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|ali (Anonymous )||1: Falling Hard|
|im just reading all your stuff now, but coming from someone involved in an age differnce thingamabob i can say your poem truly gets right down to how i feel at the bottom nd core of everything. very beautiful|
Author's Response: I'm very pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing!
|2009/04/12 - 21:48|
|Firewhisky (Signed )||1: Falling Hard|
"As you stroke my back, do you laugh?"
"How easy I fell for you, heavy on my back and hips I lay."
I like this, there's an allusion to being stabbed in the back and/or betrayed... or at least that's my take on it. Your poem also evokes (again, imho) the feeling of falling in love while also suspecting/knowing that the person in question is untrustworthy. Terrible feeling to fall in love first and realize the potentiality for pain after the fact.
This is about falling in love with someone who seems so perfect... almost too perfect so you begin to doubt.
|2007/05/17 - 14:59|
|Fairfield (Signed )||1: Falling Hard|
Interesting reversal of the young-old dilemma.
Good ideas in "no control over the capacity of my experience" and "private game with a timer on my heart."
Wished some of the lines scanned better.
Inspired me to a paraphrase which I will try to send to you.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad that you liked my poem and that it inspired you enough to write a paraphrase. I recieved your email and I really enjoyed it. Thank you for spending the time to write that and send it to me.
|2007/02/28 - 12:15|
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