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Dragons in the Dungeon Chapter 1: Chapter One
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Dragons in the Dungeon

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Nine

10: Chapter Ten

11: Chapter Eleven

12: Chapter Twelve

13: Chapter Thirteen

14: Chapter Fourteen

Chapter One

Dragons in the Dungeon

Chapter 1 of 14

MsTree

This story is a sequel to Velvet Song's "Damsels and Dragons". Severus apparently has not conquered the curse after all, or is there something else going on?

Humor Romance Alternate Universe Friendship Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 34,800 Words 14 Chapters WIP
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Disclaimer: Harry Potter and associated characters belong to JKR. All else belongs to me.

Author’s Note: This is the sequel to Velvet Song’s “Damsels and Dragons”, which she allowed me to complete in her stead last year. I want to thank her for encouraging me to write this story, and noybate for being my beta. The story is complete, and I am hoping to post a chapter a week.

Chapter One

The wind rushed out over the hills, splitting itself in two to wind around obstacles in its path and, flowing back together on the other side, created eddies and currents that swept up dead leaves and light twigs to dance along before dropping them back to the ground in a different place from where they lay before.

The black dragon sat perched on the highest point of the wind’s current obstacle and watched the leaves and twigs in their dance. Spreading his wings wide, he toppled off the Astronomy Tower to soar, allowing the wind to catch him up under his wings, and joined in the dance.

Anyone watching—and there could not have been many, as it was after midnight and all within should have been in their beds—would have seen a large black shadow cross over the moon in its fullness and then dive, disappearing into the dark forest on the outskirts of the wide lawn that spread in front of the darkened castle.

However, there were at least two pairs of eyes watching the flight of the black dragon. One pair of eyes, yellow in colour, belonged to the brown and grey wolf who stood in the shadows at the edge of the forest, waiting. The other pair, black in colour, belonged to the half-giant who stood in the doorway of his hut, the light from his fireplace spilling out from behind him.

He sighed deeply—a combination of awe, delight, and sorrow—at the sight of the dragon soaring across the moon above him. “Merlin luv ye, Perfessor,” he whispered. “Perfessor Lupin’s waitin’ fer ye ta come an’ play wi’ ‛im. I ‛ope ‛ermione’s not watchin’, too. It’d break ‛er ‛eart, it would, after all she’s done fer ye.” Shaking his head forlornly, he stepped back into the hut and closed the door.

Meanwhile, in the castle, alone in her bed, a young witch tossed, turned, and twitched, as if she were also soaring in the wind. Suddenly, her eyes blinked open, and she sat up. “Severus?” She scrambled out of bed, pulling on a dressing gown as she pulled back her window curtains and pushed opened the window. “Severus!” she yelled, desperately seeking the black dragon. Her only answer: the howl of a wolf hunting in the Forbidden Forest. “Oh, Severus,” Hermione whispered into the wind.

§§§§§§§

Severus wandered into the Great Hall for breakfast the next morning, sat next to Hermione as had become his habit, and nodded sparingly to the other teachers at the table. He had a splitting headache, and his body felt like someone had Crucio’d him while he slept.

Hagrid grinned at him from the end of the single table used by the teachers in the summer and winked as if they shared a secret. “Did ye ‛ave a nice flight, Perfessor?” the half-giant asked with a big smile. “Ye and Perfessor Lupin must’ve ‛ad quite the night.”

“What the devil are you rattling on about, Hagrid?” Severus snarled. “I wasn’t flying anywhere last night. I was in my own bed.”

“But— but— I saw ye,” Hagrid stuttered. “Ye was flyin’ ‛cross the moon. I watched ye come from the ‛Stronomy Tower meself when I left Fang out ta do his bizness.”

“And I’m telling you—” Severus was interrupted by Minerva’s suddenly solemn voice.

“Severus? Is what Hagrid’s saying true?” Her questions rang out over a suddenly silent table. “Did you turn back into a dragon last night?” The other teachers looked over the table at him in confusion. Hadn’t they just gone through this?

Before Severus could answer the Headmistress’ questions, Remus limped his way into the Great Hall. “Good morning, everyone,” he whispered hoarsely. “Sorry about my voice. Seems I did some extra howling last night.” He grinned, then winced in pain. “Hermione, could I trouble you for a painkiller after breakfast?”

Hermione smiled wanly at the Transfiguration instructor. “I’ll join you in that,” she said. “I’m not feeling so great myself.”

Severus took a good look at the young Potions mistress. Her eyes were sunken in her head, and she had dark circles under her eyes as if she’d had little sleep. “Did you stay up all night watching for the dolt?” he asked crossly. “Remus is a big boy. I’m sure he’s used to taking care of himself.”

“No,” she snapped. “I stayed up all night watching out my window for you!”

“For me?” Severus was aghast. “I assure you, Madam Granger, I spent the night in my bed, in my room, in the dungeons. There was no need for you to look for me outside your window.”

“You know,” Remus said with some hesitation, “while I don’t always remember what I’m doing when I’m a wolf, even with the Wolfsbane—”

“Well, spit it out, man!” Severus snarled. “Some of us don’t have all morning.”

