's letter home to her parents was so touching. It's interesting to read between the lines and to see all the things that she didn't say as well as the things she chose to emphasize. The progression of Minerva's relationship with Carson was believable too. I'm glad they were able to have some time together before the war.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Carson was a really good friend and a great guy to have as a "first." Sprangle is based on a conglomeration of idiot bureaucrats I've had to deal with. Nightmarish! LOL!Thanks!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

How awful for Carson. I feel so bad for him. At least Albus is there to take the best possible care of him and to make him as comfortable as possible.  I feel really bad for Alastor too. I love how you explain little details like physical descriptions from canon into your story. It explains Alastor's fake leg and all his scars in such a believable way. GO YOU!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Glad you liked that. At some point, we were supposed to learn that Albus's "London underground" scar came from when he was on his knees dragging Carson across the frozen ground, but it never came up.Ta!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

And thus begins some of my favorite chapters in this story. I love seeing Minerva in the "action" role and for her to be seeking Albus in the hopes of saving him from certain death and horrors...that's just icing on the cake. I always think of this section when listening to my cd's (wink wink, you know the ones) and it makes me want to come back and read this section again and again.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Everyone always thinks of Albus in the action-hero type role, but I thought that Minerva could certainly do it too, and the challenges would be greater for her, esp here, since she is not only not as powerful as Albus, but she's young and fairly inexperienced, but she rises to the challenges and succeeds. I also thought it would be interesting to experiment with an Albus who was temporarily weakened and who was very aware of it. I enjoyed writing these chapters, but it was also a challenge for me, since I hoped to make them somewhat suspenseful and convey the sense of action, but I hadn't done anything like that before. The first scenes with Minerva at the Ministry were supposed to convey, partially, her own sense of impatience and having to wait before they could leave, and those were easier to write, I remember.I'm glad you're enjoying the reread -- and the "soundtrack"!

0/10

Bloo

Cheers for posting.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

<--- that's me, posting. Aren't I cute?

10/10

HogwartsDuo

I'm so happy to see that Albus has finally seen the  light and that this is the start of making amends with Minerva. It's terrible to see them at odds but then again, if it hadn't been for Minerva's rant in the first chapter, there wouldn't be the wonderful story that followed, even with the ups and downs. Gotta love a man who can admit that he's made a mistake and is willing to go the extra mile to make up for it. HUGGLES.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

"Gotta love a man who can admit that he's made a mistake and is willing to go the extra mile to make up for it."Agreed -- and Minerva does!Thanks!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

DUN DUN DUN....the infamous drippy tap!!!Albus always makes me smile like a silly schoolgirl when he does such nice things for Minerva as having her to dinner in his rooms. I know it's nothing more than dinner and that his inetntions were pure but it still gives me a warm fuzzy. And yay for Minerva being able to transfigure her hand. It's not long now. haha.CHEERS!The Cheeky GLM...tee hee.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I at that chapter was actually in his classroom, but I'd have to reread it -- see, you're making me reread! Again! LOL!I think I may do a side-story about Minerva's Animagus training, set in the RaM universe. I have more about it in my notes that never made it into the story (can you imagine how much longer it would be if everything was put into the story? yikes!), so I may use them someday for a little short fic.Cheers to the cheekiest GLM! (And I am beyond my nausea -- I guess there is actually a point beyond ad nauseum, which I never knew before! LOL!)

0/10

Bloo

Cheers for posting.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

The emoticons available on TPP are outstanding. I particularly like the owl, the dragon, and the Albus icons. I have wanted to use this one for a while . . .You are most very welcome!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

I love Blampa. Bless her heart she really does try to please Minerva at every turn and she's such an eager little thing. tee hee.The section where Minerva is casting the spell on Albus' hand after she's memorized it is outstanding. The desciptions are so vivid that I could actually see it all unfolding in my head. I love it when that happens.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I'm glad you like her. By the end of RaM, Minerva is quite fond of her, too.I'll have to look at that section -- I haven't read it in ages. I'm glad that it was so vivid for you!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Okay, so the Cheeky GLM has to admit that upon first reading this story, Gertie was by far my least favorite character. I did not like the way she interacted with Albus nor the way she interacted with Minerva. It always seemed she was speaking with a forked tongue or was being intentionally vague to keep Minerva guessing.However, as the story progressed and more things were revealed, it turns out she's not as bad as I had one thought. THERE, ARE YA HAPPY NOW???? lolI think she makes a perfect match with Malcolm. Awwww.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

It's all in the power of perspective! Teehee! I had lots of fun presenting her from Minerva's very biased perspective and gradually shifting her perspective and how Gertie was presented. It was quite fun to see how some people liked her, some weren't sure about her, and others identified so strongly with Minerva, that they really disliked her. And since I know you like Malcolm, I figure the "she's not as bad as I had once thought" actually means that you like her now! haha!Thanks! (even though you're cheeky ;-))

10/10

HogwartsDuo

WOO HOO...IT has arrived and in such a profound way. I'm sure Minerva had an inkling already that she had a major crush on her professor but that magical experience brought it all to the surface. Things will never be the same for her again.And Dustern...ugh. Don't even get me started on that wretched witch. BOOOOO HISSSSS!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, Dustern doesn't behave as well as she might, does she? But at least she's not as bad as, well, the witch who shall not be named! LOL!Yup, Minerva, being a sensible girl, was trying very hard to ignore her crush on her professor, but she certainly couldn't ignore it after that -- it wasn't just a crush any longer!Thanks much! (Nice to read more than three words . . . ;-))

0/10

Bloo

Cheers for posting.

