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|Rhyme set in meter|
given in a caffeine rush
A real cup of Joe
I could not resist... I too worship coffee
|LOL You totally are addicted. :) ~smiles~|
Author's Response: Ya think? *snicker*
|i like it, very samurai with a western twist|
Author's Response: thank you!
|You have captured my feelings for the drink! It made me smile. Thanks for sharing!|
Author's Response: The world revolves around that drink IMHO. Can't live without it.
|Is it okay with you if I print that and put it up by the coffee maker at work?|
Author's Response: You go right ahead. *lol* And if you want another to tack up by the coffee maker (for those who need the more direct approach pre-coffee), try this one: http://www.thepetulantpoetess.com/viewstory.php?sid=26
|Nice poem, nasty drink!|
Author's Response: Bah! Please tell me you at least like chocolate. Anyway, if you don't drink coffee, there's only more for me!
sunny33's response: Mmm. Chocolate! That, you have to share!
Author's Response: Good girl. Although, that I actually stopped eating ... for now. I had this nasty habit of sitting with a box of See's (really, one of the best you can get in California) and eating 4 or 5 pieces before falling asleep. I stopped that, and maybe one of my pills sorta helped too, and I finally dropped the extra 10 pounds I just couldn't get rid of after I had Jenna (almost 6 years ago). So now, I know the trick, and actually, it's not "don't eat chocolate". It's "Don't eat it before bedtime." I relegate all the high fat content stuff to breakfast now.
|your poem reflects|
the addiction of many
i liked it a lot
Author's Response: a pleasing review
fortifies and gratifies
much like coffee does
|Cool. I'm feeling this one. Where would we be without our coffee? Probably in bed or (in my case) slouched over a till, yawning and snarling at custies. :D|
I may have to print this out and stick it on our staff crazy wall, if that's ok. I know several of my colleagues would appreciate this one.
Author's Response: More than okay. If it can make someone smile, that's the greatest compliment.
helshez's response: The printout is currently residing between the picture of the pirate dog and the picture of a man dressed as a giant willy. I think it brings a touch of class to the crazy wall, and a few of my fellow inmates have mentioned their agreement with your sentiments. Many thanks for aiding us in the fight against boredom!
Author's Response: "Inmates" ... yup, I can relate.
|i love this, even though i am not actually addicted myself and sometimes go for days without drinking any. shocking, i know! chocolate - now that's another story. this made me giggle, and i still haven't managed to stopped:
"i cry at the loss
why have you forsaken me
and crumble to dust"
will forward your poem to my bf, who i think will be able to relate all too well to the sentiments you've so eloquently expressed. :D|
Author's Response: And sadly ... my coffee maker is packed in a box ready to be moved, and I have (
unwillingly) given up chocolate in favor of weight loss. It works, but ... ouch.
kittylefish's response: i hope that box is clearly labeled for quick retrieval at the other end! me, i'm still waiting for the "eat chocolate and watch the pounds melt away" diet. ; )
kittylefish's response: wanted to let you know the bf loved your poem as i predicted, and i got to hear his interpretive reading of it, which was a treat. :D
Author's Response: That makes me smile. A guy who likes to read/hear poetry and/or fiction is hard to come by (in my experience). He sounds like quite a catch. :D
|I don't drink coffee, but I know the pull of caffeine. My husband drinks coffee and if he doesn't let he gets a headache and then I get a headache. lol|
|Oh, so true!|
I really feel like a cup or two now...
Author's Response: I am currently driinking fake coffee—Nescafe. Oh, it has caffeine, but ... the torture!!! (Cannot wait for moving day so my coffee machine can be unpacked.)
|Yea. It worked! Though I recommend changing the link title to "screenreader users," since this is what most people will be familiar with.|
Author's Response: Wonderful. I'm glad it works. I've changed the link to say Screenreader Users and Text-Based Browsers because there have been a few other readers whose browsers won't let them review as well. Thank you for helping and encouraging me to figure this out.
Author's Response: I also wanted to let you know that I have added a link so that you can respond to me here as well. When you follow the link to see my response here, there will be a link for screenreaders to respond. ;)
|Hey.^^ That's pretty clever, I liked it very much!|
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. You must be a coffee lover...
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