Prologue
Chapter 1 of 1
klschmidtYears after his death, some sufferers of Tom Riddle's antics are struck by an unexpected after-effect. Can Severus and Hermione find a way to reverse the outcome? (This will be compliant at least to COS, most canon deaths will be disregarded but maybe not all.)
DISCLAIMER: Anything you recognize is owned by JKR and the powers that be in the canon-HP Universe. A huge thanks to my beta, XXX, for her help with this, and to all the TPP mods for the work they do. (Nothing wrong with a bit of brown-nosin’, huh?) SWAK! (Or maybe I’m a mod throwing you off!)
AU beyond COS, non-DH compliant, especially EWE! Many deaths have been ignored.
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PROLOGUE
"But, Argus," Poppy Pomfrey said in her best bedside-manner voice, "she is getting older all the time. For a cat, sometimes things like this just begin happening more rapidly."
Argus Filch had brought his precious Mrs. Norris to see Madam Pomfrey, and he was deeply concerned. Even though Poppy was not a magical vet, she was the nearest Healer and Argus was at his wit’s end. "She has been acting strange for about a week now," he said. "It's like nothing I've ever seen before in any being, magical or not."
His concern for Mrs. Norris was justified. She would be following him around the castle as usual, trying to discover any truant mice wandering the corridors when suddenly she'd stop dead-still, looking just as if he had brought her back from a taxidermist. Initially the incidents would last only about half a minute, but with each passing day they were getting longer. Mrs. Norris now stood on the examination table still as a statue. It had been almost fifteen minutes this time. Suddenly she started moving again and appeared to be a bit surprised that she wasn't where she thought she should be. However, in the presence of Mr. Filch, she knew she was safe, and she rubbed up against the gnarled hand that reached out to her.
Madam Pomfrey shook her head. "Amazing! I've not seen anything like this either, Argus. Be sure to let me know if it happens again."
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At the same moment in Diagon Alley, the new editor-in-chief of the Daily Prophet Justin Finch-Fletchley was meeting with his chief photographer Colin Creevey. The office had a gentle breeze blowing in from the opened window. It was a beautiful September day and, through the window, a light noise rippled in from the street of shoppers.
Any observer from outside the window would have seen that both men went stone-still at the same moment. Justin came around shortly before Colin did, so he was the one to make the observation that the parchment, which a breeze had swept from his desk, in what seemed a split second ago, was already half-way across the room. He also noted that Colin had not moved for several seconds. Suddenly Colin spoke, continuing the comment he had been making when Justin first observed the parchment's shifting into a fall. "...phet could use a few more reporters to help fill the gap left by Rita's forced retirement."
"Colin, hold up a minute," Justin interrupted. "Something isn't right, here. Did you see that parchment fall off of my desk?"
"Oy! How did it get across the room so fast? Is it hexed?"
"So we both missed it. It had just fluttered off the desk, and the next instant it was across the room. The parchment moved, but you were still. Then you spoke, starting in mid-word. I've had moments recently where I feel a bit disoriented. The only thing I can remember it being similar to is..."
Colin finished the sentence for him. "...like something that happened to us at Hogwarts!"
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"Professor Granger!"
Hermione turned away from the board to see who had called her name. All of the students in her Transfiguration class were staring at her oddly. "Yes, what is it?" she said.
"Professor," said the young Creevey girl in the first row, "you turned to write something on the board, and you’ve been frozen there for almost a whole minute."
Hermione frowned. She hadn't felt anything, but the concern on the young girl's face was genuine. Perhaps it was time to dismiss the class and have a chat with Poppy. ‘Time to give the assignment before letting the students leave,’ she thought to herself.
Checking the time, she saw class was almost over anyway.
"I want a foot by tomorrow on the principles of Transfiguring inanimate objects. Class dismissed."
"I hope you feel better, Professor," Miss Creevey said as she left the classroom.
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"The child said it was a full minute that I was totally immobile," Hermione said to Poppy.
"Oh, dear! This is the second incident I have heard about today," Poppy told her. "Argus had Mrs. Norris here because of having similar spells. The last one was about fifteen minutes long."