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10/10

HogwartsDuo

“May Wilspy serve Professor Dumbledore and his Miss?” I love how Wilspy addresses Minerva throughout this entire story. Having read the later chapters, it's great to see the continuity in the way she calls Minerva Albus's. Awwww.The picnic and the glider are wonderful. I love to see Albus doing little things for Minerva, even when she's still under his care as a student. It just goes to show the depths of their relationship and how it blossomed.“Well, I suppose we should be going back now; as much as I would like to sit here in a swing with a pretty girl, we do need to consult with Wilspy about dinner.”Albus is just too cute when he tries to flirt without really flirting. In a few years, he'll get to do a lot more with the "pretty girl" in a rocker. tee hee.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Wilspy was always that canny one, wasn't she?Yes, it's that little bit of innocent teasing that later becomes genuine flirting -- and sometimes without him even trying or being aware of it (or trying to pretend to himself that it's not! haha!). And what a naughty girl YOU are to think of the rocker! LOL!I'm glad you're enjoying the reread!

0/10

Bloo

Cheers for posting.

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Bloo

Cheers for posting.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I love quotations:“Consistency is contrary to nature, contrary to life. The only completely consistent people are the dead.” Aldous Huxley (1894-1963)I don't think that Aldous Huxley was a very nice man, but that is  fun quote!

0/10

Bloo

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Bloo

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Bloo

Cheers for posting.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

“Every living sentence which shows a mind at work for itself is to be welcomed. It is not the first use but the tiresome repetition of inadequate catch words which I am observing—phrases which originally were contributions, but which, by their very felicity, delay further analysis for fifty years. That comes from the same source as dislike of novelty—intellectual indolence or weakness—a slackening in the eternal pursuit of the more exact.”- Oliver Wendell Holmes (1841–1935) (one of my favorite jurists to read!)

0/10

Bloo

Cheers for posting.

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Bloo

Cheers for posting.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

As was once said, "Repetition is tedious. Three cheers for variation!"- Mason Cooley (b. 1927)Or perhaps 138-plus cheers for variation?

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Minerva did not hesitate to follow her professor’s latest instructions. She stepped in closer to him, closed her eyes, and lay her head on his chest. She listened for his heartbeat, and she could almost imagine that she could feel the thrum of his magical core behind it. That accomplished, she envisioned the front gates in detail, the exercises she had been performing over the summer making it easy for her to create a crystal clear picture in her mind. She nodded against his chest. It seemed that as soon as she had nodded, he was speaking to herI love that section of the story. It just goes to show that even back then, Minerva's heart knew what she wanted and how she so willingly obeyed his instructions, never once thinking of being sick or worrying. I love that about her.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I'm glad that you picked out that section. It really does exemplify so much about their relationship and Minerva's trust in Albus, no matter when you are looking at it or the specific stage of their friendship or their later romance. You see it again on their holiday, much, much later. Thank you for your thoughtful review!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Have i said lately how much I love Merwyn and of course Albus has my heart. haha. It's easy to see that Merwyn has Minerva's best interests at heart and I'm glad that he took the time to meet with Albus to discuss Minerva's special project. And I love that Albus told Minerva's father about the transfigured book. tee hee.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Aw, so glad you love Merwyn! I worked to construct a family around Minerva that seemed to fit her character, and I ended up really enjoying writing them, especially Malcolm, who was chomping at the bit to get written, but he had to wait a while before I'd let him appear! LOL! It's always nice to share amusing stories about people we love with other people who love them, I think. :-)Thank you for the lovely reviews!

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Apiarus B White...tee hee. Albus is a hoot and a very clever man indeedy. I love the way you've constructed this story, blending current time and memories in a way that is easy to follow and interesting. So often in stories, it's easy to get lost in a flashback scene or two but here they compliment the "current time" of the story. It's easy to see that you put in a lot of hours in the plotting of this story.Thanks!

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yes, I did put a lot of time into constructing the story, plotting it carefully, and working on the transitions. Thank you!Glad you liked Albus's nom de plume! ;-)

10/10

HogwartsDuo

Mother McGonagall is so cute when she's taking care of Albus here. And her attention to the meal was perfection, though I'd have to crinkle my nose up at the spinach. Not a huge fan of the stuff, personally, unless it's mixed greens in a salad. haha. I love how, even back in the war days, Minerva was trying hard to make Albus' life easier and to remove as much of the burden from his shoulders as possible, a trait which never went away....awwwww.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

I love spinach. I can eat it at every meal. Mmmm! Spinach, collards, turnip greens, kale, chard, mustard greens -- it's the rare green that I don't like! LOL! It is great in a salad, too!Minerva has always felt that she needs to help take care of Albus, and that certainly is a constant over the years, regardless of the nature or stage of their relationship.I'm glad you're enjoying it! :-)

0/10

Bloo

Oh gawd, heartbreaking stuff.
Cheers for posting.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Yep! :)

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Bloo

Cheers for posting.

Response from MMADfan (Author of Resolving a Misunderstanding)

Writing it, on the other hand . . . that was nothing compared with the posting!

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