“Now, that’s harsh,” Harry protested from his place across the table. “He’s obviously had a hard night, and there’s still two more nights of the full moon to go.”

“Mr Potter, I am fully aware of how many nights it takes for the moon to turn full,” Severus said with a sneer. “You need not try to lecture me.”

“Enough, both of you,” Minerva said, scowling at the verbal duelling. “Remus, did something happen last night?” She turned to the werewolf courteously.

Remus cleared his throat. “As I was saying,” he said with a wry look at Severus’s scowl, “I may not remember everything, but I had the distinct impression that a dragon flew over my head last night. That’s not something I would forget in a hurry. Not after eight years of living with a dragon in the Forbidden Forest.”

Severus sputtered into his coffee. “That’s preposterous!” he said. “We beat the curse. I’m human again, and I’m going to stay human. Me, a dragon again,” he muttered into his cup.

“It’s not so preposterous,” Hermione said suddenly. “I felt you in my head, just like last time.” Everyone at the table stared at her in astonishment.

“Hermione, are you sure?” Lucius asked suddenly. “You weren’t dreaming all this?” Narcissa placed her hand on his arm and squeezed it tight.

“I’m sure, Lucius,” Hermione reassured him. “I was wide awake the rest of the night after I woke up, and I felt Severus in the back of my mind. Of course, he didn’t talk to me, but I felt him there.” She nodded emphatically.

Severus sat at the table, seemingly lost in thought as he listened to the conversation around him. Hermione was definitely showing signs of a lack of sleep; his head and body ached fiercely—he could probably use a pain-killer potion himself—and Remus and that dolt, Hagrid, had obviously seen something. Was there a small chance that—? He shook his head in denial, then groaned as his headache worsened.

Minerva frowned at the groan. “Severus, are you quite all right?” she asked with evident concern. “Did you need something?”

“A headache potion wouldn’t go amiss just now, Minerva,” he answered. “As to the accusations…” He scowled as Remus and Hagrid started blustering. “They might—I say might—have some basis in fact, if only because Hermione is stating the very same thing. I cannot say where I was last night if I was not in my bed, but I am certain I was not flying around the Forbidden Forest as a dragon. Other than that, I cannot say.”

Reaching over, he covered Hermione’s hand with his own, stroking it gently. “I do know,” he continued, “that I have missed the feeling of having Hermione in the back of my head as much as she apparently has missed me. If she was not dreaming last night, then something serious must have happened.”

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35 Reviews  |  8.2/10 Average

10/10

mick42

I hope Gaby will be ok.

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Keeeeeep reading (when the next chapters ate put up). :)

10/10

mick42

I must say I'm feeling a little sorry for Mr Diggory, he has no idea what he is walking into.

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Oh, you have NO idea.

10/10

mistresscosmos

I keep hoping for an update ;) . I just finished rereading all the available chapters

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Sorry, there's been some illness in my family with a protracted stay in the hospital for myself as well. I have Chapters 12 and 13 ready to be edited, but I have to psych myself into editing them. ^_^

Response from mistresscosmos (Reviewer)

Well you are missed. I hope you and your family feel better soon. I know what you mean about illness, I just had my cancer removed after two years of trying to get insurance and then get everything approved.

10/10

mick42

It would appear that Athair is a permanent part of Severus, I wonder if it will be possible to separate them without harming one or the other.

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

To quote one of my favourite authors: Keeeeeeep reading. ^_^

10/10

mick42

I wonder who tried to get through Severus' wards, it must be someone that has knowledge of his family. 

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

*whistles casually* Well, now, who do you think it was? ^_^

10/10

mick42

Athair has a mind of his own, and likes being close to Hermione, nothing but good can come of that. I really love little Marigold, she can stand up to Severus, and not many can say that. Can't wait to see what Hermione brings back from London.

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

As Severus stated, Marigold is all but mistress of the manor. As for Athair, who knows. ^_^

10/10

braye27

I can't wait to find out about this obdurate potion Hermione is working on.  I think it might prove useful with our Mr Bowles.But what I'm really chomping at the bit for is to see what Marbh-clah is like and what they can find in the library there!!!Beth

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

The estate was described briefly in the first story, but I do go into a little more detail here. Not much, though. After all, I believe in letting readers use their own imagination rather than my telling them what's what. ^_^

10/10

mick42

It would appear the law in the wizarding world is just as hard to understand, as it is in the muggle world. Looking forward to viseting the library, with Severus and Hermione.

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Laws is laws, no matter where you go. I had to study evidentiary law in college as part of my degree. Probably the hardest classes I had to take. ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Laws is laws, no matter where you go. I had to study evidentiary law in college as part of my degree. Probably the hardest classes I had to take. ^_^

10/10

braye27

I wonder... could this "other wizard" who Obliviated Albert Bowles have something to do with the curse-that-won't-go-away?  Could he have knowledge of what Voldemort did to Severus?  Could he be an undiscovered Death Eater?  There are soooooo many possibilities.Beth

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Aren't there, though. *very evil grin* ^_^

10/10

just harry

Oh the plot thickens.  It seems that someone wants Severus to suffer.  I'm sure that Hermione will solve this with the help of all their friends.  Great  chapter

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Appreciate the thanks and the support. ^_^

10/10

mick42

First Severus turning into a Dragon again, now a Ministry official obliviated, the plot is thickening nicely. 