"Mrs. Norris? What have I got in common with Mrs. Norris?" Hermione groused. A shocked look came into her eyes. She recalled a disturbing scene in one of the Hogwarts hallways. Bloody writing was on the wall. "The Basilisk!"
Poppy dashed to the Floo and threw in a pinch of Floo Powder. "Severus Snape," she said.
A moment later Hermione heard his voice coming through the Floo. "To what do I owe this pleasure, Poppy?"
"Can you come through now, Severus? We need to consult about something urgently."
"Give me two minutes and I will be there. I have a potion that is almost ready to simmer."
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A/N: Anything Goes Challenge Prompt: 90. It's years after the war and those who were petrified are starting to see that their petrification from the basilisk have unwanted side affects. What are they, and what do they do about it?
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Oh no! From Mrs. Norris' symptoms, I think it is safe to assume that Hermione and the rest of the paralyzed people will experience longer periods of paralysis! How awful! Looking forward to seeing where you take this!
I like the beginning of your story. Also, I'm glad to see that dreadful EWE will be ignored, lol. Looking forward to seeing the fated twosome reunited. So what has my favorite potions master been up to?
Response from FlittterKat (Reviewer)
After looking at the rest of the reviews, please say your muses haven't left the country! Please continue what promises to be a great story.
Response from FlittterKat (Reviewer)
After looking at the rest of the reviews, please say your muses haven't left the country! Please continue what promises to be a great story.
OMG I hope he can come up with something to help them. This is a brilliant take on this prompt. I hope you write more.
Ooh, I love the start. I really do hope that you will update it soon. I so very much want to see how this all ties together. I love a good mystery and this is starting out as a wonderful one.
this has been a very fascinating story i truly hope there is to be more
Encouraging -- I can see so many possibilities for both fun and disaster with this set-up. I hope you plan to continue. Good luck, JoAnne
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
The Muse is unpacking as we speak. Thanks for the review. :-)
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
The Muse is unpacking as we speak. Thanks for the review. :-)
Very interesting beginning. I cant wait to see what is causing this to happen to all the people, and why it seems to have varying degrees in each one.
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Glad you liked it. Thanks!!! :-D
Very nice start...what is causing the side effects?Look forward to more.
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Hee hee - that's for my muse and me to know and for you to wait for. (I'm so evil!) ;-D
Ooh how erie! Interesting how you are handling the prompt.
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
I hope I can work it out well. Glad you like it. :-D
Ooh, intriguing. I wonder what's going to happen next? Will the side effects worsen over time, too?
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Glad you like it - all things come to those who wait! But I'll try not to make you wait too long. :-D
Oh, this is a very promising start. I'll be following this story quite closely!
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
So glad you're enjoying it. Skipping off to continue writing... :-D
Brings a whole new meaning to the expression, "stoned!"
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Hahaha! how true! ;-D
Ooh, this is interesting.
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Hope so. Thanks for reviewing! :-D
Mmmm ... A very promising begining. Want some more please.
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
All things come to those who wait! :-D
This is a very promising start. I have bookmarked the story and I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Thank you. :-D
Ooooooh. Good start. Will be looking forward to more...
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Thanks! :-D
Great start. I will be bookmarking to folllow...
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Thanks for reviewing - I hope not to disappoint!
Interesting beginning.
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
I'm hoping for an interesting ending too. :-D
Oh wow - I felt so sorry for Mr. Filch in the movie when Mrs. Norris was originally petrified! Write more soon!
Response from klschmidt (Reviewer)
Me too! And I will. :-D
I'm so pleased that you're accepting this challenge, I thought it sounded so neat. Thanks for a good start. Interesting that Justin and Colin were struck at the same time. Oh! Please don't let Mrs. Norris die!-Wahoo
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
I make no promises, but I'm usually kind to animals, so ... :-D
This is very interesting (not quite the word I wanted, but my spelling is bad today!) I can't wait for the next part.
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Thanks, I'll try to keep it that way. :-D
Sounds exciting...looking forward to the next part.
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Thanks. :-D
This was great!
Response from klschmidt (Author of Stillness)
Thank you! Now can I keep it up? :-D