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Z0IKP4I9 (Anonymous )1: Gardiner and Shipe
Nicely written. You're so right about the cilmpexoty of the characters we create and spread around our pages. I'm particularly fond of the characters who begin to take on a little different role than we originally planned. Of course, my wife thinks I'm just another psychotic writer but, after 30+ years, she's learned to live with all those characters running through our lives. Best to you. Enjoyed this post very much.
2015/11/27 - 01:38

jadecadence (Signed )1: Gardiner and Shipe
This story was a fun read. There needs some fleshing out or at least simple statements as to why Draco took his own life and what happened from the 2nd half onwards. I think you got tired of fleshing out the story hence it was just a one-shot,.. nevertheless, it's better than anything i've ever done, so kudos!

Author's Response: Nah, I didn't get tired.  It was a little challenging writing this story within the time frame I was given at LiveJournal, but I did it!  I'm glad you enjoyed it! 
2014/09/05 - 10:36

articcat621 (Signed )1: Gardiner and Shipe
I loved this story. The ending is just lovelyy, and I was just so excited when the two of them are reunited. :)

Author's Response: Your review makes me sooo very happy!  I loved writing this, and hearing your comments encourages me to continue with this version of Severus and Hermione.
2014/09/02 - 08:54

MHaydn (Signed )1: Gardiner and Shipe

Well written.  Good plot.  Believable characters.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review 
2014/08/30 - 19:26

On his terms (Signed )1: Gardiner and Shipe
A very enjoyable read. A sad ending for Draco, but unfortunately quite believable. 

Author's Response: Draco is an interesting and complex character.  I've seen so many different variations of him in Fandom, most of them very believable.  Thanks for reviewing. I'm happy that you liked my story!
2014/08/28 - 12:03


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