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

*curtsies* Thank you very much. ^_^

0/10

MHaydn

Severus is most afraid of being a were-beast - like Remus.  Pansy appears competent and dedicated.  Perhaps the cynical nature of a lawyer suits her.  A school dragon is only one more reason for students not to be out of bed.  Given the metabolic requirements of dragons, Severus should be ravenous.  I was waiting for some wry commentary from Severus; "We'll have to schedule Potions (or DADA) for the afternoon."

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Severus, at the moment, is not teaching. He's been a dragon for the last eight years and others are teaching his classes. Lucius is the DADA teacher and Hermione teaches Potions. I imagine Minerva will find him a job, but it won't be one of those. ^_^

10/10

braye27

Who is this "other wizard" who doesn't want Severus' will overturned?  Mr Bowles was clearly placed under the Imperius curse - and then Obliviated!  Something wicked this way comes.I'm looking forward to the next chapter.Beth

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Not necessarily Imperiused, but convinced Severus is an imposter by a very fervent person. ^_^

10/10

braye27

Now you really have me confused!  Hummm... could it have something to do with Hermione since she was the subject of Severus' subconscious thoughts last night?  Could she have become an Animagus?  A dragon Animagus?  Inquiring minds want to know!Beth

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

All I can do is quote my favorite mainstream author (of which I have many): Keeeeeep reading! ^_^

10/10

braye27

Oh, my!  If it isn't really Severus taking nightly flights as a dragon, I can't imagine what -or who- it could be... unless someone else has been cursed with the same curse that Voldemort had used on him...  what's a wizard to do?  And what is Hermione going to do?Very nice beginning!Beth

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Thank you. I appreciate your continued interest in the story. ^_^

10/10

jadecadence

Interesting and original. Well-written too! I find no faults!

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Not so original, but thank you. Considering I used the jointly written story, Damsel and Dragon, as a springboard for this story, I'm happy to claim the interesting and well-written parts. ^_^

0/10

MHaydn

The first part adds a welcome extra layer which I think benefits the story although I do not know what the situation is or what Pansy's stake in the matter is. In the second part, the wizards did manage to identify the problem fairly quickly, didn't they?

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Part of the reason I encouraged people to read the first story. Pansy is now a lawyer and has been retained by Severus about overturning the will that left all his possessions to Hermione, which was part of the plot from the first story. ^_^

0/10

MHaydn

This chapter reminds of a drawing room scene in a detective story with its lines of inquiry, protestations of innocence, and various characters sniping at each other and reassuring each other. I keep thinking it is a difficult scene to write, but perhaps it wasn't for you.

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

I actually had fun with this chapter. For some reason, the dialogue just flowed, unlike other times when the characters don't want to cooperate and go their own direction, rather than following mine. ^_^

0/10

MHaydn

Haven't read the prequel, but this seems to stand on its own. A poetic and haunting first section followed by a scene that offers partial information, the story characters, and some relationship undercurrents.

(This editor will not let me leave a rating.)

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Thank you for your kind words. It's not really a prequel, but a full story which I used as a springboard for this story with Velvet Song's permission. If you get a little confused later in the story, I strongly encourage you to go back and read the earlier story. ^_^

10/10

just harry

Oh MsTree I have just read all three chapters to the sequel and found myself drawn right in to the story.  Great job Ilove the way you right Severus & Hermionie.  Real life has put me behind in my reading, but I'm glad Ihad your story to read. 

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Thank you. Chapter 4 is in the queue. Anyone's guess as to when our poor overworked admins will be able to get to it, but you'll have that to look forward to at least. ^_^

10/10

sunny33

Lucius is enjoying this entirely too much! :)

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Isn't he, though? I really enjoyed writing this sequel, especially later on. Keep reading and you'll see what I mean. ^_^

10/10

sunny33

Like I said.  Pot!  (and no-one will have any idea what I mean! LOL :)

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

I was referring to you torturing the characters by having the dragon thing not go away as planned! ;)

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

What good is a sequel if you don't involve elements from the original? ^_~

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

Besides, sev-as-dragon was kinda cute!

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Oh, it gets cuter. *walks away, whistling* ^_^

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

This isn't a farce! Well, not yet anyway. I'll let you decide as we get further into the story. ^_^

0/10

Isode

I had hoped the revealing spells would have worked, it would be great to be able to turn into a dragon at will.

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Wouldn't it, though? However, there are other factors at work. Keep reading to find out more. ^_^

10/10

mick42

I'm wondering, if this is left over from Voldermort's Tom Riddle's spell, or is something else at play. 

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

To quote my favorite mainstream author, "Keeeeeep Reading". ^_^

10/10

mick42

I am so glad to see, that you are continuing this lovely tale. Looking forward to more.

Response from MsTree (Author of Dragons in the Dungeon)

Thank you and thank Velvet Song for allowing me to use her characterizations and write a sequel. ^_^

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