Pretty in Pink
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KeppiehedA morning interlude with bottom!Snape in a pink nightie. Enjoy, you twisted souls who dare.
ReviewedDisclaimer: This all belongs to J.K. Rowling.
Warnings: slash, OOC, explicit sexual content, crossdressing, and bottom!Snape. I know: in my book, that needs a warning for squick.
Prompt: OOC, “never tickle a sleeping dragon.”
A/N: Winner of week#2 at Snarry_LDWS!
Something soft wedged against Harry's hip and woke him. He reached for the pink fabric in front of him. The silk was cool between his fingers; it slid around with pleasant compliance. Harry grabbed a handful, seeing how much he could bunch in his fist at once. Harry's breath caught as it slipped up a thigh, revealing lace. A panty-clad ass winked at him.
“You should know better than anyone to never tickle a sleeping dragon, lest you bear the consequences.”
Harry smirked. Severus was awake, then.
Severus rolled away and stretched, the nightgown revealing an impressive erection. “Ah, seems it's too late, then.”
With a speed that startled them both, Harry moved to straddle his lover's hips. He grabbed Severus' wrists and pinioned them above his head. “It's you who's woken a dragon. And now you're going to satisfy me.”
Severus groaned.
“Such an eager bottom. I'd be flattered that it's me you're moaning for like a whore, but I think it has something to do with those panties you have on.” Harry reached under the lingerie to stroke the hardness through the lace. “Am I right?”
Severus thrust his hips up, seeking more friction. The lace was wet with pre-come.
“Tell me I'm right,” Harry whispered, his own cock hard.
Severus tossed his head on the pillow. “I like the panties, but it's you, Harry. It's always you that does this to me,” he panted.
A few more strokes of Harry's hand, and he came hard. Harry thrust against Severus' stomach, the feel of the silk bringing him to his own completion.
Harry relaxed and moved a strand of dark hair off his lover's face. “It's always been you, too,” he whispered, before they drifted off to sleep again.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Pretty in Pink
9 Reviews | 6.0/10 Average
This is very different. I don't know if I can handle a Snape in pink lingerie.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
I understand. I had to write an OOC challenge, and it is definitely different! Thanks for giving it a try!
Oh my.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
I know, what can you say, right? Thanks for reading it! *laughs*
Hmmmmmm...I think you know that I don't care for this pair, but it is really well written, as always.Incidentally, it wasn't lost on me that the reason you didn't put Harry in pink panties is because this was labeled OOC, and you think that he wears them daily.I am quite pleased that you didn't take the dragon thing literally. I don't think they care much for pink lace.It is a testament to how big of a fan I am that I will say that I liked this (in a yikes, my brain is melting sort of way)Congrats on your win!!!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
*dies laughing* You're right! I have become accustomed to Harry wearing knickers. It's all so passe now. Actually, this was quite a challenge to write. I had a hard time with OOC. I spend all my time trying NOT to write it, that it was hard to go full-throttle. In my head, everything Snape said was with this really heavy lisp. That made it worse.Thanks for reading it, and I know I'm slowly bring you over to my way of thinking. that line is getting ever blurred, don't you think? *winks*
Oh dear... oh dear... runs away to find brain bleach and think of even more evil prompt for naughty authors. :P
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Dammit, quaffie's buggered off somewhere. How can I plot nasty prompts without her?
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
Well, if this hasn't cemented my status as someone who will write anything, I don't know what will!I have a feeling our quaffie is running scared! *winks*
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
But I know when she is due back... muhahaha!
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Ok. We have conferred. Draco and Dudley, the latter wearing striped pyjamas. Make it work! :0
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
*head spins*So, you two are requesting a fic with those two in it? Holy smokes, Dudley?A word of advice: if you don't pin me down a bit more, you might be surprised about what you get with that prompt ...
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Aha, no ducking out. Draco fancies Dudley, especially in striped PJs. Only Merlin and you know why. :P
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
*facepalm* That's going to be quite a story. *groans* ...
I think I wouldn't mind a pink claded ass Severus in my bed. I should manage to overcome the distaste of pink lace. *wink*
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
Well, he seemed to like it more than I thought he would! With that kind of enthusiasm, who wouldn't enjoy? *winks back*
OOHH, It's like a horrible traffic accident. You can't not look.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
Um ... thanks? *laughs* I know what you mean. Thanks for not looking away? And for the cute review.
Snape in pink lingerie? Not sure if it suits him. I suppose it depends on the shade of pink.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
It was powder pink, of course. Snape wouldn't slut it up in hot pink, come on. I wrote OOC, but not too OOC!*giggles*
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
Wouldn't powder pink be a bit insipid on a man like that?
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
Well, he thought it was demure. He was aiming for virginal, poor guy. He had no idea what shade would look right with his skin tone.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
I would like to make it known that, when Sunny said I had buggered off, I was not running away. I had actually gone to the hospital. Something to do with the brain dribbling from my nose after reading your stories. AND Draco & Dudley was her idea - I only supplied the pyjamas.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
Way to take responsibility for your obvious D/D fetish. No need to be shy! *snickers* You know there's only one thing to do with pajamas, stripes or not ... take them off. Right? *dies laughing*
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
Please put Dudley's PJs back on, I'm starting to feel nauseated already.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
Oh, HO! Your co-conspirator has now sealed the deal. Unless you can propse something new, it's on. And your names go on the dedication!
Anonymous
Okay, that was ... yuck.
But, you still write it well, Keppie!
*Goes to read a tech manual ... or a Popular Mechanics*
Author's Response: I know it isn't everyone's cup of tea. I was a little nervous myself. But I have to fit the prompt (or in The Payback, the EXTREMELY SPECIFIC prompter) in order to consider it a success. I need a disclaimer #2: stories written by author are not necessarily, and in fact are not usually, to the author's own preference. LOL!
Thanks for the kind words, anyway. I appreciate your open mind.
Not even I am that twisted ... I thought. Fact is, I found this rather funny :) *thumbs up*
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Pretty in Pink)
LOL! I was really nervous about writing Snape in a pink negligee. I figured I was going home in the competition, for sure! I'm glad you didn't flame me!Thanks for reading it!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
Would never flame anything that is labelled OOC. And yes, I *am* twisted enough to have found it funny.